Template:Did you know nominations/Danielle Fisher

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 ^talk 10:11, 18 March 2014 (UTC)

Danielle Fisher[edit]

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... that when Danielle Fisher finished climbing the Seven Summits at 20 years old, she became the youngest person to do so at the time?

Reviewed: Chris Luck

Created by 97198 (talk). Self nominated at 10:04, 15 March 2014 (UTC).

Hook under 200chars, line sourced, article length okay. My only concern is that both the article and source say Youngest American, while the hook says Youngest person. Change that to American and you've got it going. --Rsrikanth05 (talk) 06:14, 16 March 2014 (UTC)
ALT1: ... that when Danielle Fisher finished climbing the Seven Summits at the age of 20 years, she became the youngest American to do so at the time? .. Fixed grammar and claim. --Rsrikanth05 (talk) 07:36, 16 March 2014 (UTC)

You're right, thanks. Must've had a brain slip when I wrote the hook. 97198 (talk) 07:59, 16 March 2014 (UTC)