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The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:43, 18 July 2012 (UTC)

Microscopium[edit]

Created/expanded by Casliber (talk). Self nom at 01:42, 16 July 2012 (UTC)

This is pretty good, but the source refers to Light pollution rather than 'pollution' per-se (the page number is also p. 342, not p. 341). As such, I'd suggest amending the hook to something along the lines of: "... that the constellation of Microscopium can't be seen from locations affected by light pollution?" Nick-D (talk) 11:05, 16 July 2012 (UTC)
Yep/makes sense - done. Casliber (talk · contribs) 11:46, 16 July 2012 (UTC)
OK, this is good to go Nick-D (talk) 08:34, 18 July 2012 (UTC)