Template:Did you know nominations/SITI: An Iconic Exhibition of Dato’ Siti Nurhaliza

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The result was: promoted by Skr15081997 (talk) 14:52, 4 July 2014 (UTC)

SITI: An Iconic Exhibition of Dato' Siti Nurhaliza

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~~... that SITI: An Iconic Exhibition of Dato' Siti Nurhaliza was the first of its kind in Malaysia, where the main subject of the exhibition is based on a single celebrity?~~

Created by Syfuel (talk). Self nominated at 09:04, 18 June 2014 (UTC).

Good to Go! Article is over 3000 characters, submitted within time limit, and both parts of hook verified online. It is neutral, cites sources with adequate inline citations and is free of close paraphrasing issues, copyright violations and plagiarism. QPQ not necessary (this time).--Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:37, 20 June 2014 (UTC)

Thanks! But can I add one more word to the hook to correctly cite the source? Though she’s not the first (third actually), she’s actually the first female celebrity to receive such treatment by an art gallery in Malaysia. Therefore, I would like to amend the hook and add the word "among". So, the new hook would be:

ALT1: ... that SITI: An Iconic Exhibition of Dato' Siti Nurhaliza was among the first of its kind in Malaysia, where the main subject of the exhibition is based on a single celebrity?

Thank you for your time. :) SyFuel ^Ignite _Burned 16:51, 20 June 2014 (UTC)

Needs a new review. --Orlady (talk) 17:40, 23 June 2014 (UTC)

Review of ALT1: Above review taken on trust. ALT1 is acceptable and short enough at 173 characters, and checks out with online citation #1. Good to go. --Storye book (talk) 17:24, 3 July 2014 (UTC)