Template:Did you know nominations/Salt deformation
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The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 02:03, 25 December 2018 (UTC)
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Salt deformation[edit]
Rock salt in blue deforms and flows upwards under pressure.
- ... that rock salt is a very weak rock, and it flows under stress? Source: https://www.nature.com/articles/324554a0
- Reviewed: Green's law
- Comment: part of Regional geology class at HKU
Moved to mainspace by Myip003 (talk). Nominated by Graeme Bartlett (talk) at 23:58, 19 November 2018 (UTC).
@Myip003 and Graeme Bartlett: Very thorough work! There are a few issues to work out but they are minor. I'd say this is very close to Good Article status if these issues are dealt with, and I'd encourage a nomination for that status.
- New and long enough, Earwig detects no copyvios, QPQ done. I changed the wikilinks in the hook to emphasize the article is specifically about the deformation. Good job on the original images!
- A couple of paragraphs lack citations, and a lot don't have citations at the very end of the paragraph, making it unclear what the final sentence(s) are cited to.
- Orphan banner needs to be dealt with.
- I doubt that caption of the lead image is accurate: pure rock salt would be colorless, and the original caption (on the Flickr page) does not claim that this is a pure sample.
- It looks like there are a lot of primary research articles used as sources; it is generally better to rely on review articles but this is beyond the scope of a DYK review so it's okay for now.
- Antony–22 (talk⁄contribs) 04:32, 28 November 2018 (UTC)
- Are the issues fixed? @Graeme Bartlett @Myip003? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Vincent60030 (talk • contribs) 08:10, 15 December 2018 (UTC)
- @Graeme Bartlett@Antony-22 I have added the citations, checked at the orphan banners and modified the caption for the lead image, I also added two diagrams explaining the deformation mechanism at a micro scale.
- Myip003 (talk) 17:09, 19 December 2018 (UTC)
- It looks to me that all these issues are addressed. Graeme Bartlett (talk) 23:40, 19 December 2018 (UTC)
