Template:Did you know nominations/Sei Lob und Ehr dem höchsten Gut, BWV 117

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The result was: promoted by — Crisco 1492 (talk) 14:43, 4 June 2013 (UTC)

Sei Lob und Ehr dem höchsten Gut, BWV 117[edit]

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... that the Bach cantata Sei Lob und Ehr dem höchsten Gut, BWV 117, includes "the palpitations of an excited heartbeat"?

Reviewed: David Jay Brown

5x expanded by Nikkimaria (talk). Self nominated at 13:57, 28 May 2013 (UTC).

I suggest clarifying what the "Sei Lob und Ehr dem höchsten Gut, BWV 117" in the hook so the reader can have a better understanding. At first glance I thought it was some kind of German automobile :) Proudbolsahye (talk) 21:21, 28 May 2013 (UTC)

Done. Nikkimaria (talk) 21:58, 28 May 2013 (UTC)

Nomination still needs a full review, now that hook is fixed. BlueMoonset (talk) 15:11, 2 June 2013 (UTC)
- Article expanded 5x, long enough, well cited; hook short enough, interesting enough, and cited online. Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 02:11, 3 June 2013 (UTC)