The City on the Edge of Forever: Revision history

22 June 2024

• curprev 21:5721:57, 22 June 2024‎ Sir Rhosis talk contribs‎ 86,395 bytes −551‎ →‎Writing: removed a bunch of uncited asides and irrelevancies undo

5 June 2024

• curprev 03:3003:30, 5 June 2024‎ StarHOG talk contribs‎ 86,946 bytes −44‎ why are repeat broadcast dates springing up in all these episodes? How is that notable? Should we add a ticker that counts up every few seconds on the amount of times it has been re-aired, re-broadcast, or streamed? undo

4 June 2024

• curprev 20:0020:00, 4 June 2024‎ 2a0a:ef40:277:ff01:b090:1457:cf1b:6603 talk‎ 86,990 bytes +5‎ No edit summary undo

1 May 2024

• curprev 22:5222:52, 1 May 2024‎ Josapr talk contribs‎ m 86,985 bytes +1‎ Spelling error corrected undo Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

8 April 2024

• curprev 20:4720:47, 8 April 2024‎ Wiltonhall talk contribs‎ 86,984 bytes +2‎ →‎Plot: changed "injured" to "near death" Sulu because the defiance of death and destiny is the them at the very core of the episode. Recounting it merely as "injured" overlooks this important moment, which then sets into motion the entire drama - McCoy's accident, the change of history, and the confrontation with Keeler's destiny. undo
• curprev 20:4420:44, 8 April 2024‎ Wiltonhall talk contribs‎ 86,982 bytes −12‎ changed "proper timeline" to "history." History is restored, and yes it is restored in a way that brings back the Enterprise, but the word "proper" is too strong and is a critical interpretation, not consistent with the episode's haunting uncertainty if it /was/ the proper choice or not. Remember the Guardian tells Spock his science is very crude, so following Spock's admonition to kill Keeler is /not/ established as "proper" by any but a superficial reading. So just "history" is consistent/ undo

7 April 2024

• curprev 20:2620:26, 7 April 2024‎ Zeng8r talk contribs‎ 86,994 bytes +35‎ cn undo
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31 March 2024

• curprev 00:3100:31, 31 March 2024‎ BD2412 talk contribs‎ m 86,703 bytes −4‎ clean up following page moves, replaced: (season 1) → season 1 (3) undo Tag: AWB

30 March 2024

• curprev 13:2113:21, 30 March 2024‎ 202.160.36.16 talk‎ 86,707 bytes +8‎ →‎Writing undo

16 March 2024

• curprev 12:2212:22, 16 March 2024‎ Mindmatrix talk contribs‎ m 86,699 bytes 0‎ Reverted edit by 2600:6C40:700:1D5:7C11:51E2:8E7A:C150 (talk) to last version by Typeractive undo Tag: Rollback
• curprev 05:4505:45, 16 March 2024‎ 2600:6c40:700:1d5:7c11:51e2:8e7a:c150 talk‎ 86,699 bytes 0‎ →‎Development of the teleplay undo Tag: Reverted

7 March 2024

• curprev 18:3818:38, 7 March 2024‎ Typeractive talk contribs‎ 86,699 bytes +1‎ I worded it better. undo
• curprev 18:3518:35, 7 March 2024‎ Typeractive talk contribs‎ 86,698 bytes +14‎ I removed someone's personal opinion from the plot summary. undo
• curprev 16:2216:22, 7 March 2024‎ 103.87.94.140 talk‎ 86,684 bytes +101‎ No edit summary undo Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

3 March 2024

• curprev 05:3505:35, 3 March 2024‎ Wiltonhall talk contribs‎ 86,583 bytes +49‎ Added the important detail that Kirk does not answer the question if he undo
• curprev 05:3305:33, 3 March 2024‎ Wiltonhall talk contribs‎ 86,534 bytes +106‎ Crucially, it is /not/ established in the episode that Spock's admonition that Keller must die was the right choice - that is what makes this episode so gut wrenching and haunting. Because if you can look into the future and see the results of your choices being the opposite of what you intend, how can Kirk know saving the Enterprise timeline /itself/ ultimately ends in good? The unedited version falsely forecloses this reading, which is clearly indicated by Kirk's silence and other plot clues. undo

10 February 2024

• curprev 20:3120:31, 10 February 2024‎ 206.205.66.222 talk‎ 86,428 bytes 0‎ →‎Initial pitch and outlines: Proper punctuation. Proper use of "the." undo Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

30 January 2024

• curprev 17:0817:08, 30 January 2024‎ Cbron2003 talk contribs‎ 86,428 bytes +351‎ →‎Legacy undo

16 January 2024

• curprev 00:4700:47, 16 January 2024‎ Tom-1674 talk contribs‎ m 86,077 bytes −4‎ bisected run-on sentence undo

3 January 2024

• curprev 20:0620:06, 3 January 2024‎ Musiclover talk contribs‎ 86,081 bytes −334‎ →‎Plot: made it a bit more concise undo

28 December 2023

• curprev 16:5516:55, 28 December 2023‎ 2601:194:480:d3d0:b4f8:59f7:1287:3bfe talk‎ 86,415 bytes −207‎ →‎Guardian of Forever: Fallout 2 reference is irrelevant, nothing else in the section mentions references in non star trek media. undo Tags: Manual revert Mobile edit Mobile web edit

14 December 2023

• curprev 13:2813:28, 14 December 2023‎ Mindmatrix talk contribs‎ m 86,622 bytes −1‎ Reverted edit by 67.70.94.177 (talk) to last version by 2804:14C:109:933E:F460:8381:1463:9195 undo Tags: Rollback Reverted
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4 December 2023

• curprev 09:5809:58, 4 December 2023‎ 2804:14c:109:933e:f460:8381:1463:9195 talk‎ 86,622 bytes +207‎ →‎Guardian of Forever undo Tag: Reverted

1 December 2023

• curprev 15:4315:43, 1 December 2023‎ Bensin talk contribs‎ m 86,415 bytes +8‎ →‎Direction and casting: links undo

30 November 2023

• curprev 23:3123:31, 30 November 2023‎ KinoFan2021 talk contribs‎ m 86,407 bytes 0‎ Undid revision 1187709949 by KinoFan2021 (talk) undo
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19 October 2023

• curprev 16:1916:19, 19 October 2023‎ Srich32977 talk contribs‎ 86,227 bytes −155‎ Cleaned up using AutoEd Adding/improving reference(s) undo

16 October 2023

• curprev 13:2813:28, 16 October 2023‎ 2603:7000:b900:8226:5dc4:5639:1bc9:e3b8 talk‎ 86,382 bytes +56‎ Fixed grammar undo Tags: canned edit summary Mobile edit Mobile app edit
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4 October 2023

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• curprev 23:1023:10, 4 October 2023‎ 208.77.56.242 talk‎ 86,315 bytes +4‎ →‎Non-canon comics and computer games: grammar fix undo
• curprev 23:0923:09, 4 October 2023‎ 208.77.56.242 talk‎ 86,311 bytes +4‎ →‎Non-canon novels and short stories: grammar fix undo

23 September 2023

• curprev 01:3001:30, 23 September 2023‎ Wiltonhall talk contribs‎ 86,307 bytes −3‎ →‎Plot: Clearly a stone ring, not an archway. Important because of the symbolism of the dharma, wheel of karma etc. undo

18 September 2023

• curprev 23:3023:30, 18 September 2023‎ Wiltonhall talk contribs‎ 86,310 bytes −2‎ →‎Plot: Removed "delusional" because the point of the episode McCoy may not actually be mad in trying to save Keeler. undo
• curprev 23:1823:18, 18 September 2023‎ Wiltonhall talk contribs‎ 86,312 bytes +23‎ →‎Plot: Replaced "huge dose" with "overdose" as episode does not state "overdose." Added quotes about what McCoy says because crucial to the plot's questioning who is really mad: Kirk who allows Keeler to die or McCoy who tries to save her. undo
• curprev 23:1123:11, 18 September 2023‎ Wiltonhall talk contribs‎ 86,289 bytes +5‎ →‎Plot: Removed "delusional and paranoid" because it interprets the episode rather than describes. it. To the others McCoy seems delusional and paranoid, but as we will see, the episode suggests McCoy, in his ranting, may in fact be the only sane one - Spock and Kirk do actually plan a murder. undo
• curprev 23:0823:08, 18 September 2023‎ Wiltonhall talk contribs‎ 86,284 bytes +21‎ →‎Plot: Removed "With history restored," because one important point is that there are multiple histories, and it would be more accurate to say "with their preferred history restored", but this is awkward, so removed it entirely and just added ", where they find the Enterprise is restored." to the end as it accurately described the episode rather than adding there is one History to restore, which is not found in the episode." undo

22 August 2023

• curprev 15:2815:28, 22 August 2023‎ 96.232.180.121 talk‎ 86,263 bytes +21‎ →‎Plot undo
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20 August 2023

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29 May 2023

• curprev 19:4219:42, 29 May 2023‎ SporkBot talk contribs‎ m 86,254 bytes −80‎ Remove template per TFD outcome undo

30 April 2023

• curprev 15:1115:11, 30 April 2023‎ Onel5969 talk contribs‎ m 86,334 bytes −5‎ clean up, typo(s) fixed: a endless → an endless (2) undo Tag: AWB

4 April 2023

• curprev 17:0517:05, 4 April 2023‎ Typeractive talk contribs‎ 86,339 bytes −4‎ I simplified the plot summary in the introduction undo