Hello, Abbie.dodz!
Welcome to Wikipedia! I've seen you at the
Female sexual arousal disorder,
Hypoactive sexual desire disorder and
Anorgasmia articles, and have tweaked some of your edits. I've also seen that you are planning on creating a Sexual Interest/Arousal Disorder article, as seen
here,
here,
here, and at your sandbox:
User:Abbie.dodz/sandbox. However, like I noted with
this edit, since it is only a proposed addition to the
DSM-5 and largely overlaps with existing articles, I'm not sure that there should be a Wikipedia article on it; I'll ask elsewhere about that. In the meantime, don't feel discouraged from creating it; whether or not it should be a standalone article can always be assessed later. I'm also not sure if you are working in these areas as a project assigned by a teacher or just to improve these articles, and create a new article about it, on your own accord, but I welcome you all the same and offer the following advice: See
WP:Manual of Style. Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style#Capital letters, you need to make sure that headings are not inappropriately capitalized. Also, per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style#Section headings, "Headings should not refer redundantly to the subject of the article, or to higher-level headings, unless doing so is shorter or clearer. (
Early life is preferable to
His early life when
his refers to the subject of the article; headings can be assumed to be about the subject unless otherwise indicated.)" Also use
WP:REFPUNCT (punctuation before, not after, references) and avoid
WP:WHITE SPACES (one or more extra white gaps between a section). In addition to the guideline links above, I believe that you will benefit from clicking on some or all of the tutorial, guideline and policy links below, which will help you familiarize yourself with aspects of Wikipedia that you are unfamiliar with or need to better familiarize yourself with. If you have any questions, you can ask me on my talk page, or place
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Flyer22 (
talk)
05:34, 31 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
