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Your submission at Articles for creation: Joseph Daley (jazz musician and composer) (December 25)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by 1997kB was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage (not just mere mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of music-related topics, the golden rule and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners and Help:Introduction to referencing/1), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

The comment the reviewer left was:

The sources provided are just mentions and don't cover subject in depth. To claim notability at least three sources are necessary, which cover subject in significant depth. Also you need to remove all the external links from draft as per WP:EXT and please see WP:MOS.

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─ 1997 kB 03:49, 25 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Blackflute, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! ─ 1997 kB 03:49, 25 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Joseph Daley (jazz musician and composer) has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Joseph Daley (jazz musician and composer). Thanks! Theroadislong (talk) 18:24, 28 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Joseph Daley (jazz musician and composer) has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Joseph Daley (jazz musician and composer). Thanks! Legacypac (talk) 00:33, 9 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Joseph Daley (jazz musician and composer) (February 24)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Nerd1a4i was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage (not just mere mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of music-related topics, the golden rule and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners and Help:Introduction to referencing/1), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

The comment the reviewer left was:

I would suggest adding more references. Also, I'd point out that there are some formatting issues - you have a duplicate quote, and I'd recommend looking at WP:MOS. Also ask for help on how to format your discography and such.

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Nerd1a4i (talk) 21:35, 24 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Joseph Daley (jazz musician and composer) (June 3)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Bradv was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage (not just mere mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of people, the golden rule and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners and Help:Introduction to referencing/1), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

The comment the reviewer left was:

The first two sections of this article are entirely unsourced.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Brad v 14:31, 3 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]