User talk:Chemfreak94
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:01, 16 October 2015 (UTC)
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This article is a complete disjointed train wreck in my opinion. It is an excellent opportunity for you to step and really show me what you got. That section with the genes and sequence alignment is just citation fishing by someone, but note that deleting will just upset them. It can however be moved down somewhere more appropriate. This one needs a fresh outline. I would start there. Reorganize the sections from that nice starting paragraph to a list and describes the different types and structures found in nature. You can then get more complicated leading up to that section with the genes if that person does not slam you when you delete it. then the clinical significance with maybe adding some genetic diseases then the applications after that. A major rewrite is warranted. I would copy the whole thing over to my sandbox reorganize it and put i back to see what people say then do one section at a time after that. good luck! you have a good one. Jparcoeur (talk) 15:52, 30 October 2015 (UTC)