User talk:DohaShilleh

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Membrane Models (December 11)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by LaMona was:

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LaMona (talk) 17:43, 11 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! DohaShilleh, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering or curious about why your article submission was declined please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! LaMona (talk) 17:43, 11 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Speedy deletion nomination of Electrical Excitability[edit]

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Draft:Membrane Models concern[edit]

Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Membrane Models, a page you created, has not been edited in 5 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

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Copy and pasting[edit]

We run "copy and paste" detection software on new edits. One of your edits appear to be infringing on someone else's copyright. See also Wikipedia:Copy-paste. We at Wikipedia usually require paraphrasing. If you own the copyright to this material please follow the directions at Wikipedia:Donating copyrighted materials to grant license. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 08:10, 25 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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More concerns[edit]

You added "A decade later, a second significant advance came through the work of Irving Langmuir. He studied the behavior of purified phospholipids by dissolving them in benzene and layering samples of the benzene-lipid solution onto a water surface. As the benzene evaporated, the molecules were left as a lipid monolayer." https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Membrane_models&type=revision&diff=685512040&oldid=685490550

Ref says "A second important advance came about a decade later through the work of Irving Langmuir, who studied the behavior of purified phospholipids by dissolving them in benzene and layering samples of the benzene-lipid solution onto a water surface. As the benzene evaporated, the molecules were left as a lipid film one molecule thick, i.e., a "monolayer." [1]

It appears your edits are very close paraphrasing. What do we do to fix this? Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 08:31, 25 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

And more yet[edit]

This edit [2]

Appears to be from here [3]. Note this is a historical link that shows this version came before your. Looks like all your edits will need to be removed :-( Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 08:38, 25 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Membrane Models (May 25)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by 333-blue was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the general guideline on notability and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

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333 -blue 14:01, 25 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Refs[edit]

Okay. You also need to make you references clearer. One ref per paragraph at least if that ref covers the whole paragraph. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 21:59, 25 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks @Doc James: for taking the time to point out these issues to the students. --Fjmustak (talk) 01:44, 29 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Membrane Models[edit]

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. 1989 (talk) 03:17, 14 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]