User talk:Dvijai
Yoni massage
[edit]Hi Dvijai,
I undid your edit to the article Yoni massage for two different reasons.
First, the language was unclear: I could not clearly tell what was meant by "briefed" - does this mean that the client's brief often includes this specification? The phrase "The Therapists for yoni massage are used to be cross gender" is also very hard to understand. Does it mean that it can be done by men and women? Then the gender of the therapist is connected to the therapeutic principle (note spelling), while from the text it seems that the location of the massage, and not the sex of the therapist is relevant to this statement.
Second, the source you gave was not a reliable source. It was not given as a reference, but linked into the text, and it seemed to be chosen to promote the business itself.
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Welcome!
[edit]Hello, Dvijai, and welcome to Wikipedia. We appreciate encyclopedic contributions, but some of your recent contributions seem to be advertising or for promotional purposes. Wikipedia does not allow advertising. For more information on this, please see:
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