User talk:Jamma12345

December 2023

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Thank you. ClueBot NG (talk) 03:02, 15 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Love Motels in Taiwan has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Love Motels in Taiwan. Thanks! (t · c) buidhe 08:28, 30 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Love Motels in Taiwan (February 2)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Tutwakhamoe was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Bolded text are reserved for the opening sentence and should not be used to emphasize words later in the article. Instead of being an introductory description of the topic, the lede section is too short and too subjective, and lacks citation for the type of claim it provided (see MOS:LEAD on how the lede should be written). The style of writing in the rest of the article does not seem neutral enough to be accepted. The Youtube video should not be used as a source here as per WP:RS/P.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Love Motels in Taiwan and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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Tutwakhamoe (talk) 13:33, 2 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Jamma12345! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Tutwakhamoe (talk) 13:33, 2 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]