User talk:Lmciszak
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[edit]From WP:MED. We look forwards to your efforts to improve content on Wikipedia. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 05:04, 2 April 2014 (UTC)
DSM-5?
[edit]Hi Lmciszak, http://dsm.psychiatryonline.org//content.aspx?bookid=556§ionid=41101783 might be worth a look to see what DSM5 is saying about dementia. Emwhitaker (talk) 20:46, 2 April 2014 (UTC)
Hi Fellow UCSF Wikipedian
[edit]Hey, I'm one of the students who took the course last time it was offered. Just wanted to offer any support/help I could provide. Feel free to message me on my talk page or it shouldn't be too hard to figure out my UCSF email. Emhawkins (talk) 20:12, 10 April 2014 (UTC)
A few issues
[edit]- We have a recommended ordering of sections at WP:MEDMOS. Thus changing the ordering of sections is against our guidelines.
- We do not link terms in our headings
- We use very few capitals (it is vascular dementia not Vascular Dementia)
- We typically use the term person rather than patient as we are writing for the general population
- Please do not create empty headings
- We are not a how too guide thus a sentence like "Mild Cognitive Impairment versus Normal Aging: How to Tell the Difference?" is not the correct writing style.
- Additionally we write in prose most of the time rather than with lists.
I know this is a lot to take in. Maybe try with some smaller edits. Best Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 20:22, 18 April 2014 (UTC)
- There is still a lot wrong with your additions. We need page numbers for the book you are using. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 21:04, 24 April 2014 (UTC)
- And the section headings should only have the first word capitalized. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 22:27, 24 April 2014 (UTC)
- There is still a lot wrong with your additions. We need page numbers for the book you are using. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 21:04, 24 April 2014 (UTC)
Removing systematic reviews
[edit]Why did you remove two systematic reviews in this edit [1]? Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 22:32, 24 April 2014 (UTC)
- But yes Wikipedia does take some time to figure out. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 22:37, 24 April 2014 (UTC)
Thanks for fixing the caps. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 01:38, 25 April 2014 (UTC)