User talk:Lombardes

October 2022

Hello, and thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia. This is just a note to let you know that I've moved the draft that you were working on to Draft:ONWARD Medical N.V., from its old location at User:Lombardes/sandbox. This has been done because the Draft namespace is the preferred location for Articles for Creation submissions. Please feel free to continue to work on it there. If you have any questions about this, you are welcome to ask me on my talk page. Thank you. I dream of horses (Contribs) (Talk) 02:53, 9 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you! I was quite confused about the draft submission process. I ended up copy-pasting the article I had created in Lombardes/sandbox to a draft article which I submitted. Does this mean there are 2 duplicate (but slightly different...) articles submitted for review? Lombardes (talk) 07:44, 10 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

So I see that the article is now a draft that has not yet been submitted. What happened to the draft I did submit? Lombardes (talk) 08:07, 10 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Onward Medical (October 13)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by DGG was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Onward Medical and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

DGG ( talk ) 00:02, 13 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Lombardes! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! DGG ( talk ) 00:02, 13 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hi DGG, as this is my first article attempt, I would appreciate help with understanding what needs to be changed for this article to be accepted. I can guess that maybe some of the sources where not acceptable? Can you give me some guidance? What sources in the article don't pass muster?

I believe the company is notable in that they look set to bring out the first device that will enable paraplegics to live a more normal life, e.g. not fainting multiple times a day.

Your feedback is appreciated! Lombardes (talk) 08:07, 18 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: ONWARD Medical N.V. (October 19)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Bonadea was:

This appears to be a duplicate of another draft, Onward Medical. Please focus on one of the drafts.

If you would like to continue working on this submission, go to Draft:ONWARD Medical N.V. and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

bonadea contributions talk 06:37, 19 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Onward Medical (February 10)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by CNMall41 was:

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just brief mentions about the subject or routine announcements)
reliable
secondary
strictly independent of the subject

Make sure you add references that meet all four of these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please see WP:ORGCRIT.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Onward Medical and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

CNMall41 (talk) 10:07, 10 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:Onward Medical

Hello, Lombardes. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Onward Medical, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again or request that it be moved to your userspace.

If the page has already been deleted, you can request it be undeleted so you can continue working on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 11:01, 13 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]