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Happy editing! Peaceray (talk) 17:15, 22 February 2024 (UTC)
March 2024
[edit] Hello, I'm Samf4u. An edit you recently made to Lobengula seemed to be a test and has been removed. If you want more practice editing, the sandbox is the best place to do so. If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you. Samf4u (talk) 23:04, 9 March 2024 (UTC)
- Hello. The edit was not a test. The “sentence” beginning ‘Although,…’ is clearly ungrammatical and does not make sense. ‘Although’ should introduce a subordinate clause with a comma at the end of the clause. As it stands, there are three main clauses, but the second and third are NOT coordinated. You require a coordinator, such as ‘and’ or ‘but’. Finally, it is not clear WHAT his subjects found out. The rest of the article is acceptable. Why is only this sentence so flawed. I repeat, my edit was not a ‘test’. Thank you. Richcomment (talk) 21:46, 15 April 2024 (UTC)