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AfC notification: Draft:Thomas Stanley (clergyman) has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Thomas Stanley (clergyman). Thanks! Robert McClenon (talk) 01:55, 2 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Dear Robert, Resubmitting with I hope properly formatted references so you will be able to approve it now. Simon Daniell Simon Daniell SJND (talk) 09:45, 8 April 2019 (UTC)10.45, 8 April 2019[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Eyam Parish Church has been accepted

Eyam Parish Church, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.
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— Stevey7788 (talk) 18:27, 2 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Dear Stevey, Thank you for your comments which I hope I have now corrected to your satisfaction and publication. The current Wikipedia article on the church is exceedingly scant on information and suboptimal and not up to normal Wikipedia standards. Please note that this is a replacement for the current article 'St Lawrence's Church, Eyam'. Regards, Simon Daniell SJND (talk) 12:30, 8 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Eyam Parish Church moved to draftspace

An article you recently created, Draft:Eyam Parish Church, has been moved back to draft space. In it's current condition it is not ready for the mainspace. Most of the article is uncited, and footnotes need to be provided for every assertion in the article. Commentary needs to be removed (such as "current congregation are very keen...", and article needs to be written in a neutral tone. Sentences should never end in an exclamation point in an encyclopedia article, for example. Onel5969 ^{TT me} 13:29, 4 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Dear Onel, Thank you for your comments which I hope I have now corrected to your satisfaction and publication. The current Wikipedia article on the church is exceedingly scant on information and suboptimal. Please note that this is a replacement for the current article 'St Lawrence's Church, Eyam'. Regards, Simon Daniell SJND (talk) 12:26, 8 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Eyam Parish Church has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Eyam Parish Church. Thanks! SITH (talk) 13:40, 10 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Eyam Parish Church (May 1)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Theroadislong was:

Thank you for your submission, but the subject of this article already exists in Wikipedia. You can find it and improve it at St Lawrence's Church, Eyam instead.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Eyam Parish Church and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Eyam Parish Church, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{db-self}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
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Theroadislong (talk) 16:11, 1 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, SJND! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Theroadislong (talk) 16:11, 1 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Thomas Stanley (clergyman) (June 15)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by DGG was:

This submission reads more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Submissions should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research. Please write about the topic from a neutral point of view in an encyclopedic manner.

The comment the reviewer left was:

This is written as an essay. WP is not a place for original interpretation. Rather, it gives the historical facts according to reliable WP:Secondary sources, citing whatever may be the interpretation in standard histories of the period. Itavoids the sort of laufdatory language used in the primary sources for biographies of this sort, and is written in a plain descriptive style. DGG ( talk ) 04:26, 15 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Thomas Stanley (clergyman) and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Thomas Stanley (clergyman), click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{db-self}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
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DGG ( talk ) 04:26, 15 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Eyam Parish Church concern

Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Eyam Parish Church, a page you created, has not been edited in 5 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

If your submission is not edited soon, it could be nominated for deletion. If you would like to attempt to save it, you will need to improve it.

You may request Userfication of the content if it meets requirements.

If the deletion has already occured, instructions on how you may be able to retrieve it are available at WP:REFUND/G13.

Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 00:16, 20 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Eyam Parish Church

Hello, SJND. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Eyam Parish Church".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}}, {{db-draft}}, or {{db-g13}} code.

If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia! CptViraj (📧) 08:44, 2 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Thomas Stanley (clergyman) concern

Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Thomas Stanley (clergyman), a page you created, has not been edited in 5 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

If your submission is not edited soon, it could be nominated for deletion. If you would like to attempt to save it, you will need to improve it.

You may request Userfication of the content if it meets requirements.

If the deletion has already occured, instructions on how you may be able to retrieve it are available at WP:REFUND/G13.

Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 01:22, 16 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Thomas Stanley (clergyman)

Hello, SJND. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Thomas Stanley".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}}, {{db-draft}}, or {{db-g13}} code.

If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia! HasteurBot (talk) 04:01, 16 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]