User talk:Shelleywise

Primary Care Physician Page Updates

The purpose of edits was to enhance the existing page. Namely, the sections improved upon and/or added include:

Maldistribution - added a description of the term and prominent causes of maldistribution
Declining Numbers - included a section to display the severity of the issue
Role in the health care system - included a description of PCPs in the U.S.
PCPs in different countries - added this section to the page
Scope of practice - updated section
Lagging quality care measures - Reorganized section and included section to detail quality measures used in the United States.

Edits were carefully done to ensure consistency throughout the remaining article but improve upon sections that required updating or additional information.

Shelleywise (talk) 22:44, 27 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Group D Wiki Page Edits

Our goal was to contribute additional information regarding organ donation options and related U.S. policy in the Wiki Organ Donor page. Our primary focus involved researching alternative organ donor systems presently in use in other countries and to assess possible solutions to America’s organ donor shortage. The prioritized sections for our assignment included; Opt-in versus Opt-out, Tax Incentives, Other Financial Incentives, Donor Leave Laws, and the United States.

We did the following edits:

1. We added two new sections to the Wikipedia organ donation page, which include; Donor Leave Laws and Tax Incentives 2. We substantially revised and edited the “other financial incentives”, “opt-in versus opt-out” and “United States” sections. 3. We provided meaningful edits to the “other financial incentives” and “United States” sections, which included adding definitions, and correcting spelling and grammatical errors.

PLEASE NOTE: DUE TO TECHNICAL DIFFICULTIES, WE WERE UNABLE TO POST TO OUR SANDBOX. ALL OF OUR EDITS APPEAR IN THE WIKI ORGAN DONONATION PAGE ITSELF.

Username sharing

I assume you previously used the name HPL Group D; while this username seems more acceptable, you still use "we" above, indicating that more than one person may be using this account, which as you were told under the previous username, is not permitted. Only you must be using this account. 331dot (talk) 01:08, 11 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Dear Wiki, No, I am the only one logging in under my username. Sorry for the confusion. Shelley

Thanks for the clarification. I would only add that if you represent a group you may want to (if you haven't already) review the conflict of interest policy. Thanks again 331dot (talk) 08:59, 18 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

October 2016

Please do not add or change content, as you did at Organ donation, without citing a reliable source. Please review the guidelines at Wikipedia:Citing sources and take this opportunity to add references to the article. Thank you. Melcous (talk) 07:10, 22 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (November 28)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:

This draft doesn't appear to have a single subject. Is it intended to be about care in the United States, or in other developed countries? If it is about both, a general lede sentence is in order.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Robert McClenon (talk) 02:22, 28 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Shelleywise, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Robert McClenon (talk) 02:22, 28 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]