User talk:Vklotz

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I have opened a section on the Talk:Violin page for discussion of your recent edits. Just plain Bill (talk) 19:03, 18 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Dr. Edwin F. Klotz (September 22)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by I dream of horses was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

There's a few "weasel words" in here ("Some say..."), which really should be avoided in an encyclopedia. Quotes needs to be attributed to whoever said it.

There's also some formatting issues. I fixed most of them by removing your signature and adding paragraphs, but this draft really needs some sections.

While you've stated your conflict of interest in your edit summary (appreciate that), you should more ideally do so on the talk page of your draft or your user page.

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I dream of horses If you reply here, please ping me by adding {{U|I dream of horses}} to your message (talk to me) (My edits) @ 05:09, 22 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Vklotz, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! I dream of horses If you reply here, please ping me by adding {{U|I dream of horses}} to your message (talk to me) (My edits) @ 05:09, 22 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Dr. Edwin F. Klotz (November 16)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Galobtter was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Possible notable. But most of the sources that aren't written by him are obituaries so more are needed I think. But It uses too many words like "american traditionalist" and "secular progressive". Just state the facts, not what title he preferred or whether he was a patriot. One cannot call someone a patriot in encyclopaedic voice - only described as such.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Galobtter (talkó tuó mió) 03:39, 16 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Dr. Edwin F. Klotz concern

Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Dr. Edwin F. Klotz, a page you created, has not been edited in 5 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

If your submission is not edited soon, it could be nominated for deletion. If you would like to attempt to save it, you will need to improve it.

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Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 01:32, 20 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Dr. Edwin F. Klotz concern

Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Dr. Edwin F. Klotz, a page you created, has not been edited in 5 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

If your submission is not edited soon, it could be nominated for deletion. If you would like to attempt to save it, you will need to improve it.

You may request Userfication of the content if it meets requirements.

If the deletion has already occured, instructions on how you may be able to retrieve it are available at WP:REFUND/G13.

Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 01:32, 20 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Edwin F. Klotz (November 8)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Frayae was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Edwin Klotz remained in Sacramento and worked as a lame duck. ??

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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— Frayæ (Talk/Spjall) 16:42, 8 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]