User talk:Yjjong

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 13:36, 1 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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Nice start on your draft. Some things going forward

When you add references, please use the Cite tool on the visual editor. See this for a refresher on how to do that. You can use a PMID or a DOI instead of a URL. You should also use the option to reuse a citation, instead of providing a duplicate reference each time.
The "History" section should be written in paragraph form, not in the current "December 1986:" (etc.) format you're using. Avoid

single-sentence paragraphs a much as possible. Use a focus that's more narrative, less just a list of dates.

Make sure that every statement can be connected directly to a supporting citation. The citation should be placed immediately after the statement it supports, although if you have several statements (or even sentences) supported by a single course, you can place the source after a group of statements/sentences. That said, you need to have at least one reference per paragraph, and there shouldn't be any statements in the paragraph after the final source.
Section headers should be not capitalized (except for the first word and any proper nouns). Honorifics like "Dr" are not used in Wikipedia articles. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:03, 5 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]