Jump to content

Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/Charlize Theron filmography/archive1

Add links
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by SchroCat via FACBot (talk) 23:30, 2 February 2016 (UTC) [1].[reply]

Charlize Theron filmography

[edit]

Charlize Theron filmography (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)

Toolbox
Nominator(s): Cowlibob (talk) 13:27, 6 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Charlize Theron is a South African-American actress noted for roles such as a serial killer in Monster (2003), a miner fighting sexual harassment in North Country (2005), and more recently as rebel soldier Imperator Furiosa in Mad Max: Fury Road (2015). Here's a hopefully comprehensive rundown of her appearances thus far, as usual look forward to all the helpful comments on how to improve it. Cowlibob (talk) 13:27, 6 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from NapHit (talk) 22:59, 1 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]
contentComments
  • "her role as an alcoholic writer in Young Adult garnered Theron..." use of garnered here is strange for me. I would flip the sentence around, so much you mentioned Theron first and say she received a nomination instead.
  • Quite a few sentences start with "In..." try and mix it up a bit
  • Surely TBA should sort after 2016 as they will be released in the future?
  • TBA shouldn't sort as T in the role column should be at the end alongside the dashes

NapHit (talk) 22:28, 28 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

@NapHit: Thanks for the review. I think I've sorted the above points. Cowlibob (talk) 22:08, 1 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 10:39, 17 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Comment
  • "her debut" should you clarify you mean her film debut?
  • Since when did television and music videos form part of a filmography?
  • BCDB is referred to as The Big Cartoon Database.

Not much. Very good. The Rambling Man (talk) 15:38, 7 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man: Made relevant fixes. Films and television credits are listed per WP:FILMOGRAPHY. I've removed the music video appearance. Cowlibob (talk) 12:22, 13 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Comment
  • I think the 5th ref should be replaced with a better source.
The lead section is very good.--Skr15081997 (talk) 10:45, 8 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]
@Skr15081997: I unfortunately couldn't find a different source but in the interview she does specify that she spent time with a therapist to "practice schizophrenia" for the role. Cowlibob (talk) 12:15, 13 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Source review: Formatting is as per MoS, the references are reliable, no dead links and spot checks reveals no evidence of plagiarism or close copying. An issue regarding the accuracy of a source:
  • Source 18 does not specify the director of 2 Days in Valley.

Source review

  • The comment above re FN18 stands
  • There is some inconsistency in the date formats, with the formats "1 November 2015" and "November 1, 2015" used
  • You don't need "(AMPAS)" in two refs
  • Books need a location for the publisher (FN20)
  • You don't need a full date in FN20, just the year of publication
  • There's an unwanted space in FN23 – "The Astronaut s Wife"
  • FN12 should be "British Academy of Film and Television Arts", not "BAFTAs".

– SchroCat (talk) 15:52, 28 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@SchroCat: Thanks for the source review. Dealt with the points above. Cowlibob (talk) 21:30, 28 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]
The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.
Retrieved from "https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Featured_list_candidates/Charlize_Theron_filmography/archive1&oldid=703011395"