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The list was archived by Giants2008 via FACBot (talk) 23:18:10 5 January 2020 (UTC) [1].

Kalākaua's Cabinet Ministers[edit]

Featured list candidates/Kalākaua's Cabinet Ministers/archive1

Nominator(s): User:Maile66 and KAVEBEAR (talk) 00:23, 5 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured list because it is a quality list and well researched and referenced and list all key politicians in the executive cabinet during the reign of Hawaii’s last king Kalākaua. KAVEBEAR (talk) 00:23, 5 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Some of my comments on the other list also apply here and vice versa; please ensure the two pages are consistent and relevant changes are made to both pages
King Kalākaua is not the article's topic and should not be bolded
Perhaps Kalākaua's Privy Council of State should be linked in the lead rather than see also; Privy Council of the Hawaiian Kingdom does not link to it, nor Liliʻuokalani's.
The third paragraph describes the replacements for all four positions, so I am unsure what "The remaining August 14 cabinet members were replaced by new ministers on September 22." refers to
The lead says Cummins, et al. were installed on July 17, 1890, but these people have June 17, 1890 as start/end dates in the table. Please review the inconsistency..
Since there are specific cabinets of people all starting or ending their terms at the same time, I would encourage building on the suggestion on the other FLC to make the table sortable by date or have a supplementary table showing groupings of who served together, rather than solely alphabetical across the 15-year period.
Businessmen is one word
Several hyphens in the table date ranges should be dashes
Gibson is listed as Prime Minister in 1886. This position is mentioned nowhere else and the linked Kuhina Nui goes through 1864 so I have no idea what's going on here.
What does it mean that Gibson was both an acting and ad interim AG?
No need for an EL header if there are no ELs...

Reywas92^Talk 21:58, 5 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@KAVEBEAR: I am no longer interested in putting this through FLC. Could we please just withdraw this? — Maile (talk) 22:01, 5 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Requesting withdrawal. Co-nominator has expressed they don’t want to proceed.KAVEBEAR (talk) 22:05, 5 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Closing note: This candidate has been archived, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please see WP:FLC/ar, and leave the {{featured list candidates}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. Giants2008 (Talk) 23:18, 5 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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