Talk:The Shipment (Star Trek: Enterprise)

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Reviewer: Ruby2010 (talk · contribs) 18:06, 18 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I shall review this one. Ruby 2010/2013 18:06, 18 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

  • I was going to suggest you add wikilinks to Star Trek: Enterprise (season 3) in this and "Exile", but I see that the article is still a redirect. When an article eventually is created, you should add in the links to all S3 articles
  • I agree. It's certainly planned as Enterprise has the benefit of having (at least post-S1) reasonably good sources online. Miyagawa (talk) 09:09, 23 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • "...which is producing a compound used in the construction of the Xindi weapon..." (should it be "a Xindi weapon" because you haven't yet established it in this article?)
  • "The episode was filmed around Labor Day 2003 at the same time as the season premier was first aired" --> The episode was filmed near Labor Day 2003, when the season premiere first aired? (or perhaps simply state late August to early September rather than Labor Day?)
  • Changed to August/September as suggested. Miyagawa (talk) 09:09, 23 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Two actors resumed their roles from earlier in the season, and John Cothran, Jr. had previously appeared as a Klingon in both Star Trek: The Next Generation and Deep Space Nine" -- could use a rewording (it's unclear if Cothran is one of these two actors). Perhaps add in a semicolon? --> Two actors resumed their roles from earlier in the season; John Cothran, Jr. had previously appeared as a Klingon in both Star Trek: The Next Generation and Deep Space Nine
  • Done. Miyagawa (talk) 09:09, 23 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • "It received a 3.9/6 share among all adults and 6 percent of all adults watching television at the time of the broadcast" -- the second part is a bit incomplete (I assume it is trying to say "It received a 3.9/6 share among all adults, with 6 percent of all adults watching television at the time of the broadcast")
  • As with "Exile", it'd be nice if a few more reviews were added
  • Those are the only two that I've found which I would consider to be from reliable sources. I've checked the DVD reviews and they haven't said anything specific about this episode. Miyagawa (talk) 09:09, 23 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Overall nice work as usual. On hold for the standard 7 days. Thanks, Ruby 2010/2013 23:02, 22 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

  • Thanks for the review, let me know if there is anything else you'd like me to look at. Miyagawa (talk) 09:09, 23 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • Here too, looks ready for GA status. Well done! Keep up the good work. Ruby 2010/2013 20:09, 23 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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