Talk:Bates method

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American Academy of Ophthalmology

I removed the following, since it doesn't even mention Bates method by name. I read through it, hoping it might be used as a ref, but I don't see how. --Ronz (talk) 16:54, 2 August 2008 (UTC)

• [1] American Academy of Ophthalmology : Complementary Therapy Assessments: Visual Training for Refractive Errors 2008

Ronz, Not true. Bates is mentioned in the reference section. Seeyou (talk) 19:54, 14 August 2008 (UTC)

Slightly to my surprise, I find myself in complete agreement with Ronz about that. SamuelTheGhost (talk) 17:06, 2 August 2008 (UTC)

Absurd removal. Read the references. You will find W.H. Bates. This article is about the Bates method and / or Natural vision improvement. If there is a number one reliable link and source in this article. This is the source and this the link. Read also the paragraph unique in the paragraph opthalmological research in the archive. Seeyou (talk) 17:28, 2 August 2008 (UTC)

I re-added the link. You both do not understand and know there is article bates method and there is a article natural vision improvement. If we editors say these subjects are different we have to change the article natural vision improvement.

See the link :

* http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Natural_vision_improvement&redirect=no

Maybe it is a good idea to separate Natural vision improvement from the Bates method article. : - ). It is true Natural vision improvement and Bates method are not the same. See the available definitions of Thomas Quackenbush and Janet Goodrich. !Seeyou (talk) 15:33, 3 August 2008 (UTC)

Instead of ignoring all other editors perspectives on the issue, in violation of WP:CON, please respect your fellow editors and follow WP:DR. Thanks! --Ronz (talk) 16:19, 3 August 2008 (UTC)

I do not understand can you explain ? Seeyou (talk) 16:37, 3 August 2008 (UTC)

My initial inclination was to agree with Ronz and SamuelTheGhost here, but after some reflection I now tend to think Seeyou is correct on this. Natural Vision Improvement does redirect to Bates method, and the third section is Modern variants, so this article is not only about the Bates method per se. Now, there is some merit to the idea of making Natural Vision Improvement into a separate article, but quite a bit of overlap would inevitably occur, and content forking would be an issue.
In light of that, the AAO report does seem to me to meet the Further reading section guidelines of "covering the topic beyond the scope of the article" and "having significant usefulness beyond verification of the article". So at this point my vote is to re-add it to Further Reading. PSWG1920 (talk) 20:03, 3 August 2008 (UTC)

I'll explain my view. The AAO report is about "visual training". There's no coherence in the various techniques covered, and no indication that the training was carried out by people who believed in it or wanted it to work. Since an admitted key element in the Bates approach is the psychological one, the attitude of the teacher can be crucial. What was covered was a hotch-potch of methods, some of which might be benefical, some neutral, some harmful (by increasing "stress" in the Bates sense). Where statistically significant positive results were obtained the article uses weasel words to discount them. The "objective" criterion of whether you can see clearly is whether you can see clearly, not how it shows up on optometrists' instruments. The final conclusion, "There is level I evidence that visual training for control of accommodation has no effect on myopia" is just a lie, since the failure to find a significant effect is by no means a proof that no effect exists. SamuelTheGhost (talk) 21:18, 3 August 2008 (UTC)

You are right, Sammy, the failure to find a statistical difference is not "proof". It is, however, "evidence" (or "support") for the lack of an effect, which is what the quote from the AAO report says! Let me reiterate: "There is level I evidence that visual training for control of accommodation has no effect on myopia" (my emphasis). Once again, science's major strength (its conservatism) is used against it! Famousdog (talk) 14:03, 4 August 2008 (UTC)

For further Arguments. See the cabalcase below :

• http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Mediation_Cabal/Cases/2008-08-03_Bates_method

Seeyou (talk) 19:57, 14 August 2008 (UTC)

The AAO article is clearly about the Bates method and its descendants. I think that justifies some mention of it. Phil Sandifer (talk) 20:31, 14 August 2008 (UTC)

I think I went through the same though process as PSWG1920. Since this article is where the Natural Vision Improvement redirect resolves, this external link seems appropriate. This article should discuss the general concept of Natural vision improvement with the first mention of it in bold. -- Levine2112 ^discuss 21:12, 14 August 2008 (UTC)

SeeYou asked me on my Talk page for my comments. I haven't been following the editing debate or editing history in any detail and may be missing subtleties. These comments apply to the two paragraphs following the "Ophthalmology research" section in this version of the article.

I like what's there in its present form.

This material seems to be to be totally appropriate for inclusion. It is a recent report from an impeccable mainstream medical source. Their research methods and judgement may be open to criticism, but it follows the basic verifiability rule: I have no doubt that AAO is a reliable source in the Wikipedian sense and I have no doubt that it really said the things it has said. The external link is appropriate because it's the source for the material. The second paragraph ("The AAO report states that... However, they also conclude...") presents their conclusions in their own words, and allows the reader to note that the AAO is expressing a nuanced and qualified conclusion.

I don't really have an opinion on what distinctions need to be made between various versions of the Bates and similar systems. I think it's appropriate for a general-purpose encyclopedia to treat e.g. all versions of Chiropractic in a single article, and deal with the various systems by side comments or sections within the context of the article. Similarly I think it's reasonable to treat all of the Bates-like systems together. If advocates of particular methods feel that it's very important to add qualifiers to fine-tune the material... e.g. to say more about what specific systems the studies cited by the AAO did or did not actually review... I'd regard it as clutter, but acceptable clutter. Incidentally, I think it's reasonable to use the "ref" mechanism to add footnotes as well as references, and advocate using them as a compromise when editors agree that something bears on neutrality but disagree on how important it is.

In other words, if someone wants to add a "Note: AAO article does not mention Bates method by name" in the footnote ... maybe following the reference itself... that would be OK with me. If someone wanted go through the AAO article and add a list, i.e. "This article reviews studies of the X system, Y system, Z system, etc." that actually would be a useful addition IMHO.

In general, we need to be sure that the reader can judge what the AAO article is about. In its present form I think it's perfectly clear to a reader that

1) the AAO article is about visual training for myopia in general, not specifically about the Bates method as presented in 1920;

2) Wikipedia's Bates method article is about the Bates method and related method.

3) the Bates method is indeed a form of visual training and is indeed used for the purpose of improving myopia, and therefore the AAO article would be relevant even if this article that were narrowly limited to the 1920 Bates method.

I'm not sure I quite know what to make of the interleaving of the material on "A 1946 study." Seems to me it oughta be AAO quotation, followed by presentation of AAO conclusions, then "A 1946 study." Actually I guess I'll go change that myself now. Dpbsmith (talk) 13:47, 15 August 2008 (UTC)

Good to see some new editors weighing in. I've two concerns:

1. Why does this link, which has little relevance to this article, need to have the extra visibility beyond just being used as a reference?
2. This article is not about natural vision improvement. We've tried to make it so as much as possible in Bates_method#Modern_variants, but that section of the article is probably the most contested section of all. See other discussions on this page and a summary of the problem in Wikipedia:Fringe_theories/Noticeboard#Bates_method_sources.

--Ronz (talk) 17:23, 15 August 2008 (UTC)

1. This is a divisive question in the wording. I wouldn't say that the link has little relevance to this article. In terms of WP:OTHERCRAPEXISTS, this article uses a source entitled "Eye-Related Quackery" as both a reference and an external link. Perhaps it has extra visibility to help readers who have poor vision. ;-)
2. Here is the discussion defining why the Natural vision improvement article redirected to this one. It seems that this article should discuss "natural vision improvement" within the context of the Bates Method.

-- Levine2112 ^discuss 17:55, 15 August 2008 (UTC)

Seeyou says I commented on the wrong issue, and wants my views specifically on also listing the AAO article under "external links."

The key point here is serving the reader. Personally, I am sort of an inclusionist when it comes to external links. They're OK bye me so long as the quantity of encyclopedic information in them is high and the amount of commercialism is low.

In the case of an article on a controversial topic, a reader may well be interested in locating material on either side of the controversy, so such an article not only may but should include links to sites that represent non-neutral points of view. The links should be reasonably balanced, and identified as to their point of view. Thus, if the AAO link were to be included, it shouldn't be just a bare link, but have a one-line summary such as "AAO article that is unsupportive of the merits of visual training for refractive errors."

If someone wants to include the AAO link, it's a good article and I don't see any reason to remove it. But since it's also in the references, I don't see that it's important to include it. I suggest here that we err on the side of inclusion: anyone who does think it's important should be humored.

Wikipedia is not a link farm, but collecting good external links is a useful service to the reader.

(With regard to pro-Bates or pro-natural-vision improvement, a difficulty here is that many of these sites actually are connected with commercial promotion of specific books, courses, materials, or practitioners... but its up to Bates supporters to find those that aren't. I'd be equally leery of an link to an article on, say, LASIK, however well written, that was on a website for a surgical practice offering LASIK). Dpbsmith (talk) 21:36, 15 August 2008 (UTC)

Central-fixation

Since we're discussing external links, I'd like to bring up one which has been rejected in the past. Central-fixation.com contains a collection of articles by Bates which were published in medical journals, most dealing directly with his method of treating eyesight. These are independent of his self-published works. To me this is highly relevant, and I don't understand the problem with linking to it. PSWG1920 (talk) 22:33, 15 August 2008 (UTC)

This appears to be a wonderful resource. It contains meaningful, relevant content that may not suitable for inclusion in this article. I don't see any commercial interests or advertising. By all means, I think it would be a pity not to include a link to this website. -- Levine2112 ^discuss 23:49, 15 August 2008 (UTC)

I suggest a quick search through the talk archives to see why it was removed, summarizing the reasoning, then providing new comments that address past concerns. --Ronz (talk) 03:20, 16 August 2008 (UTC)

If I recall this correctly, there was this one editor who threw around a bunch of scary policies. WP:NPOV. WP:SPAM. WP:EL. But he never told us why he thought those applied. Except with WP:EL. He claimed that WP:EL is not satisfied because the hosting site (central-fixation.com) "misleads the reader by the use of factually inaccurate material or unverifiable research". And then this other editor asked for an example from the hosting site where it offers factually inaccurate material or unverifiable research. But you know what? That first editor never did give an example. And months later, still no example. And with still no example, I think it is high time this link was restored. -- Levine2112 ^discuss 03:42, 16 August 2008 (UTC)

I don't see any need to search through the Talk archives. I wasn't involved in the earlier discussions, but I have very strong feelings about this.

It is patently obvious that links to a collection of articles by W. H. Bates is relevant to an article on the Bates method. This is a large collection of articles. I don't know how easy it would be to find them via JSTOR or Medline or what have you; they might actually be hard to find or they might be fairly easy to find, but having them collected in one place is valuable.

This is a legitimate collection of source material. If the website has any commercial connection at all, it's not obvious. In any case, the ratio of encyclopedic material to promotion is very high.

As for the criticism of "factually inaccurate material or unverifiable research," WP:V is about "verifiability, not truth." The only reason to object would be if the articles were fabricated, altered, distorted, etc. and since the website gives their sources it's easy to verify whether they are or or not.

That is: only two questions need to be asked. a) Are W. H. Bates' published writings relevant to an article on the Bates method? b) Does the website accurately present this material--that is, is an article that claims to be "Reprinted from the New York Medical Journal for September 3, 1921" in fact an accurate copy of an article printed in the New York Medical Journal for September 3, 1921.

Note, too, that the fact that these articles were published in a medical journal is irrelevant. That fact may be relevant in judging the validity of Bates' writings, or the position of Bates within the medical mainstream during his life... but it has nothing to do with whether it's a useful external link.

Just to make myself perfectly clear, I'm a Bates skeptic. This has nothing whatsoever to do with the validity of the Bates method. Notice that someone seeking to build a case against the validity of the Bates method might find this collection just as interesting and useful as a supporter. Dpbsmith (talk) 20:25, 16 August 2008 (UTC)

Performing due diligence on verifying the material at the central-fixation site, I note that Google Books does turn up an image of a book by Health Research Books, 1993, which presents itself as a collection of reprints of articles by W. H. Bates. In particular, Google Books shows me this page image which certainly has the look of a copy of page image from an old journal, and which corresponds to the text at http://www.central-fixation.com/bates-medical-articles/shifting-aid-vision.php . Not that anyone has challenged the accuracy of the text posted at central-fixation... I'm just saying I tried making one quick spot-check and things jibed. Dpbsmith (talk) 20:38, 16 August 2008 (UTC)

Imagination Blindness

How about this one? A reference to the site was just removed from the article per below discussions, however, I think this is useful enough to be in the external links. PSWG1920 (talk) 16:25, 17 August 2008 (UTC)

See WP:LINKSTOAVOID, especially #2, #11, #13. We need information specifically about Bates method. Anything else is a distraction at best. --Ronz (talk) 18:58, 18 August 2008 (UTC)

List of poor sources

• http://www.iblindness.org/articles/kiesling-rebuttal.html
• http://www.visionsofjoy.org - 3 links
• http://visionimprovementcenter.com/disclaimer.htm
• http://archive.mailtribune.com/archive/99/sept99/92099n2.htm
• http://www.visioneducators.org/reducedlenses.htm

--Ronz (talk) 15:21, 12 August 2008 (UTC)

See my last comment directly above. And as for the disclaimers (currently referenced here), I think that is a significant aspect which would be difficult to touch on directly without using such sources. These disclaimers could be seen as Bates method teachers' own words condemning themselves. PSWG1920 (talk) 15:44, 12 August 2008 (UTC)

I do nonetheless see your basic point. It would be difficult to justify referencing a random personal website for its author's opinion on an aspect of the Bates method. Now, to me, for practical purposes, the sites in question are more than just random personal websites, but I'm fairly certain you would argue (with apologies if I have assumed too much) that what I call "practical purposes", are irrelevant. I looked through WP:FRINGE, since that's the most directly applicable guideline for this type of article, and I couldn't find anything addressing this type of situation, though WP:PARITY comes somewhat close. Perhaps we should try the Fringe theory noticeboard again, ask for help with this specific issue, and point out that the Fringe guideline could better address the question of what individual fringe sources are acceptable to cite. PSWG1920 (talk) 01:37, 13 August 2008 (UTC)

I think that's a good idea. This issue is very specific, so it should be fairly approachable for someone new to the article. --Ronz (talk) 16:22, 13 August 2008 (UTC)

I think the final comment in the article, about Bates practitioners issuing disclaimers, is unnecessary and could be removed. Presumably Bates teachers should do this by law and showing that they do (do something that they should do) serves only to show them in a positive light. Removing this rather pointless sentence has the added benefit of removing two contentious sources. (However, I'm not doing it 'cause I'll get shouted at!) Famousdog (talk) 13:38, 15 August 2008 (UTC)

First of all, just because it may in a sense show Bates teachers in a positive light does not mean it should be removed, and your assessment that it shows them in only a positive light is questionable. Secondly, I don't see how these disclaimers are "contentious". At any rate, this is a very relevant point. PSWG1920 (talk) 20:02, 15 August 2008 (UTC)

I have removed the iblindness reference and one of the references to visionsofjoy, replacing them with a similar discussion derived from Elwin Marg. Now, I would be okay with deleting the other "poor sources" if we could find independent sources for the points they are used to reference. Absent that, I think they should be permitted to stay per above discussions. PSWG1920 (talk) 16:09, 17 August 2008 (UTC)

Thanks. --Ronz (talk) 19:00, 18 August 2008 (UTC)

I should add that I would have no problem with the removal of the Mail Tribune reference. I added it because I thought it was an independent source which would help the subsection, "Natural Vision Improvement", but at this point I would not defend the subsection if it were deleted. PSWG1920 (talk) 17:51, 23 August 2008 (UTC)

I have removed the Mail Tribune reference, so we are now down to four: 2 to visionsofjoy.org, 1 to visionimprovementcenter.com, and 1 to visioneducators.org . All of which I believe are legitimate uses of fringe sources, but would have no problem with the removal of if independent sources were found for the points they are used to reference. PSWG1920 (talk) 18:18, 29 August 2008 (UTC)

How is this original research, and what does it matter if the source is "reliable" when it's only being cited for an opinion? PSWG1920 (talk) 20:05, 4 September 2008 (UTC)

I saw no evidence that the opinion was worthy of being cited. I've repeatedly asked for such evidence. At this point, I think it best to prune out these poor sources. We're writing an encyclopedia article, after all.

The source, even if we did accept it, does not verify all the information that was in the article.--Ronz (talk) 21:04, 4 September 2008 (UTC)

Change title from Bates Method into Bates method / Natural Vision improvement

Since the article Natural vision improvement directs directly to the Bates method article, I think the current title of the article is not right. The Bates method is not equal to Natural Vision improvement and Natural Vision improvement is not equal to the Bates method. Janet Goodrich provided a defintion of Natural vision improvement, which unfortunatly is removed. And T. Quackenbush provided one for the Bates method currently present. For how long ? Based on these facts a title merge is an improvement. Correct me if I am wrong. Seeyou (talk) 16:32, 17 August 2008 (UTC)

I see no reason for it, especially given the article as it exists.. Please list some independent, reliable sources on the subject of "natural vision improvement." --Ronz (talk) 19:11, 18 August 2008 (UTC)

Ronz, Every source is reliable unless unreliability is proved by a reliable source. Assume good faith ! Seeyou (talk) 20:57, 19 August 2008 (UTC)

Nope. See WP:RS. --Ronz (talk) 00:06, 20 August 2008 (UTC)

I studied WP:RS I do not understand. When is a source independent and reliable and when is a source not independent and reliable ? The WP:RS reference does not make this clear. In contrary it says : Reliable sources are credible published materials with a reliable publication process; their authors are generally regarded as trustworthy or authoritative in relation to the subject at hand. So whether or not a source is reliable depends on us. In my opinion the Janet Goodrich publications are reliable. If I am wrong please correct me. Seeyou (talk) 20:54, 21 August 2008 (UTC)

Here's my current understanding. Reliable sources are generally considered to be "third-party" publications. "Third-party" meaning (it took me a while to realize this) that the author and the publisher are not one and the same, and both are independent of the subject. Janet Goodrich fails the latter portion of that test, since she obviously is not independent of "Natural Vision Improvement". While sources promoting the Bates method can be cited in the Bates method article, it needs to be based around independent, third-party sources. Currently the "Natural Vision Improvement" subsection is very shaky in that regard. PSWG1920 (talk) 17:01, 25 August 2008 (UTC)

I think it's better to leave the title as it is (Shorter, easier to type.) But if it's changed, the word "vision" should not be capitalized, and probably not the word "Natural" either. ☺ Coppertwig (talk) 12:44, 19 August 2008 (UTC)

Coppertwig welcome are you also going to really contribute to this article like ronz ? Above you only give your opinion. Can you also react on the given arguments. Like the article Natural vision improvement directly directs to the bates method article. As you can see by the given defintions ( referenced ! ). The bates method and Natural vision improvement are not completly equal. From a mathematical point of view this is not right. Is it ? Seeyou (talk) 20:29, 21 August 2008 (UTC)

"Natural Vision Improvement" is a phrase used by one particular set of Bates Method teachers, associated with the names Quackenbush and Goodrich as Seeyou keeps reminding us. There are other Bates Method teachers, particularly outside the USA, who don't use that phrase and who trace their influence back to Bates by different routes. Although the relationship between the different schools seems to be fairly friendly, they are completely independent of each other. So to change the name as suggested would pointlessly introduce another bias (as if there aren't enough already). So I'm against it. SamuelTheGhost (talk) 18:18, 25 August 2008 (UTC)

Sammy I suggest you read the archive for better understanding.

But since discussion should be based on arguments and facts and not just on your personal opinion I will give you the explanation I have given earlier.

Can you explain, when you go the one of the biggest bookstores on the net today Amazon.com and you search for bates method or Natural vision improvement, you will find a bestselling book on top of the list. So according to this bookstore also Bates method and Natural vision improvement are equal. Seeyou (talk) 19:46, 25 August 2008 (UTC)

Nein, nein, nein, Seeyou. Just because a bestselling book is about the Bates Method and Natural Vision Improvement does not mean that the method and Natural Vision Improvement are one and the same. Besides, any move to the title you wish would rightly be rejected on the basis of Wikipedia:Neutral point of view.

Frankly, Seeyou, I'm getting a bit fed up with this warlike attitude you've exuded. You've been using the Mediation Cabal as a bunker to take potshots at your enemies for the pettiest sleights (note that practically all your MedCab cases have been closed without ruling), and you have, on this very talk page in the past, accused another editor of a posts-for-pennies deal. What I'm seeing from you, Seeyou, is a defender of The Truth^TM who will not hesitate to assume an attitude not unlike that of the Japanese during WWII, and it's going to end up getting you blocked someday. -Jéské ^{(v^_^v Bodging WP edit by edit)} 19:56, 25 August 2008 (UTC)

I agree they are not equal. That why the sourced definitions are so important. The Bates method in this article should be everything bates has published. And Natural Vision improvement is : A lifestyle method of improving eyesight by wholistic means without the use of optical devices. The Bates method merged with modern theories of brain function, character and responsibility for one’s self and state of being.

This bookstore represents information which indicates that in the outside world the Bates method and Natural vision improvement have a strong connection. Which is true. And this article does not represent this fact when you read the header. ( Do not forget there is still an article NVI directing to the BM article. ) Arguments, Facts that is the way to discuss Jeske. Focus on improving this article. Seeyou (talk) 20:50, 25 August 2008 (UTC)

"This bookstore represents information " No it doesn't. Please stop it with the soapboxing. --Ronz (talk) 21:19, 25 August 2008 (UTC)

Bookstores aren't sources (why do you think Amazon can't be used for release dates?). Now, before you ask for barbecue sauce to make your foot taste better, stop putting it in your mouth. -Jéské ^{(v^_^v Bodging WP edit by edit)} 04:16, 26 August 2008 (UTC)

This is not discussing a topic. This is avoiding the real discussion. Why can't you just simply explain why Amazon has no value. Because that is your statement. Amazon is a great source for statiscal information and can be very helpful in deciding which books on the bates method or natural vision improvement are dominant and important. If we had not a tool like amazon we could keep on discussing for ages. Don't forget this article is for the public. The public gives a very clear and strong direction. Correct me if am wrong. Seeyou (talk) 19:40, 26 August 2008 (UTC)

Bookstores aren't sources as they do not actively review books. You want a book review site, which Amazon ain't. -Jéské ^{(v^_^v Bodging WP edit by edit)} 01:13, 27 August 2008 (UTC)

Jeske Amazon is not a source. Amazon is a tool to determine which Bates method advocate is the dominant one. If the skeptics really want to score points they should attack the strongest advocate not a weak one. The real subject of this discussion is the change of the title. I will make a summary with the arguments for the RFC. At this moment, I have not read any real argument against the change. Please I you are against the change provide your arguments. Seeyou (talk) 20:21, 28 August 2008 (UTC)

The way you're talking, it is a source for the purposes of the name change. Show me irrevocable proof that natural vision improvement and the Method are commonly conflated (not just one book available for sale on Amazon) and you'll see no further opposition from me. -Jéské ^{(v^_^v Bodging WP edit by edit)} 20:35, 28 August 2008 (UTC)

Proffesional Engineer Doug Marsh in his book states :

The reason my glasses were in my pocket that day wasn’t because I’d broken them. Rather I’d been purposely not wearing them for long periods as part of my experiment with Natural Vision Improvement, (NVI), also called the Bates Method. .

Seeyou (talk) 19:12, 3 September 2008 (UTC)

Definitions

Current Definition of the Bates method :

Natural vision teacher Thomas R. Quackenbush defines the Bates method thus:

An educational program created by ophthalmologist William H. Bates, M.D., in which natural, correct vision habits—based on relaxation of the mind and body—are taught; optional self-healing activities and games are often included to accelerate integration and self-healing; commonly misunderstood as only "eye exercises"—even by many "Bates Method" teachers.

Currrent Defintion of Natural Vision improvement :

According to Janet Goodrich :

Natural Vision Improvement : A lifestyle method of improving eyesight by wholistic means without the use of optical devices. The Bates method merged with modern theories of brain function, character and responsibility for one’s self and state of being..

Seeyou (talk) 20:53, 19 August 2008 (UTC)

Elwin Marg was an optometrist !

Wow Ronz you are fast. See :

• http://brain.berkeley.edu/marg/cv.html

Facts and should be presented about the references and sources. RFC ? Seeyou So again Elwin Marg was an Optometrist !(talk) 21:25, 21 August 2008 (UTC)

How is this relevant? --Ronz (talk) 21:32, 21 August 2008 (UTC)

I changed it to a standard citation. --Ronz (talk) 21:38, 21 August 2008 (UTC)

Ronz, I am amazed you do not understand my point.

See : http://www.medicinenet.com/script/main/art.asp?articlekey=22559

An Optometrist is a health care professional who is licensed to provide primary eye care services:

An Ophthalmologist is an eye M.D., a medical doctor who is specialized in eye and vision care. Ophthalmologists are trained to provide the full spectrum of eye care, from prescribing glasses and contact lenses to complex and delicate eye surgery. They may also be involved in eye research.

I assume you undestand my explanation now, so I readded optometrist Elwin Marg. Time is now 22:27 Seeyou (talk) 20:27, 22 August 2008 (UTC)

How is this relevant? --Ronz (talk) 21:19, 22 August 2008 (UTC)

When you read the information above. You read an optometrist is not the biggest authority on the subject of eyesight. He or she is less educated. I think other users will agree with me this fact is valuable and important fact. Why is not an ophthalmologist chosen to comment on the Bates method my dear friend ? Seeyou (talk) 08:19, 23 August 2008 (UTC)

Since you say "I think other users will agree" I must tell you that I don't. Once more (this mustn't become a habit!) I agree with Ronz. And for the following reasons:

• There is no general policy in wikipedia of prefixing their professions to names of cited authors, and no need to in this case. We don't for example say "journalist Martin Gardner" though that would be a much more revealing qualification.
• The process of peer review of academic papers is an attempt to judge the merits of the paper on what is said, not on who said it. Some review processes are undertaken in conditions of author anonymity, in accordance with this principle. The Marg paper that the article quotes has been peer reviewed. Admittedly that doesn't guarantee that it is of high quality, but in my opinion it is. If you disagree, give your reasons.
• The CV for Marg you gave a link for is indeed interesting. It makes it quite clear that Marg is a respectable and respected scientist. Furthermore it includes that fact that he spent five years in post-doctoral research, including four years as "Research Associate in Surgery (Ophthalmology)" so your statement "He or she is less educated" looks downright silly as applied to him. SamuelTheGhost (talk) 12:08, 23 August 2008 (UTC)

Re: so your statement "He or she is less educated" looks downright silly as applied to him. Worse, it looks like a deliberate attempt to violated NPOV, OR, and FRINGE. --Ronz (talk) 14:38, 23 August 2008 (UTC)

What are the two proposed pieces of language here? Phil Sandifer (talk) 21:52, 23 August 2008 (UTC)

Pardon? Could you explain please? SamuelTheGhost (talk) 22:31, 23 August 2008 (UTC)

:: I do understand your question Phil. See below :

Edit Seeyou :

• http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Bates_method&diff=233410307&oldid=233400663

Edit Ronz :

• http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Bates_method&diff=233613387&oldid=233604691

Seeyou (talk) 11:06, 24 August 2008 (UTC)

Seeyou has asked me to comment about whether to include the optometrist title. In terms of readability, I don't think it makes much difference, and it rather explains who this person is. Although an Ophthalmologist may have more stature wrt to vision problems than an Optometrist due to the medical training, when it comes to commenting on lenses and optics I would think that a researcher in the field of Optometry would have the edge. Bottom line is I don't have strong feelings either way. --Vannin (talk) 22:44, 23 August 2008 (UTC)

IMHO Marg's credentials probably should be mentioned, because they help the reader judge the reliability of the source. The reader shouldn't need to download the PDF of his paper to find out. Of course, the fact that the paper was published in the American Journal of Optometry in itself lends credibility (and creates an assumption that the author would be an optometrist).

As it reads now, "Berkeley optometry professor Elwin Marg" inline in the text, is, perhaps, putting too much stress on his credentials, as if trying to emphasize credibility. I would probably change the language to something like "optometry professor Elwin Marg," or simply say "Elwin Marg" in the main text and identify him as a "Berkeley optometry professor" in the footnote.

Better yet, if Marg is not a famous name, just say "A 1952 review article in the American Journal of Optometry pointed out..."

Seeyou is wrong in suggesting that optometrists are inferior to ophthalmologists. It's a bizarre and touchy issue and I've never quite figured it out, although there are parallels in other medical fields. I saw a podiatrist the other day, and my wife commented on there being friction between podiatrists and orthopedists. I learned to my surprise that podiatrists, like optometrists, are "doctors" who are not MDs. (My podiatrist is a "DPM," Doctor of Podiatric Medicine).

I've seen some hints... old articles in which optometrists refer to ophthalmologists as "allopaths..." that make me think there may be a parallel with osteopaths vs. medical doctors, that is the optometry and ophthalmology professions may have had separate historic origins and may represent rival factions, rather than different levels of competence.

In any case, optometrists are highly trained professionals and are "real doctors."

Furthermore, informally, my impression is that optometrists seem to focus on obtaining optimum vision in healthy eyes, while ophthalmologists are rather more like specialists in disease states, so if anything optometrists might have higher credibility with regard to questions regarding how eyes focus. I even have the impression that optometrists may tend to take a little more time on refractions and do better refractions than ophthalmogists.

In the area where I live, the norm seems to be for ophthalmologic practices to include an optometrist who does the refractions.

In any case, it doesn't matter. The reader needs to know that Marg was a professor of optometry, and can judge for himself how credible that makes him. Dpbsmith (talk) 00:55, 24 August 2008 (UTC)

Ah. This is over mentioning his position in the external links section. In that case, I do not think we should do so - it seems awkward to me to do so. Phil Sandifer (talk) 13:08, 24 August 2008 (UTC)

I do not understand why awkward ? The other links have a similar reference like quackwatch or ophthalmology. Seeyou (talk) 17:19, 24 August 2008 (UTC)

Well, a reference to Quackwatch is a reference to the source. In this case, I think clearly noting the journal is sufficient. Phil Sandifer (talk) 21:37, 24 August 2008 (UTC)

I was also asked by Seeyou to comment. I looked at it, and, basically, the link already says that it's published on a optimetrist journal, so there is no real need to repeat the information, it would be like saying "yes, it's published on a journal of optimetry, which is published by an association of optimetrists. Oh, right, and the author is an optometrist". Also, notice that the link was probably not included due to the credentials of the author, but due to the source it was published on, so it's more natural to give more weight to the source.

If the link only had the author's name, then it would be better to include his credentials, in order to make clear to the readers why his paper is considered important enough for inclusion, but this is not the case. The journal publication is probably enough by itself. --Enric Naval (talk) 21:38, 24 August 2008 (UTC)

This whole argument is b*llsh*t. Optometrists are not less clever, less well-read, less scientific or less talented than ophthalmologists, just because the latter has a medical degree. It's just a different specialism. I know several optometrists who are world experts on amblyopia (and several ophthalmologists who aren't). This smacks of an attempt to discredit a perfectly creditable writer on the subject of the BM, rather than address their criticisms. Go ahead, refer to Marg an optometrist if that was his qualification. It doesn't discredit anything he said regarding the BM. Famousdog (talk) 14:39, 31 August 2008 (UTC)

Having an opinion is not the same as having arguments and references. Seeyou (talk) 11:17, 7 September 2008 (UTC)

Its not an opinion. My argument (as clearly set out above) is that you are attempting to discredit Elwin Marg, by insisting that he be referred to as an optometrist - mistakingly believing that an optometrist is somehow less credible than an ophthalmologist. Otherwise, why would you care sooooooo much about his proper job title? Famousdog (talk) 17:54, 9 September 2008 (UTC)

contact lens-like effect of moisture on the eye

"As noted above, the "clear flashes" often spoken of by Bates enthusiasts have been found to be a contact lens-like effect of moisture on the eye." This is definitely false. The referenced article suggests this as an explanation. It hasn't found it to be the explanation.Syd75 (talk) 08:21, 29 August 2008 (UTC)

I've tweaked it further for accuracy. PSWG1920 (talk) 11:11, 29 August 2008 (UTC)

Nice work! --Ronz (talk) 15:07, 29 August 2008 (UTC)

Selection bias

The section on selection bias in the "claimed successes" section is currently labeled as "original research." I really don't think this is a valid tag, but I can see why it has been added. There is no source mentioned that discusses selection bias in relation to the Bates Method specifically. However, selection bias is a general concern that should apply to all "evidence" put forward to support the efficacy of a therapy. Selection bias always occurs and it is something that all experimenters should take into account. It is not "original research". It occurs in all studies of all purported therapies and is a perfectly valid statement without a citation attached to it. Thoughts? Famousdog (talk) 15:08, 31 August 2008 (UTC)

I placed that tag, but I wasn't sure if it was original research or not; the tag has a question mark. But I am fine with letting that paragraph stay in the article. And the tag can be removed if no one objects. PSWG1920 (talk) 15:39, 31 August 2008 (UTC)

I too think the paragraph is uncontroversial, and doesn't need the "original research" tag. And btw., good job with the edits everyone - especially you PSWG1920. Syd75 (talk) 21:10, 31 August 2008 (UTC)

It would be best if we had a source which made the point about selection bias in relation to the Bates method, and without one I think it technically meets the definition of original thought. But I also now think it should probably be allowed to go under the radar. I tagged it originally because I had just removed a rather bloated warning template from the top of the article (which has since been partially restored) and in its place I was individually tagging problematic parts. PSWG1920 (talk) 21:33, 31 August 2008 (UTC)

Scientific evidence that irreversible changes in the shape of the eyeball cause refractive errors

I find this sentence in "Cause of sight problems" troubling, as I've searched for and never have found any such evidence. On the contrary, I've found numerous animal studies that show the opposite. Much research has been done on animals by inducing different refractive errors by introducing a lens corresponding to that refractive error in front of the animals' eyes. The experiences from these experiments tell us that in the animals the changes in the shape of the eyeball are reversible, as the animals return to an emmetropic shape of the eyeball, after these experiments have ended. To the best of my knowledge there has never been produced any scientific evidence that the changes in the shape of the eye in humans are irreversible. This is a view only concluded from the fact that the refractive errors in humans are thought to be irreversible. So until references are found that back up the "scientific evidence" part of the sentence, I'm in favour of changing it back to the original "mainstream view". Syd75 (talk) 15:25, 2 September 2008 (UTC)

I've taken this matter up with ScienceApologist‎ on our respective Talk pages. You may be interested to have a look. SamuelTheGhost (talk) 15:48, 2 September 2008 (UTC)

I have cited a fairly good review piece that indicates directly that refractive errors are anatomical and not physiological. That is not a "point of view": that is reported blandly as a fact. Unless you can find a reliable source which indicates that this is not a fact, you're going to have to live with this. ScienceApologist (talk) 18:08, 2 September 2008 (UTC)

Sorry, ScienceApologist - this is just not correct. On the good side the paragraph no longer claims scientific evidence exist that changes in the shape of the eyeball are irreversible. The problem now is that it wrongly states that Bates disregarded the anatomical features in refractive errors. The source you refered to also says nothing about whether refractive errors are anatomical and not physiological (I believe functional would be a better word here). Note that one doesn't exclude the other. On the contrary, it is quite usual for physiological changes to produce anatomical changes (I see this when I go to the gym to work out). Syd75 (talk) 18:45, 2 September 2008 (UTC)

• I did some quick browsing and Animal Models of Myopia: Learning How Vision Controls the Size of the Eye says that The causes of refractive error, especially myopia, have been the subject of debate for more than a century. Some have held that myopia is primarily an inherited disorder, and others, that myopia is caused by protracted near work and, especially, by accommodation during protracted near work. It has not been possible, based solely on clinical observations, to resolve the relative roles of heredity versus environment in the development of refractive error. We should not therefore suggest that there is a certain explanation of this. It would be simpler to just put Bates' ideas forward without dwelling on competing theories. Colonel Warden (talk) 20:33, 2 September 2008 (UTC)

As the edit by ScienceApologist doesn't make any sense in any way you read it (it doesn't help either that the most common type of refractive error is called physiological myopia), and the reference added says nothing about what is claimed it says (it only talks about the prevalence of refractive errors), I believe this edit should be reverted. Syd75 (talk) 21:54, 2 September 2008 (UTC)

I agree. Go for it. SamuelTheGhost (talk) 21:57, 2 September 2008 (UTC)

Take a look at Wikipedia:Fringe theories/Noticeboard#Bates method if you want to see something amusing. SamuelTheGhost (talk) 10:58, 3 September 2008 (UTC)

Although what we've got back to is certainly better than the unsubstantiated claims of "evidence" and "fact", there is scope to make it better still. We could either say less here, as Colonel Warden suggests, particularly as it's just been discussed in the Accommodation paragraph, or reword and say rather more, citing the paper which the said Colonel Warden has given above. But it would probably be best to work it out here first. I'd certainly like to see that paper cited somewhere. Perhaps some of our usual editors would like to comment SamuelTheGhost (talk) 15:18, 3 September 2008 (UTC)

I did take a look at Wikipedia:Fringe theories/Noticeboard#Bates method. It comes across as somewhere between calling for the naive science self-styled sceptic cavalry and "running to mummy"; just because the concensus that a certain contributor, among many others, so often bray about is going the sensible way, for once. That probably means they will get their way in the end, like bullying the BBC Web Site Complementary Therapy pages off the Internet and, similarly it seems, bullying a Complementary Therapy Degree Course out of existence. If you cannot win the argument, get your way by force of numbers; quite the opposite of logic, reason and intellectual capacity. I long ago came to the conclusion that the "science", logic, reason and general approach of most Wikipedia editors was at the level of first year secondary school, especially the anonymous ones; though I readily acknowledge the much needed breath of fresh air brought by Samuel, Syd, et al (that translates as "and others", for the first year students). RichardKingCEng (talk) 15:28, 3 September 2008 (UTC)

Yeah, we'll get our way eventually. That's just because there are better sources which disdain the Bates method than there are sources which support it. ScienceApologist (talk) 00:18, 4 September 2008 (UTC)

Actually, we have no sources that support it beyond Bates' own articles. Sadly, the article is written as if that were not the case. --Ronz (talk) 00:27, 4 September 2008 (UTC)

Force of numbers, Richard? Oh, please... I think you'll find that sceptics are in the numerical minority, but it might not seem that way to you because the sceptical minority has the evidence decidedly in their favour. Famousdog (talk) 13:29, 8 September 2008 (UTC)

Thanks for spelling "sceptic" thus. I thought you must be a Brit, from your interest in Carlisle. However, "sceptic" means someone who is not credulous. Someone who believes unhesitatingly and uncritically in Bates method is indeed credulous, but so equally is someone who believes unhesitatingly and uncritically in the "orthodox" view. A sceptic is someone who doubts both extreme positions, and searches for the evidence in either direction. I count myself very much a sceptic in that sense. For the rest, please re-read what I wrote below; I do think we might reach consensus that way. SamuelTheGhost (talk) 14:24, 8 September 2008 (UTC)

Sure, but that criticism implies two assumptions: 1) that the orthodox view is an "extreme position". It is not. The weight of evidence favours it overwhelmingly. 2) that people supporting the unorthodox position believe unhestitatingly and uncritically in it. They don't have to, since the weight of evidence favours it overwhelmingly. The sceptic position is not a 50-50 neutral position inbetween Bates and the mainstream. It should be the mainstream. What's your interest in Carlisle? Or are you just trying to psych me out? ;-) Famousdog (talk) 15:32, 8 September 2008 (UTC)

First, thanks to PSWG1920 for the latest edit, which I think deals with the current issue well enough.
In reply to Ronz, there are dozens of "sources that support it"; there is however a severe shortage of material (no books, too few articles) which fully meet the criteria of WP:RS on any side of the argument. So we have to do our best without that. We need very consciously to stick to WP:NPOV and WP:V. If any policy has to give a little (under WP:IAR), it should be WP:OR, but only in drawing very obvious conclusions from agreed facts, and after securing consensus to do so.
I'd like to suggest that we also need to extend the principles of WP:CIVIL and WP:AGF to the whole world, that is, to all the parties in this debate, living or dead. Most people, most of the time, believe they are in the right. If we recognise that, we are in a better position to understand what they are saying, and perhaps to gain some new insights. My original motivation for getting involved in this area of wikipedia wasn't anything to do with Bates method as such; it was my anger at the disgraceful rubbish directed at Huxley, which I think I've succeeded in correcting. The way in which Gardner attacks Bates at a purely personal level did not affect my view of Bates, but it drastically lowered my view of Gardner.
We also need to be very careful not to go beyond the evidence. The way to counter a mistaken view is not to aggressively assert the opposite view; it is to carefully explain what the real position is. The eye-care professionals don't know everything. With very few exceptions they don't claim to know everything. There is therefore no justification for our writing as if they did make that claim. There is room for doubt in all science, particularly in medical science.
Having said all that, I think we can do it, that is we can create an article that is accurate, informative and fair. Let's all try and do that. SamuelTheGhost (talk) 10:46, 4 September 2008 (UTC)

Mainstream view

There is a big problem with the term "mainstream view" as it was being employed in this article. Trying to attribute a generally accepted fact such as the anatomical shape of an eye is what leads to refractive errors rather than "stress" or "strain" is problematic. We should not attribute what is generally accepted as fact as the opinion of some nebulous "mainstream" group when most of the people who accept this fact do not consider it to be an opinion. Doing so takes an editorial side that is not seen in the sources and misleads the reader into mistaking what is generally considered (by the vast majority of sources) to be a fact as an opinion. As such, it is a violation of WP:NPOV and WP:SYNTH since there is absolutely no "mainstream" source which indicates that the point is a mainstream view in this instance. I have reintroduced an excellent layman's source which attributes refractive errors to the shape of the eye and does not attribute it to strain/stress. In that source, it is stated simply as fact -- not a "view". Therefore, we must do the same.

ScienceApologist (talk) 12:56, 4 September 2008 (UTC)

There is a misunderstanding here. You think I and others, objected to the fact that "the anatomical shape of an eye is what leads to refractive errors". This is not the case. I, at least, find this uncontroversial. The objection is to your statement that there is scientific evidence for "irreversible changes in the shape of the eyeball". This I strongly object to, and I asked you for some reference that proved this scientifically, showing that the myopic eye can only elongate, and the hyperopic eye can only shorten. As myopia and other refractive errors are known to sometimes increase, sometimes decrease, sometimes the myopic eye later can become hyperopic, and the hyperopic eye become myopic, and as I have a fairly good oversight over scientific research in this area, and I have never heard this claim before, I strongly believe that this is a false statement. Syd75 (talk) 13:16, 4 September 2008 (UTC)

"Irreversible" is a weird word. Certainly there are surgeries which exist that "reverse" the anatomical shape of the eye. What is without evidence is the belief that the shape of the eye can be affected by extraocular muscles. So Bates believed that the variability of refractive errors was due, in large part, to the way people used their eyes physiologically. This is without scientific evidence. Indeed the scientific evidence points toward anatomical features as being largely independent of physiological context. There are some indications of correlations between certain types of behaviors and a worsening of refractive errors: but these behaviors are seen in the literature to be strictly degenerative and there are no behaviors which are shown to reverse this. This is where Bates' pseudoscience departs from the scientific evidence. ScienceApologist (talk) 13:38, 4 September 2008 (UTC)

ScienceApologist, the source that you added does not address Bates, and the way it is used at least comes very close to being a synthesis; moreover, the referenced Time article already explains the concept being discussed: "Orthodox explanation of eye function is that the shape of the eyeball is as unchanging as a glass eye; focusing is done by the elastic lens at the front of the eye; the six muscles around each eye have no function except to turn the eyeball. In myopia (nearsightedness) the eyeball is usually long from front to back; in far-sighted people it is often short. In a nearsighted eye, the image falls in front of the retina; in a farsighted eye, behind the retina. Astigmatism is usually laid to slight eye distortions. As orthodox doctors agree that a patient's efforts can not alter the shape of an eyeball, they accept distortions as final, prescribe glasses. ... Optical orthodoxy is just a finger-snap to many U.S. therapists, whose offices have as many discarded eyeglasses as Lourdes has crutches. They will try to fix almost any eye disorder (except infections, tumors, etc.) by exercise. Some follow the theory of the late Dr. William H. Bates (died 1931) that the six outside eye muscles not only turn the eye but change the shape of the eyeball."

How about "mainstream medical view"? PSWG1920 (talk) 13:47, 4 September 2008 (UTC)

One problem with your latest edit, ScienceApologist, is that you falsely claims that Bates disregarded the anatomical anomalies in refractive errors. This would be straw man argument, as you suggest that Bates would have opposed this. He didn't. Everything that is on that page from National Eye Institute could just as well be written by Bates. If your point is only that orthodox ophthalmology doesn't accept the view that the extraocular muscles can affect the refractive state of the eye, I think you can easily put your point forwards in better ways than this. Syd75 (talk) 13:58, 4 September 2008 (UTC)

The main issue is that the difference between Bates and the rest of the world isn't reliably defined as "mainstream" in any source I see: nor is it reliably defined as a "view". In fact, I see it as a fact of science. ScienceApologist (talk) 21:43, 4 September 2008 (UTC)

I have no objections (I'm neutral) about your latest edit, btw. But it would be interresting to hear in what way you have arrived at these facts. How can you be so sure that cocontraction of extraocular muscle pairs won't affect the shape of the eyeball? If you have seen any research into this, I would be very interrested to hear of it. Syd75 (talk) 22:01, 4 September 2008 (UTC)

Recommendation

While we do need to present the scientific facts and theories per FRINGE, I think it would be best to use the sources we have to discuss how absurd the Bates method truly is. None of the sources we currently have are supportive of it. --Ronz (talk) 14:35, 4 September 2008 (UTC)

Rather than "to discuss how absurd the Bates method truly is" I'd prefer "to discuss why eye-care professionals regard the Bates method as mistaken". But I'm sure that's what you meant. As for your second point, I've been mulling over the possibility of creating a new article List of books describing the Bates method (partly motivated by Seeyou's obsession with NVI). Do you think that's a good idea? SamuelTheGhost (talk) 15:34, 4 September 2008 (UTC)

I prefer to follow NPOV and FRINGE. From my reading of the sources, "absurd" is an appropriate summary. "Ridiculous" is another.

The list of books would be a WP:POVFORK and an obvious attempt to find further ways to violate NPOV, OR, and FRINGE beyond what's already being done with this article. --Ronz (talk) 16:01, 4 September 2008 (UTC)

Could I ask for clarification here? As I understand it, you don't regard the pro-Bates books as "sources". Then you speak of your "reading of the sources". So does that exclude the pro-Bates books? Have you in fact ever read any of them? SamuelTheGhost (talk) 16:15, 4 September 2008 (UTC)

By "sources", I mean the references used in the article. --Ronz (talk) 16:20, 4 September 2008 (UTC)

There are four pro-Bates books now being used as references in the article, so on that basis your "None of the sources we currently have are supportive of it." isn't true. And you've ducked my main question. SamuelTheGhost (talk) 16:30, 4 September 2008 (UTC)

There are already too many dispersed Bates-related content forks. The solution is to edit this material, to merge and condense it into a concise, readable summary. Instead of spreading the few morsels of well-sourced information even farther apart, make them stand out by streamlining the material. Creating more Bates-related content forks would be a step in the wrong direction. MastCell ^Talk 16:35, 4 September 2008 (UTC)

OK. I see your point. It was only a thought ... SamuelTheGhost (talk) 17:14, 4 September 2008 (UTC)

• Regarding Ronz' point, my impression is that the article already gives undue prominence to ridicule in the reference to Martin Gardner's criticism in the lede. I like Martin Gardner's work but it does not seem that the opinion of a mathematical journalist is appropriate in this place. It should go as it gives the article the tone of an attack piece. Colonel Warden (talk) 18:16, 4 September 2008 (UTC)

When all independent sources ridicule the subject matter, then we follow NPOV and report it. --Ronz (talk) 20:57, 4 September 2008 (UTC)

If the mission is to discredit the validity of the Bates method, I don't think the ad hominem attacks, straw man arguments and attempts at ridicule that many opponents of the method frequently uses, is the way to go. A pure fact-based rebuttal point for point of Bates' claims, based on valid and referenced research is far more effective. The point that all the sources we use ridicule the subject matter is a bit stupid, because it is a direct effect of the fact that we choose to only include the sources that ridicule the subject matter. There are a large number of books written by medical doctors, optometrists and ophthalmologists, several of them with PhDs, that embraces the method. But we don't use them here as sources because we consider them fringe sources. I agree with this decision. But even if the Bates method is a fringe theory, that doesn't mean the rebuttal shouldn't be fact-based and conducted respectfully. Syd75 (talk) 21:39, 4 September 2008 (UTC)

Follow the sources. At least one major reliable source ridicules the Bates method. It is not up to Wikipedia editors to censor this information from the reader. It is also not our job to take an opinion on whether one should or shouldn't ridicule proponents of Bates method. Nor is it Wikipedia's job to do the actual ridiculing or debunking. All we must do is report the facts surrounding the Bates Method, the general disdain and low-esteem it is afforded by the scientific and medical communities, and leave it at that. ScienceApologist (talk) 21:58, 4 September 2008 (UTC)

Agreed. Just read the sources. --Ronz (talk) 23:23, 4 September 2008 (UTC)

So it's okay to just use ad hominem attacks and straw man arguments (as some of the sources here do) to "debunk" Bates, while f.ex. PhD dissertations that supports Bates are not allowed as sources? Syd75 (talk) 23:35, 4 September 2008 (UTC)

PhD and Master's theses should be considered unpublished (or self-published) observations unless they have been published elsewhere in, f.ex, a peer-reviewed journal. Having experienced both, the peer-review process is far more rigourous than an oral defense. Famousdog (talk) 13:41, 8 September 2008 (UTC)

"So it's okay to just use ad hominem attacks and straw man arguments" I believe this is a straw man argument, as no one here is doing any such thing, or even suggesting it. --Ronz (talk) 23:46, 4 September 2008 (UTC)

We're doing it indirectly by referencing sources that do just that. It leads to a bias, especially in consideration that none of the sources that supports Bates are allowed here. Syd75 (talk) 00:01, 5 September 2008 (UTC)

• I'm not sure what has transpired here previously but it seems that the selection of sources may not have been NPOV. For example, I just searched for a reasonably reliable source and soon found this item from The Times, the UK's principal journal of record: Conditions: Refractive error. This states, Vision education, or the Bates Method, is a programme of eye exercises that aims to improve sight without resorting to lenses or surgery. Although there have not been any recent clinical trials, ophthalmologists agree that the exercises may help some cases of short sight and certain types of squint.. This not only does not ridicule the method, it indicates that it may be of some value. I look around a bit more and find this piece in the Wall Street Journal: A Workout for Your Eyes. This is no enconium but does not ridicule and also says that eye exercises may help in some cases. I've seen enough and so am removing Gardner's opinion. Colonel Warden (talk) 22:08, 4 September 2008 (UTC)

The sources you cite are journalism (with all the associated sensationalism and absence of fact-checking that goes along with it). Try finding a source in a peer-reviewed journal, written by a scientist perhaps, that concludes "hey, this Bates guy was right!" I think you will struggle. Famousdog (talk) 13:45, 8 September 2008 (UTC)

I also think it is telling that in the Times article, the "complimentary therapy" section that discusses Bates is squarely at the end and about 1/10 the length of the sections devoted to more "mainstream" treatments. It smacks of something added at the last minute to fulfill an obligation to provide "alternative views". Anyway, the Times is a bloody Tory rag that I wouldn't wipe my bottom with! Famousdog (talk) 13:51, 8 September 2008 (UTC)

... and unfortunately, the Wall Street Journal article is not freely available, so I can't read all of it (and surely this excludes it from being sourced?), however it does begin "most eye doctors take a dim view of the idea." Hardly complimentary (pun unintended)! Famousdog (talk) 13:57, 8 September 2008 (UTC)

"I'm not sure what has transpired here previously but it seems that the selection of sources may not have been NPOV." Then I suggest you read the discussions here, read the sources, read this article, and follow WP:CON. --Ronz (talk) 23:32, 4 September 2008 (UTC)

• No, consensus may change and so we start afresh with your contention that this article should ridicule. This proposition violates our core policy of WP:NPOV which requires an impartial tone throughout: A neutral characterization of disputes requires presenting viewpoints with a consistently impartial tone, otherwise articles end up as partisan commentaries even while presenting all relevant points of view.. Consensus may not override core policies and so that's that. Content which does not have a properly dispassionate tone, such as the Gardener piece, should be removed forthwith. There seem to be numerous better sources which summarise the method in a more objective and up-to-date way and so these should be substituted. Colonel Warden (talk) 06:49, 5 September 2008 (UTC)

It's really striking how often people make an explicit claim of consensus when it is clearly absent. As in this case. SamuelTheGhost (talk) 08:11, 5 September 2008 (UTC)

"so we start afresh with your contention that this article should ridicule." Another straw man argument. Please do not misrepresent others. Thanks! --Ronz (talk) 18:57, 5 September 2008 (UTC)

Brain training

Much work is done by the brain in processing visual inputs to fill in the blind spot and otherwise improve visual perception. There is an experiment in which subjects have their vision inverted by means of a prism. They are able to adjust to this in time and then have to readjust when the inversion effect is removed. I myself have some personal experience of such adjustment to compensate for vision defects. This is sometimes exploited when contact lens prescriptions are set up to provide monovision in which the eyes separately cover different ranges of focus. My impression is that Bates did not address such issues but that his methods may have benefited from them. Do modern versions of the method, to which the article alludes, explore this aspect? Colonel Warden (talk) 18:16, 4 September 2008 (UTC)

This is not what is commonly referred to as "brain training", what you are talking about is simple visual adaptation. Its been known about for a long time, has been quite extensively researched and has, as far as I can tell, no relevance to Bates. It would count as original research to make any connection since most research on this topic post-dates Bates. Famousdog (talk) 13:29, 10 September 2008 (UTC)

See Clearly Method

I disagree with the removal of this section. There are four sources independent of SCM as well as Bates which link the two in some way. The details SamuelTheGhost added previously were summed up in the words "among other issues" (which one can go to the See Clearly Method article to find.) PSWG1920 (talk) 13:07, 5 September 2008 (UTC)

It's not a question of sources; the facts are clear. The question is, why should this material be included, and to say that we can "link the two in some way" is hopelessly inadequate as a reason. The reason the SCM got into trouble is that they charged a lot of money, made exaggerated claims, and didn't honour their money-back guarantee. That could have arisen in exactly the same way if they'd been teaching Hungarian. If they had, would that justify putting it into the article on Hungarian language? I put the full details in as a second-best option, to try and make the picture clear, but I'd much prefer to omit the incident altogether. It tells us nothing whatever about Bates method, and thus is completely off-topic. Its inclusion has always seemed to me a crude example of a "guilt by association" smear, and I'm a bit surprised you're so keen on it. SamuelTheGhost (talk) 13:33, 5 September 2008 (UTC)

I do see your point, however, surfing the net I have noticed that some people think that the See Clearly Method is the Bates method. Having that section in this article set that straight. PSWG1920 (talk) 13:52, 5 September 2008 (UTC)

Well, I must admit that that had never occurred to me, but the article is hardly written as if that were the main message, and there's better ways of saying it if necessary. Maybe some people think BM is SCM; Seeyou keeps telling us that BM is NVI; it does make me realise that the words "Bates method" cannot be anyone's trademark, which means that anyone can use them. Perhaps that fact is worth drawing attention to. To be fair, the only options are either to atttempt to list all current purveyors of Bates method, which could only be done over Ronz' dead body, or simply to say there's lots of them out there, without identifying any particular one, and caveat emptor. SamuelTheGhost (talk) 17:52, 5 September 2008 (UTC)

The See Clearly Method is probably the most notable contemporary "variant" of the Bates method, as there are plenty of independent sources which address it specifically. Such does not seem to be the case with the Goodrich/Quackenbush approach of "Natural Vision Improvement", for instance. Perhaps the "See Clearly Method" subsection should be further rewritten, but I definitely think it belongs in this article. PSWG1920 (talk) 18:07, 5 September 2008 (UTC)

I agree that it should be mentioned. I'm not sure how much we need to go into it, nor why we need to use self-published sources to partially verify original research. --Ronz (talk) 18:42, 5 September 2008 (UTC)

"The reason the SCM got into trouble is that they charged a lot of money, made exaggerated claims, and didn't honour their money-back guarantee. That could have arisen in exactly the same way if they'd been teaching Hungarian."

But if the See Clearly method actually worked, their claims wouldn't have been exaggerations, not very many people would have wanted their money back, and it would have been easy for the See Clearly Method people to honor their guarantee. The same issue certainly could arise in the context of teaching Hungarian, but it doesn't, because teachers of Hungarian are able to deliver what they promise. In fact there is a language school in Boston that has been running subway posters saying "Guaranteed Swahili!" for years and years, with no objection by the state attorney-general. Dpbsmith (talk) 01:44, 6 September 2008 (UTC)

I'd be really interested to see the exact terms implied by "Guaranteed Swahili!" If there was an organised body of professionals dedicated to the notion that Swahili couldn't be learnt, don't you think the Boston school would be in trouble? In fact there are many dozens of BM teachers around the world who are functioning without complaint, because they avoid silly promises. There have been at least two other lawsuits in the US (Corbett and Hackett, see Pollack's book pp. 7-8) where the practitioners were acquitted. BM is an educational process, and every responsible teacher knows that you don't always win. Bates himself was inclined to exaggerate, which I think harmed his cause greatly, but most of his successors make more modest claims. Meanwhile, I'm tempted to go to Boston, fail to learn Swahili, and sue them. SamuelTheGhost (talk) 07:37, 6 September 2008 (UTC)

Getting back to the question of whether the See Clearly Method should be mentioned in this article (remember this is not a forum for general discussion of the subject), I would respond to your original argument by pointing out that the Bates method is a much narrower topic than the Hungarian language. Thus applying the same reasoning to what should and shouldn't be in articles about the respective subjects is highly suspect. Moreover, if a company sold a "teach yourself Hungarian" kit with a money-back guarantee that they were found not to be honoring despite many attempts to get it, no remotely sensible person would deduce that everyone claiming to teach Hungarian is a quack. The same is not the case with the See Clearly Method and vision improvement, hence the need to address that here. PSWG1920 (talk) 22:50, 6 September 2008 (UTC)

Why aren't we including accounts of the many Bates teachers and schools, past and present, who have functioned without complaintt, and with apparently only satisfied customers? SamuelTheGhost (talk) 10:31, 7 September 2008 (UTC)

I think we can do that if we have independent sources which discuss them in some detail. PSWG1920 (talk) 15:07, 7 September 2008 (UTC)

There is, as you know, a severe dearth of independent discussion of such things. The two exceptions I can think of are the cases of Corbett and Hackett mentioned above, both of which are described in Pollack's book. For Corbett most of it is in Margaret Corbett already, but that needn't be a bar given that See Clearly Method also has its own article. For Hackett, Pollack just mentions that she was tried and acquitted, saying only that it was "similar" to Corbett's case but in New York. The crucial point in both these cases, however, is that they could produce lots of satisfied customers as witnesses, and presumably the prosecution couldn't find unsatisfied ones, since if they had been able to they would have done. SamuelTheGhost (talk) 18:42, 7 September 2008 (UTC)

Perhaps we could create an "After Bates" section to chronicle the history up to the present day. This could include what is currently in "Modern Variants" as well as Huxley's story, plus whatever else we could get away with adding. PSWG1920 (talk) 19:44, 7 September 2008 (UTC)

I think that's an excellent idea. Would others agree??? SamuelTheGhost (talk) 20:19, 7 September 2008 (UTC)

It is an option, but in my opinion a much simpler and correct solution is to stick to the literature. When we refer to the old Bates method we speak of the Bates method for Better Eyesight and when we speak of the Bates method of today we speak of the Bates method of Natural vision improvement. Ths is exactly what literature speaks of. It is important to understand we are only editors. We can not just present how we see the BM ourselves. It should be based on references.Seeyou (talk) 21:01, 7 September 2008 (UTC)

Neither Corbett nor Hackett had anything to do with NVI. It might be possible to mention NVI as one of the many schools currently operating. SamuelTheGhost (talk) 21:41, 7 September 2008 (UTC)

I do agree with SamuelTheGhost here. I would add that attempting to distinguish between the "Bates method for better eyesight" and the "Bates method of natural vision improvement" will if anything only confuse the reader. PSWG1920 (talk) 21:55, 7 September 2008 (UTC)

A note on the Huxley incident

Another indirect source, but this one specifies when and where Cerf published the account:

“ Bennett Cerf wrote this account of the time Huxley addressed a Hollywood banquet in the April 12, 1952, Saturday Review:

When he arose to make his address he wore no glasses, and evidently experienced no difficulty in reading the paper he had planted on the lectern. Had the exercises really given him normal vision? I, along with 1200 other guests, watched with astonishment while he rattled glibly on . . . Then suddenly he faltered -- and the disturbing truth became obvious. He wasn't reading the address at all. He had learned it by heart. To refresh his memory he brought the paper closer to his eyes. When it was only an inch or so away he still couldn't read it, and he had to fish for a magnifying glass in his pocket. It was an agonizing moment.

”

--"Reality shopping; a consumer's guide to new age hokum. Alan M. MacRobert. Whole Earth Review (Autumn 1986): pp4(11).

MacRobert also says that "in 1956, a Manhattan optometrist, Philip Pollack, wrote the definitive book exposing [the Bates system's] failures, The Truth About Eye Exercises. Dpbsmith (talk) 02:20, 7 September 2008 (UTC)

The Cerf quote is given in Bates method#The case of Huxley. It is given there with reference to . In that book by Gardner (I have it on my desk as I write) the details are given exactly as MacRobert has copied them. They aren't all in the BM article solely to avoid pointless clutter. As for Pollack's book (I have it on my desk as I write), it is referred to I think nine times ( and ) in the Bates method article, starting with the lead section. Furthermore I referred to it in my message to you above, when I said "(Corbett and Hackett, see Pollack's book pp. 7-8)" which you obviously didn't study very carefully. But keep on trying. SamuelTheGhost (talk) 09:36, 7 September 2008 (UTC)

"...which you obviously didn't study very carefully. But keep on trying." Watch the personal attacks, Sam. Famousdog (talk) 14:09, 8 September 2008 (UTC)

RFC Nr : 1 change of title Bates method into Bates method / Natural Vision improvement

RFC is to change the current title Bates method into Bates method / Natural vision improvement.

The arguments to do this are listed below :

The article Natural Vision improvement directs already to the Bates method article. See :

• http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Natural_vision_improvement&redirect=no

This is confusing since the Bates method and Natural Vision Improvement have a strong connection but are not exactly equal. See paragraph : Removal of sourced quotes to understand why.

In books published today and the Bates method and Natural vision improvement are used to describe the same subject. See the refererence book quote below :

Professional Engineer Doug Marsh in his book :

The reason my glasses were in my pocket that day wasn’t because I’d broken them. Rather I’d been purposely not wearing them for long periods as part of my experiment with Natural Vision Improvement, (NVI), also called the Bates Method. .

Also when you go to Amazon : And search for Bates method or Natural Vision Improvement you will find the same book listed at the top.

In the discussion above no valid arguments was given against the change.Seeyou (talk) 08:55, 7 September 2008 (UTC)

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• Oppose - This seems like an odd name for an article. I have not seen any other article named as such (with a / in the middle). I would suggest dedicating one (new) section of this article to discuss NVI and how it differs from Bates Method. -- Levine2112 ^discuss 17:57, 7 September 2008 (UTC)

• Oppose use of slash because this creates a "subpage" which is probably not what was intended. Dpbsmith (talk) 18:20, 7 September 2008 (UTC)

• No it doesn't. -Jéské ^{(v^_^v Call me Mr. Bonaparte!)} 08:47, 9 September 2008 (UTC)

• Oppose because the naming convention is to use the most common name. I don't think there is a good, common, well-accepted generic name, like "Chiropractic" or "Psychoanalysis" or "Homeopathy" for "systems for correction of refractive error in the eye, without the use of lenses, by means of eye exercises." I don't think "Natural vision improvement" is such a name; it's just a description. "Bates method" returns forty thousand Google hits, "Natural vision improvement" only twenty thousand, and the naming convention is to use the most common name. If the name "Psychoanalysis" didn't exist, I'd want to see the article on psychoanalysis named "Freudianism," not "Natural mental illness improvement" or "Freudianism, Jungism, and similar systems of talk therapy." If I'm wrong in assuming that Bates was really the founder and that the various modern-day methods are descended from Bates' work, then it gets more complicated, though. Dpbsmith (talk) 18:20, 7 September 2008 (UTC)

Seeyou's comment : Very strange. I also did a google test on Bates method and Natural vision improvement.

Result : Bates method : 362,000 hits

Result : Natural Vision Improvement : 14,700,000 hits  ?! Seeyou (talk) 18:41, 5 October 2008 (UTC)

Put them in quotation marks, which will find only pages which have the exact phrase. "Bates method" gets twice as many results as "Natural Vision Improvement". PSWG1920 (talk) 19:06, 5 October 2008 (UTC)

Thanks for your info, PSWG1920. Seeyou (talk) 20:21, 5 October 2008 (UTC)

Still quite a lot of results for Natural Vision Improvement. So in my opinion the logical sequence should be Bates method / Natural Vision Improvement. 2 of the three times Bates mehhod is used and in 1 of the three times Natural Vision Improvement. By changing the title we would improve the article. Seeyou (talk) 21:23, 8 October 2008 (UTC)

RFC Nr : 2 Removal of sourced quotes

The following request for comment regarding the removal of all the sourced valuable Bates / NVI quotes in the article. Since the BM / NVI article is controversial there are 2 parties with a very opposite opinion regarding the subject of this article. I don’t think the current developments should be accepted.

This article should be written from multiple points of view not just one. Multiple points of view meaning the BM advocate point of view ( the dominant one(s)), the point of view of Ophthalmology, and the skeptic point of view. By doing so the result will be a neutral article in which the reader can read the different points of view ant conclude its own conclusion. Not the conclusion of only a skeptic or advocate editors. If this is not achieved censor is present.

The argument of Original research Ronz is using is complete fake, since bates is the original researcher so this complete article should not exist. Note Bates research is mentioned in the references of the American Academy of Ophthalmology. ( Also removed in the references ! ). Why ? It was present ! Anyhow nonsense and vandalism is currently present.

Note also in the past there has also been an attempt to vandalise this article by multiple virtual IP addresses. This is the same situation except for the strategy. The current editors are no longer multiple IP adressess but are all quite new in making edits in general and editing this article. Makes you wonder why.

Please give your arguments if the book referenced quotes should return in the article or should stay removed as the skeptics want. I repeat the neutrality of this article is completely gone.

Quote A The only available definition

Natural Vision Improvement teacher Thomas R. Quackenbush defines the Bates method thus:

An educational program created by ophthalmologist William H. Bates, M.D., in which natural, correct vision habits—based on relaxation of the mind and body—are taught; optional self-healing activities and games are often included to accelerate integration and self-healing; commonly misunderstood as only "eye exercises"—even by many "Bates Method" teachers.

Seeyou's comment : Suppose this article was about the law of gravity and the only given definition would be removed ! A bit strange is not it. The only way to remove any definition in any article is to replace it be a new one ! This has not happened !

• I think I agree with that. The article should include a short, succinct definition of what the "Bates method" is, and the definition should be from a source sympathetic to the method. We should use the best source we can find, so if someone can find a better source than Quackenbush it should be replaced, but on the face of it a definition, made by an editor of a collection of Bates' work, sounds good to me. Dpbsmith (talk) 18:39, 7 September 2008 (UTC)
• Weak agree. Per PSWG1920. -- Levine2112 ^discuss 02:30, 9 September 2008 (UTC)
• Agree with serious reservations It should be made clear that this definition is coming from a practitioner and "believer" in Bates' methods. Otherwise it lends undue weight to the use of words like "educational", "natural", "correct", etc. All of which are highly suspect POV claims. Famousdog (talk) 17:45, 9 September 2008 (UTC)
• Disagree. We follow NPOV, OR, FRINGE, etc here. If we don't have a proper source, we don't mention it. --Ronz (talk) 19:41, 9 September 2008 (UTC)
  • Comment - The Quackenbush source is a book published by North Atlantic Books, a decently reputable publisher Certainly there are better publishers out there, though and sure, there may be better sources out there for this information, but overall, this one isn't bad and passes the WP:RS sniff test. I have no idea how you think OR applies here. This seems to be faithful to the original text. However, I would be extremely curious to read your explanation as to why you feel OR applies here. -- Levine2112 ^discuss 20:17, 9 September 2008 (UTC)
• Partially agree - The bit after the second semicolon is just a veiled attack on other Bates teachers, so should definitely be omitted. The bit after the first semicolon is fairly vacuous, and clumsy in including the words "self-healing" twice, so could with benefit be omitted. Since "educational" and "are taught" say the same thing, the "educational" could go, leaving just "A program created by ophthalmologist William H. Bates, M.D., in which natural, correct vision habits—based on relaxation of the mind and body—are taught." That would do nicely, and could still have Quackenbush's name on it. SamuelTheGhost (talk) 22:15, 9 September 2008 (UTC)
• Undecided / neutral - First of all, it should be considered that this definition comes from a glossary. Secondly, what does it really add to the article? Now, I had seen some sweeping criticisms of this article which I felt were, for the most part, unfair and inaccurate; however, the "Natural Vision Improvement" subsection did seem rather problematic, as it continued to lack a source independent of the subject. Therefore I thought it would help to delete it. Now, if we re-add Quackenbush's definition or part of it, the best context would be in the proposed "After Bates" section which has yet to be created. If we don't find an independent source which mentions Quackenbush, however, I'm not sure that we can justify quoting him like this. PSWG1920 (talk) 01:34, 10 September 2008 (UTC)
  • That seems like very sound reasoning, I am going to change my entry based on what you have written here. -- Levine2112 ^discuss 01:48, 10 September 2008 (UTC)
    • Since Seeyou has again brought this up below, I thought I'd point out that this is not the only available definition. Look here, for example: "The Bates Method is a non-invasive and natural way of enhancing visual acuity and relearning how to see properly, using simple techniques to relive eye strain and improve brain-eye coordination." If we really need a definition from an advocate, that one would probably do better. No doubt others could be found in different books. PSWG1920 (talk) 06:40, 3 October 2008 (UTC)

A small irritating/amusing detail about that, namely that the given quotation is part of the publisher's blurb about the book, which is printed on the back cover (though with "relieve" with the correct spelling), but nothing quite as snappy seems to appear inside the book. SamuelTheGhost (talk) 12:09, 3 October 2008 (UTC)

Quote B Bates on open eyelid sunning

Bates did temper his claims regarding open eyelid sunning in later editions of his magazine, Better Eyesight.

Sunning : Let the sun shine on your closed eyelids for short intervals. Choose preferably the early morning sunlight. It is the light rays which benefit the eyes rather than the heat rays. The sun loses some of its effect when it comes through glass.

Seeyou’s comment : Bates is ridiculed for his open eyelid sunning. See the quackwatch site below :

• http://www.quackwatch.com/11Ind/bates.html

Shouldn’t Bates be given all the room to make clear what he really meant in his own words ! Note : Bates was also ridiculed on sunning in this article in the past.

As I read the "sunning" section of current version of the article, I don't see Bates being "ridiculed" and I don't see his views being represented unfairly. Dpbsmith (talk) 18:39, 7 September 2008 (UTC)

> He later suggested allowing direct sunlight to shine on closed eyes as part of his "routine treatment".[38] But he never renounced the claim, set forth in Perfect Sight Without Glasses, that looking directly at the sun even with open eyes could not cause irreversible damage.

See the link below paragraph Sunning :

* http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Bates_method&diff=193797496&oldid=193780148#Sunning

Routine treatment ?!

Set Fort in Perfect Sight Without Glasses ?! ( quote is sourced Better Eyesight magazine of a later date. )

could not cause irreversible damage. Books about the BM today only speak of closed eyelid sunning ! Editors ignore the fact there is also an improved BM of today. Seeyou (talk) 19:31, 7 September 2008 (UTC)

• Comment. Represent the best sources. Our job is to get it right. If a source is getting it wrong (but there is no other source actually saying that they've got it wrong), both versions should be presented without creating an argument of who is right or who is wrong. On a side note, be wary of Quackwatch as a source. It has been deemed a partisan and unreliable source by ArbCom decision. Use it with caution and be sure to note that you are dealing with opinion and not fact when citing from this source. -- Levine2112 ^discuss 02:36, 9 September 2008 (UTC)

Note first of all that the Quackwatch page in question is simply a reproduction of a chapter of a book by an optometrist. Also, I find it strange that Seeyou is referring to an old version of the article to make a point, although I do agree with him/her that the current article could clarify that Bates felt the benefit was from the light rays rather than the heat rays. The quote Seeyou wants to use probably isn't the best, however, because it is not actually Bates' words, though his magazine did publish it. PSWG1920 (talk) 03:02, 9 September 2008 (UTC)

I would certainly use the book in lieu of the reproduction of it at the partisan website. It will be more credible as such, IMHO. -- Levine2112 ^discuss 03:33, 9 September 2008 (UTC)

The citation shows that it's from a book. The problem is that Quackwatch is the only place online which hosts the text as such (though Google books does contain a "snippet view", which can at least confirm that Quackwatch isn't making things up here.) It seems like it's better to link to the text if you can, especially considering the number of times it is referenced. Editors should be able to check the source easily, if possible. PSWG1920 (talk) 04:11, 9 September 2008 (UTC)

Okay, that's cool. -- Levine2112 ^discuss 04:37, 9 September 2008 (UTC)

Quote C definition of N.V.I.

According to Janet Goodrich :

Natural Vision Improvement : A lifestyle method of improving eyesight by wholistic means without the use of optical devices. The Bates method merged with modern theories of brain function, character and responsibility for one’s self and state of being..

Seeyou’s comment : Sourced book definitions should be copied exactly as they are and stay as quotes so the can’t be changed be editors with other intentions than improving wikipedia.

I agree. Dpbsmith (talk) 18:39, 7 September 2008 (UTC)

Note that the "Natural Vision Improvement" subsection had been almost entirely a collection of quotes from Goodrich and Quackenbush, further with no independent source. I'm not sure but past experience leads me to believe that is not acceptable. Perhaps an "After Bates" section, as suggested above, will provide a better context for this. PSWG1920 (talk) 05:02, 8 September 2008 (UTC)

• Somewhat agree. Quotes are fine, but faithful summarizations can be just as good or better. -- Levine2112 ^discuss 02:38, 9 September 2008 (UTC)

Quote D Not a cure !

 : According to Janet Goodrich :

Improving vision naturally is an internal transformation, not a treatment, cure or makeover by external forces. .>

Seeyou's comment : Valuable Important information for understanding since a lot of people will compare NVI with their quick fix glasses or contacts. ( I did ). A lot of people will also think the responsibility for their improvement lies by the teacher. This is not true of course.. Aldous Huxley said it very clear Doctors don’t heal Nature does.Seeyou (talk) 19:33, 7 September 2008 (UTC)

If it's "not a treatment [or] cure," what is it? A religion? And what would be the point of participating in it if it doesn't "treat" or "cure" what ails you? Famousdog (talk) 14:13, 8 September 2008 (UTC)

• Comment. I am confused what you are asking for editors to comment on here. However, if the Goodrich source is deemed reliable, then there is no reason why her opinion can't be presented in the article. -- Levine2112 ^discuss 02:40, 9 September 2008 (UTC)

"After Bates" section

As discussed above, it would probably he helpful to create an "After Bates" section to chronicle the history up to the present day. This could include what is currently in "Modern variants" and "The case of Huxley", and whatever else we decide to add. A good first step might be to list the notable proponents who could be mentioned and whatever independent sources refer to them. PSWG1920 (talk) 15:41, 8 September 2008 (UTC)

That's definitely the way to go about it. From what little we've found so far it looks like if we can find any acceptable sources they aren't going to be very positive for Bates method or its proponents. --Ronz (talk) 16:44, 8 September 2008 (UTC)

this makes a lot of sense--Vannin (talk) 16:58, 8 September 2008 (UTC)

I agree. This does make a lot of sense. Though I am not sure that "After Bates" should be the title (but something to that effect). -- Levine2112 ^discuss 02:28, 10 September 2008 (UTC)

Great idea, and I think "After Bates" would be a pretty accurate and succinct title. Famousdog (talk) 13:33, 10 September 2008 (UTC)

I have begun listing individuals who could be mentioned along with the independent sources which discuss them. Feel free to add to this list as I am making it communal property. Or comment on it here. PSWG1920 (talk) 02:56, 10 September 2008 (UTC)

Since there seems to be a clear consensus, I got the ball rolling and created the "After Bates" section. At this point it is very disjointed and needs a lot of things filled in. Merging the Margaret Darst Corbett article would be an obvious step. PSWG1920 (talk) 03:49, 11 September 2008 (UTC)

I have copied most of Margaret Darst Corbett into this article, removing details which were redundant here. The only other part I left out was the Pollack quote at the end, which I wasn't quite sure whether or how to use. Beyond that, it can be redirected. PSWG1920 (talk) 05:34, 13 September 2008 (UTC)

Seeyou’s comment : The correct and only solution is to stick to the literature. When we refer to the old Bates method we should speak of the Bates method for Better Eyesight and when we speak of the Bates method of today we should speak of the Bates method of Natural vision improvement. By mentioning this explanations in the introduction we can make this clear for the public and ourselves. And this is exactly what dominant literature speaks of. What we mention and say should be based on references and literature. Books being published today still speak of Bates method and Natural Vision Improvement as if they are equal. ( See the reference of Doug Marsh his book dated 2007 ). This is confusing because they are not equal to our current definitions. The Bates method of today has changed on some aspects and has become part of Natural Vision Improvement. That is why it is called the Bates method of NVI. I do understand why PSWG1920 and the others want an After Bates section because then the See Cleary Method can also be mentioned and the BM suggestive ridiculed. One problem : the See clearly method is not equal to the Bates method. As the See Clearly method tells us. Reference SCM itself and Visionsofjoy. And the SCM also isn’t Natural Vision improvement. Because Natural Vision Improvement is partly Bates method. A modern Bates method section is much better in my opinion if you want to provide clear information. The see clearly method shoult be replaced in the article vision therapy See below keywords of the backcover. Seeyou (talk) 20:56, 11 September 2008 (UTC)

"One problem : the See clearly method is not equal to the Bates method. As the See Clearly method tells us. Reference SCM itself and Visionsofjoy." Which is precisely the reason I want to make sure it is mentioned. To show that it is not the Bates method. Browsing the web I've seen the "Bates See Clearly method" referred to. The current article sets that straight. PSWG1920 (talk) 01:04, 12 September 2008 (UTC)

I don't see the logic. This article is about the BM and should just present quality info about NVI and the BM. It has got nothing to do with any orther source(s). By removing any information about the See clearly method in the Bates method article it's much clearer. Remove it to vision therapy I also browsed the web and I did not find any reliable sources connecting the Bates method and the See Clearly method. Can you provide the references you spoke of ? Seeyou (talk) 19:39, 13 September 2008 (UTC)

The first four sources in the See Clearly Method subsection all speak of the See Clearly Method in connection with Bates. Additionally, this illustrates how people are being misled. PSWG1920 (talk) 21:35, 13 September 2008 (UTC)

PSWG1920. This google result does not convince me at all. Reliable sources are essential ! I will remove the SCM paragraph in the near future. Seeyou (talk) 19:50, 14 September 2008 (UTC)

I have restored the subsection and made it more to the point. The point being, while the See Clearly Method adapts a few of Bates' techniques, overall it is distinctly different. And this is well-sourced. PSWG1920 (talk) 05:11, 15 September 2008 (UTC)

"When we refer to the old Bates method we should speak of the Bates method for Better Eyesight and when we speak of the Bates method of today we should speak of the Bates method of Natural vision improvement. By mentioning this explanations in the introduction we can make this clear for the public and ourselves." That would not make anything clear. Any attempt to distinguish between the "Bates method for Better Eyesight" and the "Bates method of Natural Vision Improvement" is only going to confuse readers. If the Goodrich/Quackenbush approach is discussed anywhere in this article, it should be in the "After Bates" section. However, a source independent of the subject may be needed to establish the notability of that variant. PSWG1920 (talk) 01:54, 12 September 2008 (UTC)

I don't think we will come to an agreement. A RFC would be wiser I think. Our information should be based on published written facts.

PSWG1920 : That would not make anything clear. Any attempt to distinguish between the "Bates method for Better Eyesight" and the "Bates method of Natural Vision Improvement" is only going to confuse readers.

I completly disagree. The current situation is confusing. Doug Marsh in his book for example speaks about the Bates method. Which one do you think he really means. Hint : The foreword is written by thomas Quackenbush. By making a difference between the old and the new bates method we really make worldwide progress making this subject clear. And wikipedia is really becoming a great source of information. Seeyou (talk) 19:54, 13 September 2008 (UTC)

Looking at it that way there are many versions of the Bates method, not just two. Hence the reason for the "After Bates" section, which if you scroll up you will see there is a strong consensus for. PSWG1920 (talk) 21:43, 13 September 2008 (UTC)

Seeyou has drawn attention to the lists of books on sale at amazon, but they make clear that NVI/Quackenbush is just one of many. Looking at http://www.amazon.com/, with search on "Bates method", and leaving out false positives and books by Bates himself, we get the following authors:

• Thomas R. Quackenbush
• Jonathan Barnes
• Steven M. Beresford et al.
• Meir Schneider
• Clara A. Hackett et al.
• Margaret D. Corbett
• Martin A Sussman
• Jacob Liberman
• Hereward Carrington
• Doug Marsh and Thomas R. Quackenbush
• James Bellevue
• Peter Mansfield et al.
• Lisette Scholl
• Charles R Kelley

Doing the same exercise at http://www.amazon.co.uk/ yields most of the same authors, but with Barnes leading and Quackenbush nowhere.

This makes absolutely clear that Qackenbush is just one of many. Words like "dominant" which Seeyou keeps using are misplaced, as the other authors are not dominated. SamuelTheGhost (talk) 12:46, 14 September 2008 (UTC)

Strange you do not undestand me. Does not matter I will explain. I mean dominant in selling. That is why I added the rankings. The public does not have a problem to see and find quality information about the Batesmethod of NVI. Do you understand now ? Seeyou (talk) 20:13, 17 September 2008 (UTC)

I strongly object to your altering my talk page messages, as here. I prevously regarded rational discussion with you as very difficult. That makes it impossible. SamuelTheGhost (talk) 20:53, 17 September 2008 (UTC)

Can you explain why discussing is difficult. I don't understand. In my opinion you just avoid the question I asked you above. I will repeat my question :

Strange you do not undestand me. Does not matter I will explain. I mean dominant in selling. That is why I added the rankings. The public does not have a problem to see and find quality information about the Batesmethod of NVI. Do you understand now ? Seeyou (talk) 20:13, 17 September 2008 (UTC

The section should probably have an introductory paragraph. PSWG1920 (talk) 19:25, 17 September 2008 (UTC)

List of proponents discussed by independent sources

• Aldous Huxley - Marg, Pollack, Gardner, Time
• Margaret Darst Corbett - Marg, Pollack, Gardner
• Harold Peppard - Pollack, Time
• Clara Hackett - Pollack, Gardner
• Emily Bates - Pollack, Gardner, Time

02:56, 10 September 2008 (UTC)

Books

Modern Bates method :

Thomas Quackenbush 2 books Relearning to See and Better Eyesight the complete magazines of W.H. Bates. Bates method and Natural Eyesight Improvement. ( See the back covers. ) Also called the bates metod of NVI on the back cover of the Better Eyesight magazines.

Relearning to See, Thomas Quackenbush : Amazon.com Sales Rank: #13,998

Better eyesight the complete magazines of W.H. Bates edited by T.R. Quackenbush : Amazon.com Sales Rank: #205,877

Improve your vision without glasses or contactlenses. See clearly method book ! improve vision naturally. 20 exercises. Vision therapy. Better eyesight. Speedy Amazon.com Sales Rank: #38,564 Seeyou’s comment : Important note Bates method is not mentioned at all ! The See clearly method is labelled Vision therapy. See Vision therapy:

Margaret D. Corbett Eye education based on the Bates method Amazon.com Sales Rank: #149,164

Classic Bates method : The Bates method for better eyesight. W.H. Bates own updated version. Amazon.com Sales Rank: #170,575

Jonathan Barnes book also presents the bates method for today. See the back cover. Amazon.com Sales Rank: #512,656

Clara Hacket Better Vision Now: Improve Your Sight with the Renowned Bates Method Amazon.com Sales Rank: #831,286

Peter Mansfield : the Bates method Amazon.com Sales Rank: #1,012,569

Jacob Liberman : Take of your glasses and See : holistic vision care Amazon.com Sales Rank: #286,510 Seeyou (talk) 20:14, 17 September 2008 (UTC)

Dead-end

I just loved the new idea from "Writer Alan M. MacRobert":

• "If palming, shifting, and swinging could really cure poor eyesight, glasses would be as obsolete by now as horse-drawn carriages."
• "If cleaning and flossing the teeth could really prevent tooth decay, fillings and dentures would be as obsolete by now as horse-drawn carriages."
• "If sensible diet and exercise could really cure weight problems, obesity would be as obsolete by now as horse-drawn carriages."
• "If prudent financial management could really cure debt, bankruptcy would be as obsolete by now as horse-drawn carriages."
• "If education could really cure poor logic, ridiculous arguments would be as obsolete by now as horse-drawn carriages."

If this really is the "most telling argument against the Bates system" I would conclude that the case for the Bates system had been conclusively made. But keep it in! The article needs some comic relief, and this sort of desperate daftness cheers me up and makes me laugh. SamuelTheGhost (talk) 11:12, 16 September 2008 (UTC)

I agree with you. I was just thinking of Ronz's now archived comment that "scientific/medical/etc dead-ends need to be presented as such". I considered finding a pro-Bates source which responds to that line of reasoning, but I'm fairly certain that any such reference would get reverted. As it is, enough readers will see through MacRobert's logic. PSWG1920 (talk) 17:01, 16 September 2008 (UTC)

Information of questionable importance

Regarding the Ophthalmological research section, I don't understand why the 1946 Woods study should be singled out for mention here. The AAO review gives no details of what the employed "optometric training technique" was, and it's not clear whether Woods even claimed to be testing the Bates method. And it certainly couldn't have involved the "Bates method of Natural Vision Improvement" (as Seeyou terms it), as that had not yet evolved in 1946. PSWG1920 (talk) 21:39, 21 September 2008 (UTC)

This article is about the Bates method which is equal to Natural vision improvement ( Doug Marsh ) and it is about the Bates method which is part of Natural vision improvement ( Janet Goodrich ). These are the facts according to the referenced sources. The AAO reference is about the scientific research on the subject of these article. Natural Vision Improvement. So wery essential and important and logical information fot the public. Simply remember PSWG1920 this article should provide objective neutral information for the public. You can't ignore what advocates of NVI state. You can't ignore what skeptics state and you can't ignore what ophthalmology / science states. Seeyou (talk) 19:15, 26 September 2008 (UTC)

Citing the AAO review is fine. But why should we single out the 1946 Woods study for discussion in the article? PSWG1920 (talk) 10:50, 28 September 2008 (UTC)

Very simple PSWG1920. Because there is at this moment not one single reliable source presenting succes in improving eyesight naturally. This source is reliable. The American Academy of ophthalmology could easily have skipped the presentation of the Woods research. They did not ! It also indicates and signals the testimonials about succesfully improving eyesight might be very interesting for furher investigation and research for real researchers and the public with an open mind. Seeyou (talk) 14:14, 28 September 2008 (UTC)

"Because there is at this moment not one single reliable source presenting succes in improving eyesight naturally." Not true. Check the Biofeedback Training section. And unlike with the Woods study, we at least know the basic technique used there. PSWG1920 (talk) 17:10, 28 September 2008 (UTC)

Your argument is very invalid. You can't compare biofeedbacktraining with ophthalmogical research. You are comparing pseudoscience with science ! The source is Ophthalmology ! What they say about NVI is very important. They are the autthority on this subject ! AAO is the only reliable source presenting succes in NVI.Seeyou (talk) 20:41, 30 September 2008 (UTC)

The AAO review discusses several studies. If we're going to basically repeat their summary of Woods, why not do the same for all the others? Now, it's fine to state what the AAO's overall conclusions are, as the first two paragraphs of the Ophthalmological research section do. PSWG1920 (talk) 21:29, 30 September 2008 (UTC)

Listing them all seems a bit much. Cherry-picking one is problematic because of WP:UNDUE and WP:SYN. I've reverted the edits by Seeyou accordingly.

What RfC is Seeyou referring to?--Ronz (talk) 23:20, 30 September 2008 (UTC)

It seems like it must be this one. However, that principally addressed the question of whether the AAO review should be in the external links, which is not the issue here.

I do agree with you here, I was just pointing out why the specific discussion of the Woods study probably doesn't belong in this article. Now, if we had more details that could clearly connect it to a subtopic already in the article, that might change. PSWG1920 (talk) 23:57, 30 September 2008 (UTC)

I will maka a summary. And ask other editors with an RFC what their objective opinion is regarding more than one issue of this article. Any suggestions on how to get more really objective editors involved. Choosing complete new editors wouldn't be very logical. I am also thinking about giving weight to arguments or neglecting fake-arguments. With some algebra it will be much easier to really improve this article. Have a nice day. Seeyou (talk) 19:41, 1 October 2008 (UTC)

I agree that it is well established that the Bates method has not been proven by a single scientific study, and that this must not be submerged.--Stetsonharry (talk) 21:52, 1 October 2008 (UTC)

The goal of this article is not to prove the BM. The goal of this article is to provide facts by reliable sources about Natural Vision improvement. ( See the discussion about the title ).The public reading this article may conclude their own conclusion. If this article only provides the opinion of skeptic wikdipedia editors it is a sick article and will never reach A quality. Current fact at this moment : The only available definition is removed. So this article is ... Seeyou (talk) 17:41, 2 October 2008 (UTC)

Regarding the "only available definition", see my latest comment above. The current article is A quality in my opinion, and steadily approaching A+. We just need a thorough review by a neutral party. Wouldn't it be great if this were the featured article of Bates' next birthday, December 23? PSWG1920 (talk) 23:24, 4 October 2008 (UTC)

I have rewritten the section to reflect what the AAO review seems to be saying overall, without cherry-picking from what they cite. And if the section is allowed to remain in current form, then the "relevance/importance" tag is no longer needed in my opinion. PSWG1920 (talk) 21:01, 4 October 2008 (UTC)

Positive independent source?

I just found what would seem to be an independent source which takes a positive view of the Bates method, here. Not sure yet how it could be used in this article. PSWG1920 (talk) 18:34, 2 October 2008 (UTC).

Sorry PSWG1920 not very impressive. And very weak when yoo compare it with Woods research.

( Which is presented by a reliable authority source of the subject ).Famousdog would say Pseudoscience. And he, she, Maradonna or ophthalmology would be right. Seeyou (talk) 19:51, 2 October 2008 (UTC)

In my opinion the book pages linked to above are much more relevant to the article than are the vague details we have about the Woods research. I can see three places this source could perhaps be used: the "Bates' treatments" section, the "Ophthalmological Research" section, or the "Dead-end" subsection. It focuses on the subtlely of the Bates method and why it would be difficult to do a formal scientific test. PSWG1920 (talk) 00:57, 3 October 2008 (UTC)

Think positve PSWG1920 Elwin Marg report is fully available. Why can't Woods report by fully available in future. Maybe with a little help from a objective party. Woods report is by far the most reliable and proffesional source of positive results. A child can see this is true ! Seeyou (talk) 19:59, 3 October 2008 (UTC)

Yes, it would be nice to see the actual Woods report. To find out about the "optometric training technique" used and to get a more clear indication as to whether the noted improvement in eyesight was seen as objective or subjective. PSWG1920 (talk) 20:14, 3 October 2008 (UTC)

It would be very nice if opthalmology would start to be really co-operative regarding this article. By keeping the woods article in place. Resulting in questions of the public towards ophthalmology worldwide. Things might slowly change. Do you add the woods information or do you want me to re-add it ? Seeyou (talk) 08:53, 4 October 2008 (UTC)

Second Generation Bates versus Classic Bates method

In my opinion the title above is an improvement when you compare it with the current afer bates section. And argument : It is based on a source not just on the opinion of wikipedia editor ! See also :

• http://www.i-see.org/vision_books.html

Seeyou (talk) 17:55, 4 October 2008 (UTC)

I disagree. That would almost certainly not be considered a reliable source. "After Bates" is the simplest, best title I can think of for that section. PSWG1920 (talk) 21:07, 4 October 2008 (UTC)

Biofeedback training

The Biofeedback training subsection needs to be worked on. Contrary to what is stated, the "Treating myopia with acoustic biofeedback" source does not appear to be a general review of research in this area, and the "have been rare and contradictory" quote appears to be used out of context. I think the section is worth trying to improve as there are definitely good sources, but I suppose it could be deleted as off-topic. PSWG1920 (talk) 20:21, 5 October 2008 (UTC)

In my opinion the essential information therein is now also in the main "Ophthalmological Research" section. So I'm going to delete the Biofeedback Training subsection but list the sources here with citations for use in a potential rewrite.

<ref name=Randle>{{cite journal | author=Randle RJ | title=Responses of myopes to volitional control training of accommodation | journal=Ophthalmic Physiol Opt | volume=8 | pages=333–340 | year=1988 | url=http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/sites/entrez?db=pubmed&uid=3269512&cmd=showdetailview&indexed=google}}</ref>

<ref name=Gallaway>{{cite journal | author=Gallaway M, Pearls SM, Winkelstein AM, et al. | title=Biofeedback training of visual acuity and myopia: A pilot study | journal=Am J Optom Physiol Opt | volume=64 | pages=62–71 | year=1987 | url=http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/3826280}}</ref>

<ref name=Koslowe>{{cite journal | author=Koslowe KC, Spierer A, Rosner M, et al. | title=Evaluation of accommotrac biofeedback training for myopia control | journal=Optom Vis Sci | volume=68 | year=1991 | pages=252–4 | url=http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/sites/entrez?db=pubmed&list_uids=1852394&cmd=Retrieve&indexed=google}}</ref>

<ref name=Rupolo>{{cite journal | author=G Rupolo, M Angi, E Sabbadin, S Caucci, E Pilotto, E Racano and C de Bertolini | journal=Psychosomatic Medicine | volume=59 | issue=3 | pages=313–317 | year=1997 | title=Treating myopia with acoustic biofeedback: a prospective study on the evolution of visual acuity and psychological distress | url=http://www.psychosomaticmedicine.org/cgi/reprint/59/3/313.pdf | format = [[PDF]] }}</ref>

PSWG1920 (talk) 21:40, 5 October 2008 (UTC)

Article images?

I was thinking that photos from Bates' book of individuals palming and sungazing could perhaps be added to the respective sections. I have no experience with adding images to wikipedia, however, so it would be helpful if someone else could do it, if indeed the consensus is for including them. PSWG1920 (talk) 18:29, 6 October 2008 (UTC)

The sungazing picture would result in a safety issue. That is also the logical reason why in the second generation books about the Bates method / Natural Vision Improvement you won't find any open eyelidsunning. Do you know any other book besides PSWG which speaks about open eyelid sunning. Anyway Bates was very clear about this subject in his later Better Eyesight magazine.

Sunning : Let the sun shine on your closed eyelids for short intervals. Choose preferably the early morning sunlight. It is the light rays which benefit the eyes rather than the heat rays. The sun loses some of its effect when it comes through glass.

I added this info not everybody reading this will scan the archive.

If he still was convinced open eyelid sunning was without danger. He would have spoken about it in his later publications !!

About the palming image. Are there any other wikipedia articles which use images ? Seeyou (talk) 20:00, 7 October 2008 (UTC)

Yes, for example the William Bates article includes an image of Dr. Bates. PSWG1920 (talk) 20:06, 7 October 2008 (UTC)

I meant controversial articles showing a certain technique with an image. Seeyou (talk) 21:16, 7 October 2008 (UTC)

I don't know. We should ask someone with more experience in editing controversial articles. PSWG1920 (talk) 23:48, 7 October 2008 (UTC)

RFC nr : 3 removal of Woods research results

The following information has been present for a while in the article paragraph ophthalmological research, but has been removed recently.

A 1946 study reported that out of 103 patients, 30 showed a "small improvement" in subjective visual acuity, 31 showed "inconsistent improvements", 32 had no change, while 10 demonstrated a worsening of acuity after visual training. Of the 61 total patients who demonstrated any improvement, 17 returned for a five-month follow-up, where it was found that two had maintained this improvement, while the other 15 had not.

The reference link : * http://one.aao.org/CE/PracticeGuidelines/Therapy_Content.aspx?cid=d7238b2b-a59f-49f6-9f30-64d1e84efc3b

I personally totally disagree with this removal, since it is the only reliable succes story about Natural vision improvement currently available at this moment.

Argument to re-add this info:

• It is ophthalmology who presents it, the authority !
• It must be scientific otherwise it would not be presented.
• They could very easy not reported it at all. They do report it !
• It is clear and objective presented.
• It is unique information especially for this article since it is about a controversial subject.
• There are no other reliable sources currently available or present.
• In future the woods report might become available. ( Just like Elwin Margs skeptic report. )
• The public has the right to know about this information.

argument for removal :

• There are no details available about the woods report.

Seeyous comment : Not an argument, by leaving this info in the article the details might become available in future. The details are the responsibility of AOO. They are the authority who should make the possibility or impossibility regarding improving eyesight clear.

The other arguments I do not understand. Biofeedbacktraning and a certain book.Seeyou (talk) 21:16, 7 October 2008 (UTC)

Again, if we're going to basically repeat what the AAO report says about Woods, why not do the same for every study they discuss? As it is, the Ophthalmological research section now reports that improvement was found by some studies, but that, as AAO says, it was seen as subjective rather than objective. PSWG1920 (talk) 21:38, 7 October 2008 (UTC)

Where exactly did you read the woods results were subjective. Which alinea and line ? Seeyou (talk) 21:05, 8 October 2008 (UTC)

Conclusions:

There is level I evidence that visual training for control of accommodation has no effect on myopia. In other studies (level II/III evidence), an improvement in subjective visual acuity for patients with myopia who have undertaken visual training has been shown but no corresponding physiological cause for the improvement has been demonstrated. The improvements in myopic patients noted in these studies have been postulated to be due to improvements in interpreting blurred images, changes in mood or motivation, creation of an artificial contact lens by tear film changes, or a pinhole effect from miosis of the pupil.

Nothing is specifically stated about whether Woods saw the improvement as objective or subjective, but it is clear that the AAO saw it as subjective. PSWG1920 (talk) 21:14, 8 October 2008 (UTC)

I do not read this conclusion is for the Woods report. This is a general conclusion. If the woods results are really subjective the would n't have been mentioned as results ! If eyesight can be made worse it can also be improved. ( For example by doing the opposite ) Seeyou (talk) 20:27, 9 October 2008 (UTC)

If the AAO had seen the Woods results as objective, their conclusions would have been different. PSWG1920 (talk) 21:04, 9 October 2008 (UTC)

Seeyou is misrepresenting previous discussions on the matter. I see no need to repeat past discussions if Seeyou is going to ignore and misrepresent them. --Ronz (talk) 00:02, 8 October 2008 (UTC)

Ronz look at the presented arguments. There is totally no discussion taking place. The only way to really improve this article is to invite other hopefully objective editors to give their opinion.Seeyou (talk) 21:01, 8 October 2008 (UTC)

Just to be clear for all users, after the previous discussion regarding this, I added the sentence "While some of the reviewed studies did report improvements in the visual acuity of myopes, these were seen as subjective rather than objective gains, perhaps resulting from a learned ability to interpret blurred images, or other factors detailed below." Which communicates the AAO report's conclusions without cherry-picking from the studies they examine. PSWG1920 (talk) 03:33, 8 October 2008 (UTC)

I have got the strong feeling you are defending ophthalmology. Not really scientific to assume subjective results. We need the details of the Woods report. By keeping the Woods report in the article they might become available. It depends on ophthalmology to make this really clear. By the way the way the woods report also mentions negative results. These results are also interesting. If eyesight can be made worse it can also be improved. Seeyou (talk) 21:01, 8 October 2008 (UTC)

I'm not defending ophthalmology. I'm trying to follow due weight here. The AAO believes that the changes were subjective, so this article should reflect that. Are you suggesting that keeping the discussion of the Woods report here will cause it to appear online? That seems unlikely. PSWG1920 (talk) 04:27, 9 October 2008 (UTC)

Let's invite other editors to give their opinion and arguments regarding RFC nr:1, RFC nr:2 and RFC nr:3. Seeyou (talk) 20:18, 9 October 2008 (UTC)

I would advise any such users to first take a look at the AAO report which is the source of this information, and which is still referenced in this article. PSWG1920 (talk) 20:50, 9 October 2008 (UTC)

Ok guys, the RfC is opened officially (if you don't know who this is, its Atyndall, name-changed). Seeyou, just letting you know that it would be preferred if you used official channels (WP:RfC) to inform people of this discussion and that asking people to rate statements is ok as a straw poll but cannot count as finding consensus (as consensus is about discussion), I suggest you refrain from continuing this as users may find this annoying, whereas if it is taken to WP:RfC (I have listen it there) people interested in the topic (and possibly people with more experience) will come and comment instead. Foxy Loxy ^Pounce! 03:58, 10 October 2008 (UTC)

@Seeyou: You also might like to read this article called Polling is not a substitute for discussion. Foxy Loxy ^Pounce! 04:00, 10 October 2008 (UTC)

• Comment (not) - I'd love to comment here, but honestly this RfC is confusing. I'm really not sure what's at issue here. -- Levine2112 ^discuss 21:51, 10 October 2008 (UTC)

The issue is basically the change to the Ophthalmological Research section here. That diff is a bit tricky to follow since the paragraphs are out of sync, but I tried to add the essential details to the first paragraph of the section while removing the third paragraph, which basically just repeated the AAO report's summary of the Woods study, and furthermore gave the appearance of cherry-picking since there are other studies discussed by the AAO report which get no mention here. PSWG1920 (talk) 22:06, 10 October 2008 (UTC)

Okay. I think I understand. Well, I think it is a shame to lose the 1946 research, if not to discuss research from a historical perspective. That said, perhaps too much weight was given to that study and I am not sure if we should rely on studies that old for scientific insight into the subject. -- Levine2112 ^discuss 22:16, 10 October 2008 (UTC)