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:[[User:Jaredscribe|Jaredscribe]], your "context" and "improvements" involve your interpretation of United States & Oregon history. Please rely only on [[[WP:RS|reliable sources]], not your own understanding of what you think is relevant to this sculpture. <span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:#800080;">[[User:Liz|'''''L'''''iz]]</span> <sup style="font-family: Times New Roman; color: #006400;">[[Special:Contributions/Liz|'''''Read!''''']] [[User talk:Liz|'''''Talk!''''']]</sup> 23:46, 15 August 2020 (UTC) |
:[[User:Jaredscribe|Jaredscribe]], your "context" and "improvements" involve your interpretation of United States & Oregon history. Please rely only on [[[WP:RS|reliable sources]], not your own understanding of what you think is relevant to this sculpture. <span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:#800080;">[[User:Liz|'''''L'''''iz]]</span> <sup style="font-family: Times New Roman; color: #006400;">[[Special:Contributions/Liz|'''''Read!''''']] [[User talk:Liz|'''''Talk!''''']]</sup> 23:46, 15 August 2020 (UTC) |
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::The statue itself is an interpretation of US & Oregon history. To fail to mention this fact, is to mistake that interpretation as "neutral", and the article makes this error, and violates the neutrality policy. See the section below for discussion. [[#Meaning and interpretation of the statue]][[User:Jaredscribe|Jaredscribe]] ([[User talk:Jaredscribe|talk]]) 00:54, 9 February 2021 (UTC) |
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===Meaning and interpretation of the statue=== |
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This statue offers an interpretation of [[City on a hill|United States]] and [[Oregon Territory]] |
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[[Settler_colonialism|settler]] history. |
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This is where other sources can be cited describing what the statue represents; I will only include the sentence above, acknowledging that it has a meaning, while leaving it to outside sources to analyze and interpret. The statue itself expresses a POV on history. To deny that it does so, and reduce it to mere aesthetics as the article currently does, is it adopt either the POV:everything is meaningless, or to adopt the POV of the statue itself. I assert that the POV of the statue is [[Supercessionism]] and [[White Supremacy]], but I'll leave that out of the article for now until we can find sources. Jewish and Indigenous groups have been saying this for decades, but there voices are systematically ignored. Obviously, this is why the city (belatedly) removed it following the protests and the petition. [[User:Jaredscribe|Jaredscribe]] ([[User talk:Jaredscribe|talk]]) 00:54, 9 February 2021 (UTC) |
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I'm flagging this article as violating the neutrality policy until then. The unwillingness by {{U|Another Believer}} to acknowledge the bias or even the meaning of the statue, is a manifestation of this same bias. To assume that white supremacy is simple normative and defining it as "Neutral", while insisting that my description of it is merely an "interpretation" that requires sourcing - as {{U|Liz}} has done, is how [[WP:Systemic bias]] here in wikipedia forms. We should be ashamed of ourselves, and seek to rectify this rather than settling in comfortably with it. Guess what, OREGON IS NOT THE PROMISED LAND. White American Christians ARE NOT THE CHOSEN PEOPLE. [[User:Jaredscribe|Jaredscribe]] ([[User talk:Jaredscribe|talk]]) 00:54, 9 February 2021 (UTC) |
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Sources
- http://www.portlandmercury.com/portland/experts-critique-portlands-most-famous-public-art/Content?oid=17134890 ---Another Believer (Talk) 01:28, 12 December 2015 (UTC)
- https://www.pdxmonthly.com/news-and-city-life/2020/07/a-guide-to-the-buildings-around-the-main-portland-protests
- https://www.latimes.com/archives/la-xpm-1994-04-03-me-41677-story.html
- https://archive.seattletimes.com/archive/?date=19940824&slug=1926962
- https://www.wweek.com/news/2020/07/08/what-have-six-weeks-of-portland-protests-wrought/
---Another Believer (Talk) 03:20, 26 July 2020 (UTC)
Image
File:Defending Portland (34294028953).jpg has been uploaded to Commons. ---Another Believer (Talk) 02:20, 8 February 2018 (UTC)
Removal
Sourcing needed, but I can confirm the artwork has been removed:
---Another Believer (Talk) 01:01, 26 July 2020 (UTC)
Can a single page be whitelisted from change.org? It is now a matter of fact and historical record, that essentially alters the subject matter of this page in particular. It is also of material interest to those following the George Floyd protests. Its not a case of soapboxing at this point. I think that it should be permitted at least on the talk page. External petition to have the statue removed: change dot org / p / pdx-regional-arts-council-remove-the-pioneer-and-soldier-statues-from-the-plaza-blocks-and-recount-an-unbiased-history
Copy?
Mention of Hot Lake Springs:
---Another Believer (Talk) 03:26, 26 July 2020 (UTC)
Proposed improvements to the page, reverted without explanation. Please discuss or restore
- Included a link to Promised_Land, you know, the original one. Since the subject matter itself might be relevant to some people, beyond its mere aesthetics.
- Added links to Treaty with the Kalapuya, etc and Grand Ronde Reservation, to give some context to this subject matter.
- Included a link to Anti-Judaism and Supercessionism, the christian doctrines on which this artwork is aesthetically concepted.
- Restored a link to the Spanish-American War Soldier's Monument on the adjacent park block because that shares a similar artistic theme to this statue.
-Restored quote from T.Jefferson that is inscribed on monument's pedestal: Undid revision 848528557 by Another Believer (talk) Another Believer had earlier reverted a third editors improvement to the article, without explanation, which I restored
These improvement were made by me, Jaredscribe (talk) 05:34, 14 August 2020 (UTC)
The reversions were made by Another_Beleiver
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- Jaredscribe, your "context" and "improvements" involve your interpretation of United States & Oregon history. Please rely only on [[[WP:RS|reliable sources]], not your own understanding of what you think is relevant to this sculpture. Liz Read! Talk! 23:46, 15 August 2020 (UTC)
- The statue itself is an interpretation of US & Oregon history. To fail to mention this fact, is to mistake that interpretation as "neutral", and the article makes this error, and violates the neutrality policy. See the section below for discussion. #Meaning and interpretation of the statueJaredscribe (talk) 00:54, 9 February 2021 (UTC)
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---Another Believer (Talk) 13:11, 31 August 2020 (UTC)
Another source
---Another Believer (Talk) 20:13, 28 December 2020 (UTC)
Monumental Inscription
A monument emplaced so that the public can see it, is, so to speak, published, and serves as an implicit source for its own inscription, just as a novel serves as a source for its own plot. No further citation is required. An volunteer IP added this, and after Another Believer reverted it, I added it again, whereupon he reverted it again. I will add this quote again, and if he reverts again, it is disruptive. He expresses the same misunderstanding of WP:Sourcing on the article about the related monument Spanish–American_War_Soldier's_Monument. I live in Portland and have confirmed that this quote accurately reflects what is inscribed. If an editor is unable to do this, (s)he should refrain from discussing the matter. WP:Competence is required
It is so long since our forefathers came from behind the great water, that we have lost the memory of it, and seem to have grown out of this land, as you have done. We are all now of one family, born in the same land, and bound to live as brothers. The Great Spirit has given you strength, and has given us strength, not that we might hurt one another, but to do to each other all the good in our power. — Thomas Jefferson
— Preceding unsigned comment added by Jaredscribe (talk • contribs) 00:27, 9 February 2021 (UTC)
- I don't have a problem with the inscription being added, though ideally a source would be provided to readers for verification. However, I have disagreed with some of your other edits to both articles. Feel free to add back inscription. Also, no need to worry about my incompetence; I've written 5 Featured articles and over 100 Good articles, so I generally understand how this works... ---Another Believer (Talk) 00:33, 9 February 2021 (UTC)
- Jaredscribe: please refrain from personal attacks, including passive-aggressive personal attacks. tedder (talk) 00:38, 9 February 2021 (UTC)
Meaning and interpretation of the statue
This statue offers an interpretation of United States and Oregon Territory settler history.
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This is where other sources can be cited describing what the statue represents; I will only include the sentence above, acknowledging that it has a meaning, while leaving it to outside sources to analyze and interpret. The statue itself expresses a POV on history. To deny that it does so, and reduce it to mere aesthetics as the article currently does, is it adopt either the POV:everything is meaningless, or to adopt the POV of the statue itself. I assert that the POV of the statue is Supercessionism and White Supremacy, but I'll leave that out of the article for now until we can find sources. Jewish and Indigenous groups have been saying this for decades, but there voices are systematically ignored. Obviously, this is why the city (belatedly) removed it following the protests and the petition. Jaredscribe (talk) 00:54, 9 February 2021 (UTC)
I'm flagging this article as violating the neutrality policy until then. The unwillingness by Another Believer to acknowledge the bias or even the meaning of the statue, is a manifestation of this same bias. To assume that white supremacy is simple normative and defining it as "Neutral", while insisting that my description of it is merely an "interpretation" that requires sourcing - as Liz has done, is how WP:Systemic bias here in wikipedia forms. We should be ashamed of ourselves, and seek to rectify this rather than settling in comfortably with it. Guess what, OREGON IS NOT THE PROMISED LAND. White American Christians ARE NOT THE CHOSEN PEOPLE. Jaredscribe (talk) 00:54, 9 February 2021 (UTC)
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