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November 2009

Welcome to Wikipedia. The recent edit you made to New York's 23rd congressional district has been reverted, as it appears to have removed content from the page without explanation. Use the sandbox for testing; if you believe the edit was constructive, please ensure that you provide an informative edit summary. You may also wish to read the introduction to editing. Thank you. Alansohn (talk) 04:47, 6 November 2009 (UTC)

David P. Levin (and Teaneck)

David P. Levin probably has a credible claim of notability (the standard to meet the criteria for having an article), but the article needs lots of work. There are no sources for his being born in Framingham or moving to Teaneck or attending Teaneck High School or Rutgers. IMDb is not a reliable source (click for more details) and the entry in the Teaneck, New Jersey is solely supported by an IMDB link and will be removed. In terms of the Teaneck article, the title for the highway is New Jersey Route 4, though "piping" allows this to be called "Route 4", which is what most people call it. There is no need to link to New Jersey State Route 4. Please feel free to reach me on my talk page with any questions. Alansohn (talk) 00:52, 13 December 2013 (UTC)

Take a look at WP:RS. Newspapers, magazine or books are best, even better if they are accessible online. I hear people say "Route 4", "Route 22" and "Route 80" all the time. I know that they "really" mean New Jersey Route 4, U.S. Toute 22 and Interstate 80, but per WP:COMMONNAME we tend to be a liitle less formal in Wikipedia, except in articles about the highways. I am careful to distinguish between county roads, state roads, U.S. highways and Interstate highways, but most readers aren't even aware that there's a difference. In terms of the Levin article, writing in a non-promotional tone and using appropriate sources are the main issues. Take a look at the changes I made and look at other articles for people in his profession as models. I'm here in Teaneck and happy to help. Alansohn (talk) 01:57, 13 December 2013 (UTC)

The citation format tag was added at the top of the article. Add sources as you already have and I will put them in the proper format. Many of the details of his career are pretty much OK, but the biographical details need appropriate sources. People like Levin usually have had articles written about them in newspapers providing details of their childhood and education. A yearbook is always a problematic source, because all it proves (if I could see it online or at the library) is that someone with that name attended the school and there innumerable Daniel Levin's out there, 1/26th of whom (on average) will have a "P" as a middle initial. Alansohn (talk) 02:39, 13 December 2013 (UTC)

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Hello, Onel5969, and Welcome to Wikipedia! I have replied to your post on my Talk page. Please do your best to always fill in the edit summary field. Below are some useful links to facilitate your involvement. Happy editing! — | Gareth Griffith-Jones |The WelshBuzzard| — 10:36, 17 December 2013 (UTC) Getting started Introduction The five pillars of Wikipedia How to edit a page Intuitive guide to Wikipedia Finding your way around Table of contents Department directory Editing articles How to develop an article Simplified Manual of Style Getting help Frequently asked questions Cheatsheet Where to ask a question Help pages New contributors' help page Article Wizard – a Wizard to help you create articles How you can help Contributing to Wikipedia Community Portal Join a WikiProject Follow Wikipedia etiquette Practice civility Christmas dinner Machinima of Santa Claus's reindeer filmed in Second life Imploring that OneI5969 enjoys a sumptuous Christmas holiday and a naughty New Year! First play this → → → Now play this! I dare you to tell me that you did not smile. Cheers! — | Gareth Griffith-Jones |The WelshBuzzard| — 10:48, 25 December 2013 (UTC) Thanks for the post... I did smile, so you won your dare. Hope you had a Merry Christmas, and may you have a fantastic and blessed New Year. (And, of course, thanks for your help again. Am trying to contribute as often as I can, filling things out a bit, adding citations...) ~~ 15:44, December 27, 2013 You are doing well. Thank you for your good wishes! — | Gareth Griffith-Jones |The WelshBuzzard| — 09:48, 1 January 2014 (UTC) Wikilinking Hi, and thanks for your work on the English Wikipedia. Just a short note to point out that we don’t normally link: dates years commonly known geographical terms (including well-known country-names), and common terms you’d look up in a dictionary (unless significantly technical). Thanks and my best wishes. Tony (talk) 02:33, 30 December 2013 (UTC) Tony, Thanks for the advice... appreciate any you have to give, as I am attempting to contribute as much as I can, and am still learning my way. Will remember your above points. I noticed on some pages they were linked, and on others they weren't, and was trying to err on the side of caution. Onel5969 (talk) 14:30, 31 December 2013 (UTC) January 2014 Hello, I'm BracketBot. I have automatically detected that your edit to Splendor in the Grass may have broken the syntax by modifying 4 "[]"s. If you have, don't worry: just edit the page again to fix it. If I misunderstood what happened, or if you have any questions, you can leave a message on my operator's talk page. 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I have automatically detected that your edit to Richard D. Smith may have broken the syntax by modifying 1 "()"s. If you have, don't worry: just edit the page again to fix it. If I misunderstood what happened, or if you have any questions, you can leave a message on my operator's talk page. List of unpaired brackets remaining on the page: Smith obtained his B.S. in Chemistry in 1971 from [[Lowell Technological Institute]] (currently the [[University of Massachusetts Lowell]].<ref name=PNNL /><ref name=PNNLNews>{{cite web Thanks, BracketBot (talk) 17:53, 27 January 2014 (UTC) Hello, I'm BracketBot. I have automatically detected that your edit to Jolla may have broken the syntax by modifying 2 "[]"s. If you have, don't worry: just edit the page again to fix it. If I misunderstood what happened, or if you have any questions, you can leave a message on my operator's talk page. List of unpaired brackets remaining on the page: it [[Maemo]]. After merging with Intel's [[Moblin]] project (also an open source [[Linux]] system]]), the project was renamed [[MeeGo]] On 7 February 2011, Nokia chose to concentrate on [[Windows Thanks, BracketBot (talk) 00:26, 28 January 2014 (UTC) Hello, I'm BracketBot. I have automatically detected that your edit to Fuad Mamedov may have broken the syntax by modifying 2 "{}"s. If you have, don't worry: just edit the page again to fix it. If I misunderstood what happened, or if you have any questions, you can leave a message on my operator's talk page. List of unpaired brackets remaining on the page: ==Honors{{citations needed|date=January 2014== Thanks, BracketBot (talk) 21:36, 28 January 2014 (UTC) Hello, I'm BracketBot. I have automatically detected that your edit to Passport may have broken the syntax by modifying 2 "{}"s. If you have, don't worry: just edit the page again to fix it. If I misunderstood what happened, or if you have any questions, you can leave a message on my operator's talk page. List of unpaired brackets remaining on the page: no}}</ref> Passport guidelines and a general booklet design resulted from the conference,<ref>{{Cite journal | publisher = IU | url = https://bl-libg-doghill.ads.iu.edu/league-web/book/p63.html | Thanks, BracketBot (talk) 03:53, 30 January 2014 (UTC) Hello, I'm BracketBot. I have automatically detected that your edit to Passport may have broken the syntax by modifying 1 "[]"s. If you have, don't worry: just edit the page again to fix it. If I misunderstood what happened, or if you have any questions, you can leave a message on my operator's talk page. List of unpaired brackets remaining on the page: no}}</ref> Passport guidelines and a general booklet design resulted from the conference,<ref>{{Cite journal | publisher = IU | url = https://bl-libg-doghill.ads.iu.edu/league-web/book/p63.html | }</ref> Many countries with obligatory military service have similar requirements, such as [Syria]].<ref>{{cite web|url=http://www.mofa.gov.sy/cweb/MOEX_NEW/Cons_serv/con_serv_out_3_1.htm|title= Thanks, BracketBot (talk) 17:22, 30 January 2014 (UTC) Hello, I'm BracketBot. I have automatically detected that your edit to The Famous Flames may have broken the syntax by modifying 1 "[]"s. If you have, don't worry: just edit the page again to fix it. If I misunderstood what happened, or if you have any questions, you can leave a message on my operator's talk page. List of unpaired brackets remaining on the page: composition called ''Goin' Back to Rome'' and a ballad Brown co-wrote with Johnny Terry titled ''[[Please, Please, Please]''. Before Christmas 1955, Brantley had the group record a demo of ''Please, Famous Flames lineup consisted of Brown, original member / founder [[Bobby Byrd]], [[Bobby Bennett(The Famous Flames|Bobby Bennett]], and [[Baby Lloyd Stallworth|"Baby Lloyd" Stallworth]]. This Thanks, BracketBot (talk) 00:36, 31 January 2014 (UTC) Charlie Kadau Hi there. I deleted the article as it was a biographical article with no references at all. The complete text of the article was Charlie Kadau is a comedy writer and a longtime associate editor for MAD Magazine. If you have independant references etc for him - I think an article would be a great idea. best regards. Peripitus (Talk) 23:56, 2 January 2014 (UTC) Thanks for that. Am trying to write articles with as much credible accreditation as possible. I know Charlie and Joe, and think I can put something together which will meet muster. When I do, I'll let you know, so you can take a look. Thanks for responding. Onel5969 (talk) 00:17, 3 January 2014 (UTC) Nomination of Charlie Kadau for deletion A discussion is taking place as to whether the article Charlie Kadau is suitable for inclusion in Wikipedia according to Wikipedia's policies and guidelines or whether it should be deleted. The article will be discussed at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Charlie Kadau (2nd nomination) until a consensus is reached, and anyone is welcome to contribute to the discussion. The nomination will explain the policies and guidelines which are of concern. The discussion focuses on high-quality evidence and our policies and guidelines. Users may edit the article during the discussion, including to improve the article to address concerns raised in the discussion. However, do not remove the article-for-deletion notice from the top of the article. reddogsix (talk) 09:47, 3 January 2014 (UTC) Thanks for this. I've added my comments to the discussion. Onel5969 (talk) 15:23, 3 January 2014 (UTC) Wiki mark-up link Hi! You might find these handy: Simple guide to Wikipedia mark-up Advanced guide to Wiki mark-up Cheers! — | Gareth Griffith-Jones |The WelshBuzzard| — 22:35, 21 January 2014 (UTC) New message from Gareth Griffith-Jones Hello, Onel5969. You have new messages at Gareth Griffith-Jones's talk page. Message added 14:01, 23 January 2014 (UTC). You can remove this notice at any time by removing the {{Talkback}} or {{Tb}} template. Just so that you know to what I am referring. Click on my name in the blue box! — | Gareth Griffith-Jones |The WelshBuzzard| — 14:01, 23 January 2014 (UTC) Reference Errors on 23 January Hello, I'm ReferenceBot. I have automatically detected that some edits performed by you may have introduced errors in referencing. They are as follows: On the Haripad page, your edit caused a broken reference name (help). (Fix | Ask for help) On the Level Up! Games page, your edit caused an unnamed parameter error (help). (Fix | Ask for help) Please check these pages and fix the errors highlighted. If you think this is a false positive, you can report it to my operator. Thanks, ReferenceBot (talk) 00:58, 24 January 2014 (UTC) Recent changes An IP made an edit on your User page this morning. I have reverted it and issued a warningon the IP's Talk. Probably watching Recent changes and could not resist my message to YOU in the edit summary(!) Your User page is a place where no unregistered user may make revisions or additions and will always be reverted. — | Gareth Griffith-Jones |The WelshBuzzard| — 10:40, 24 January 2014 (UTC) @Gareth Griffith-Jones: (is this the correct use of the "ping"?). Thanks for that, although I'm not sure exactly what happened.Onel5969 (talk) 13:46, 24 January 2014 (UTC) Yes, your "ping " worked. Mind you, my frequent viewing of my Watchlist means you don't need to when replying to me here — | Gareth Griffith-Jones |The WelshBuzzard| — 20:53, 24 January 2014 (UTC) Post script You can al;so use the {{noping}} template in the same manner when you want to link to a username but not trigger the echo notification system. May be useful on the odd occasion(?) Have a great weekend! — | Gareth Griffith-Jones |The WelshBuzzard| — 12:45, 25 January 2014 (UTC) Reference Errors on 24 January Hello, I'm ReferenceBot. I have automatically detected that an edit performed by you may have introduced errors in referencing. It is as follows: On the Swami Nirmalananda page, your edit caused a missing references list (help | help with group references). (Fix | Ask for help) Please check this page and fix the errors highlighted. If you think this is a false positive, you can report it to my operator. Thanks, ReferenceBot (talk) 00:24, 25 January 2014 (UTC) Everet v Williams Big thanks for the edit... Wow.. please feel free to update any of my other articles.... cheers, steve — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kiwisheriff (talk • contribs) 08:16, 26 January 2014 (UTC) @Kiwisheriff: No worries. Joined the Copy Editors guild, and so am slogging my way through their backlog. Fascinating subject by the way, learned a lot. Cheers. Onel5969 (talk) 13:07, 26 January 2014 (UTC) Copy-editor barnstar award You are doing so well. I am in awe of your citation skills. I guess it is a quarter past nine over there — have a great Sunday! Cheers! — | Gareth Griffith-Jones |The WelshBuzzard| — 14:15, 26 January 2014 (UTC) @Gareth Griffith-Jones: Thank you so much. Just simply trying to make a difference. Onel5969 (talk) 20:45, 26 January 2014 (UTC) ... and succeeding in a highly positive way. — | Gareth Griffith-Jones |The WelshBuzzard| — 20:54, 26 January 2014 (UTC) Disambiguation link notification for January 29 Hi. Thank you for your recent edits. Wikipedia appreciates your help. We noticed though that when you edited Scottsdale, Arizona, you added links pointing to the disambiguation pages Phoenix and Paradise Valley (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver). Such links are almost always unintended, since a disambiguation page is merely a list of "Did you mean..." article titles. Read the FAQ • Join us at the DPL WikiProject. It's OK to remove this message. Also, to stop receiving these messages, follow these opt-out instructions. Thanks, DPL bot (talk) 09:02, 29 January 2014 (UTC) Reference Errors on 30 January Hello, I'm ReferenceBot. I have automatically detected that an edit performed by you may have introduced errors in referencing. It is as follows: On the The Famous Flames page, your edit caused a broken reference name (help). (Fix | Ask for help) Please check this page and fix the errors highlighted. If you think this is a false positive, you can report it to my operator. Thanks, ReferenceBot (talk) 00:32, 31 January 2014 (UTC) Wow The Famous Flames is much improved. Thanks! InnocuousPseudonym (talk) 05:22, 31 January 2014 (UTC) @InnocuousPseudonym: Thanks for checking it out. It was a bit of a challenge. Onel5969 (talk) 13:11, 31 January 2014 (UTC) Request page message moved Hi Onel5969, I've moved the message you left for BabbaQ at the GOCE Requests page to his/her talk page because I'm about to archive and remove the request. Post-copyedit messages should always go on the appropriate talk page because we archive requests as soon as possible after they're done. Thanks, Baffle gab1978 (talk) 04:06, 1 February 2014 (UTC) @Baffle gab1978: Thanks for that. Am new to this, and still learning, but will remember in the future. I have another message there, but it's simply saying that I finished what was requested. Should those types of messages also go on the person's talk page? And finally, If I do finish the items requested, I don't remove it from the request page, do I? Thanks for your guidance. Onel5969 (talk) 12:40, 1 February 2014 (UTC) Thank you so much first of all for your assistance with the copy-edit etc.. I will take a look at your issues raised in due time over the next week. Thank you again.--BabbaQ (talk) 14:35, 1 February 2014 (UTC) 1988 Campeonato Argentino de Rugby Hi, I got your message. Before renaming it, I think someone with knowledge about this should take a look at the title. The Spanish Wikipedia refers to it as "Campeonato Argentino de Rugby", while the English Wikipedia refers to it as "Campeonato Argentino de Mayores" or simply "Campeonato Argentino". I'm not sure which one is correct, perhaps they are interchangeable.