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Hello, Alissa.lauren, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Here are a few links to pages you might find helpful:

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Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (April 7)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Timtrent was:

This appears to be a duplicate of another submission, Jam Cruise, which is also waiting to be reviewed. To save time we will consider the other submission and not this one.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Fiddle Faddle 21:37, 7 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Teahouse, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering or curious about why your article submission was declined please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Fiddle Faddle 21:37, 7 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Jam Cruise (April 8)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Kikichugirl was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms, that are designed to promote or show-off the subject.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Jam Cruise and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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— kikichugirl ^oh hello! 02:54, 8 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Teahouse, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering or curious about why your article submission was declined please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! — kikichugirl ^oh hello! 02:54, 8 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Jam Cruise (April 23)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Calliopejen1 was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Jam Cruise and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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Calliopejen1 (talk) 02:18, 23 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Teahouse, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering or curious about why your article submission was declined please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Calliopejen1 (talk) 02:18, 23 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Jam Cruise has been accepted

Jam Cruise, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.
The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.

You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. Note that because you are a logged-in user, you can create articles yourself, and don't have to post a request. However, you may continue submitting work to Articles for Creation if you prefer.

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Ritchie333 ^(talk) ^(cont) 15:29, 23 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Speedy deletion nomination of Cloud 9 Adventures

Hello Alissa.lauren,

I wanted to let you know that I just tagged Cloud 9 Adventures for deletion, because it seems to be promotional, rather than an encyclopedia article.

If you feel that the article shouldn't be deleted and want more time to work on it, you can contest this deletion, but please don't remove the speedy deletion tag from the top.

You can leave a note on my talk page if you have questions. Rob van vee 18:25, 28 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]

July 2015

Please do not add promotional material to Wikipedia, as you did to Holy Ship!. While objective prose about beliefs, products or services is acceptable, Wikipedia is not intended to be a vehicle for soapboxing, advertising or promotion. Thank you. Drmies (talk) 17:23, 17 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I am not adding promotional material. I am adding additional information. Stop deleting and let me finish typing. Rude.

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 == July 2015 ==
 [[File:Information orange.svg|25px|alt=Information icon]] Please do not add promotional material to Wikipedia, as you did to [[:Holy Ship!]]. While [[Wikipedia:Neutral point of view|objective prose]] about beliefs, products or services ''is'' acceptable, Wikipedia is not intended to be [[Wikipedia:What Wikipedia is not#Wikipedia is not a soapbox|a vehicle for soapboxing, advertising or promotion]]. Thank you.[[Category:User talk pages with Uw-advert2 notices|{{PAGENAME}}]]<!-- Template:uw-advert2 --> [[User:Drmies|Drmies]] ([[User talk:Drmies|talk]]) 17:23, 17 July 2015 (UTC)
+I am not adding promotional material. I am adding additional information. Stop deleting and let me finish typing. Rude.