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Your submission at Articles for creation: Researchfish (April 11)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Bradv was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

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Bradv 14:37, 11 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Mwmconnelly, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Bradv 14:37, 11 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Researchfish (April 15)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by In veritas was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

The comment the reviewer left was:

The What is...headings give this article the style of a brochure advertising the product. Wikipedia is not a place for advertising brochures.

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In veritas (talk) 00:34, 15 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Researchfish has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Researchfish. Thanks! Roger (Dodger67) (talk) 11:08, 15 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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Hello, Mwmconnelly. You have new messages at In veritas's talk page.
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In veritas (talk) 15:11, 15 April 2016 (UTC) I confirm I have been directed and are expected to edit Wikipedia for Researchfish as an employee, to add the entry showing what Researchfish is. Mwmconnelly (talk) 15:22, 15 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, sorry for my late response, but I did not see your message because you did not ping me, leave a talkback template, or respond on my talk page. If you need to learn how to use those, respond here. You still have not complied with all the provisions of WP:PAID though, because you have not added the declaration to your main user page, and you have not added a template to the article talk page. If you need help, you can respond here. In veritas (talk) 02:11, 19 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Researchfish (April 16)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Ringbang was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Ringbang (talk) 17:07, 16 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Researchfish (April 21)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Ringbang was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

The comment the reviewer left was:

No significant changes.

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Ringbang (talk) 16:04, 21 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Researchfish (June 3)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by LaMona was:

You have to get rid of all of the promotional materials. E.g. the Kings College report says: "This report, commissioned by Researchfish" Also, when a customer copies FAQs, etc. to their web site (Alberta), that's not independent.

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LaMona (talk) 15:43, 3 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Researchfish (July 4)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Still not acceptable and will not be, until you remove contents such as that header box at the beginning and the "History" section. Remember that any advert-toned words are not acceptable at all, focus with only the basic information supported by in-depth third-party news sources overall, and please no press releases or trivial passing mentions.

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SwisterTwister talk 07:36, 4 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Researchfish (July 10)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Tseung Kwan O was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the general guideline on notability and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Tseung Kwan O Let's talk 21:43, 10 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Researchfish (September 11)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by CatcherStorm was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the general guideline on notability and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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CatcherStorm ^talk 18:51, 11 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Researchfish (November 3)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Timothyjosephwood was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Zero improvement compared to at least the last two times the draft was declined. Please do not resubmit without at least attempting to address the issues raised already by multiple reviewers.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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TimothyJosephWood 13:57, 3 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Researchfish (March 23)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Hermera34 was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Again, this fails to include valid sources that are independent and reliable to demonstrate notability. The two references added since it was declined in November 2016 don't support notability. Please review WP:SECONDARY and WP:SIGCOV for further guidance.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Hermera34 (talk) 17:15, 23 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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+== Your submission at [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|Articles for creation]]: [[Draft:Researchfish|Researchfish]] (March 23) ==
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