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I removed the statement that Patrick McCollum was the first Wiccan Chaplain recognized by the Government. Ed Fitch served as a special duty Chaplain while in the Air National Guard and Scott Russell served as a Chaplain for FEMA, responding to Ground Zero during the 9-11 attacks. Runeman11 03:53, 28 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Can someone write an opening paragraph on Patrick McCollum? It just launches right in. Alos i am removing the christianity portal tag, I dont know why it is here. Sephiroth storm (talk) 14:33, 24 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

List of Pagans page

I added a link to this article on the List of Pagans page, under Wiccans. Lily20 (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 18:38, 29 January 2010 (UTC).[reply]

Total ReWrite

This article needs wither a total rewrite or it needs to be deleted. It's so biased it's crazy. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 174.101.240.69 (talk) 09:56, 20 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Yes it reads like a self-promotional or fan piece. Much of it seems to be taken from http://www.patrickmccollum.org/ - which looks like a questionable self-published source. Chris Fynn (talk) 14:01, 19 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Much better now after NeilN's revisions.Chris Fynn (talk) 19:13, 19 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks Chris Fynn. Hopefully it stays that way. --NeilN ^{talk to me} 15:50, 29 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I agree, a rewrite is in order. I'm gathering refs for it. 15:31, 4 September 2018 (UTC)

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 ::Much better now after NeilN's revisions.[[User:CFynn|Chris Fynn]] ([[User talk:CFynn|talk]]) 19:13, 19 April 2014 (UTC)
 :::Thanks [[User:CFynn|Chris Fynn]]. Hopefully it stays that way. --[[User:NeilN|'''<font color="navy">Neil<font color="red">N</font></font>''']] <sup>''[[User talk:NeilN|<font color="blue">talk to me</font>]]''</sup> 15:50, 29 April 2014 (UTC)
+I agree, a rewrite is in order. I'm gathering refs for it. 15:31, 4 September 2018 (UTC)