User contributions for Mcvoorhis
A user with 99 edits. Account created on 5 January 2007.
5 March 2019
- 23:5923:59, 5 March 2019 diff hist −3 m Beer →Health effects: tiny edit. Removed an "and" before an item not final in a list.
12 January 2019
- 02:3002:30, 12 January 2019 diff hist +4 m Litmus (Battlestar Galactica) →On Caprica: Alter sentence to avoid ambiguity. Sharon does not observe that Helo is with Doral and number six. Sharon is WITH Doral and number six, observing Helo. In the prior sentence, the grouping of the observers is unclear.
17 November 2018
- 13:5113:51, 17 November 2018 diff hist +87 m Venetian glass →History of Murano Glassmaking: Add pointer to Wurttemburg as it is a prominent feature of the photo. Probably not the best place to place such addenda as it distracts from the main subject (Venetian glass).
14 October 2018
- 13:4613:46, 14 October 2018 diff hist −10 m Somerset Club Re-arrange section on Union Club; previous version's "it" seemed ambiguous.
16 July 2018
10 July 2018
- 01:3601:36, 10 July 2018 diff hist −9 m Modified racing Repaired broken "SK Modified" link to the Stafford Motor Speedway webpage; I am ASSuming that the story was merely relocated and that the story contains the same content as it did before. The Author has not changed.
1 March 2018
- 12:3712:37, 1 March 2018 diff hist +32 m Deer hunting Try to clean up language referring to "you" and "your" (2nd person pronouns), making descriptions more generic
25 February 2018
- 23:4023:40, 25 February 2018 diff hist +74 m Tucker & Dale vs. Evil Tried to clean up the plot summary a bit.
15 October 2017
- 13:3013:30, 15 October 2017 diff hist +7 m Meursault wine Very slight cleanup of the first three paragraphs. No added content or data.
10 April 2017
- 23:4823:48, 10 April 2017 diff hist +153 m Anatomical terminology Tag confusing skiing-example in pronation description.
17 January 2017
- 12:1112:11, 17 January 2017 diff hist −58 m Villa of the Mysteries Many bodies found ... where? 2000 people died ... where? In this villa? The whole population of Pompeii was supposedly 11k, so I find it unlikely that 2000 bodies were found here. This sentence adds no information to the article, so I'm removing it.
17 December 2016
- 23:2323:23, 17 December 2016 diff hist +4 m Talk:Alternative wine closure fix spellings since I don't know how to type.
- 23:2223:22, 17 December 2016 diff hist +925 Talk:Alternative wine closure →Vino-Seal and Vinolok -- same thing?: new section
23 March 2016
- 14:5514:55, 23 March 2016 diff hist +578 m Talk:Atacama Desert →Driest place?: "eagle" reference at beginning of "aridity" section ... mistake?
27 February 2016
- 23:2423:24, 27 February 2016 diff hist +31 m Ravens of the Tower of London Replace dead 'guardians of the tower' link with a live one from the same site, it appears that the new link has the same content as the old.
21 February 2016
- 15:5015:50, 21 February 2016 diff hist −3 m Garrigue Fix silly extra = and spaces bracketing "References"
29 January 2016
- 19:2819:28, 29 January 2016 diff hist +19 m Buffalo Wild Wings add link from Sally J Smith (the CEO of BWW) to the Wiki article on her.
19 August 2015
- 23:3923:39, 19 August 2015 diff hist +5 m Rich Dad Poor Dad →Reception: fix English usage
15 February 2015
- 14:0014:00, 15 February 2015 diff hist +180 m Viggo Mortensen Added ref for VM's Miami Vice casting to replace "citation needed."
31 December 2014
- 14:3714:37, 31 December 2014 diff hist +787 m Talk:Operation Eagle Claw →Coordinate error
7 November 2014
- 01:5701:57, 7 November 2014 diff hist −6,449 David Rothkopf Ah, I see, someone probably pasted a bunch of the article into the editing window? Nuked a bunch of stuff AFTER the reflist and up to the "external links." This should make editing the content of the article less ambiguous in the future?
- 01:5401:54, 7 November 2014 diff hist +2 m David Rothkopf Fix formatting of "References" header. I question the usefulness of footnote 12 or its placement in the article, at least.
5 November 2014
- 02:0702:07, 5 November 2014 diff hist +1 m Jerome Wheelock fix a presumed misspelling on --> one
28 June 2014
- 23:1123:11, 28 June 2014 diff hist +43 Phlox stolonifera →Gallery: add photo of creeping phlox blossoms
24 June 2014
- 00:4000:40, 24 June 2014 diff hist −5 m Wilburton Inn Repair pointer to Wilburton Inn about/history page.
28 January 2014
- 23:4423:44, 28 January 2014 diff hist +507 Talk:Trappist beer →Spencer Trappist Ale: new section
19 January 2014
- 16:4616:46, 19 January 2014 diff hist +4 m Three Days (Jane's Addiction song) Remove pronoun-ambiguity from a sentence.
12 January 2014
- 23:0223:02, 12 January 2014 diff hist +142 m Bond Street I added a pointer to a photo of the Churchill/FDR statue on Bond Street. I'm pretty sure I could have done a better job of this, especially as it should be an internal link, but I couldn't get it working and I've now spent too much time on it.....
9 November 2013
- 14:5114:51, 9 November 2013 diff hist +24 m Ronnie Van Zant add link to powderfinger song in Lynyrd Skynyrd section
14 August 2013
- 15:1115:11, 14 August 2013 diff hist +13 m Geography of Bolivia add text in 1st paragraph; it seems this text should be there.... maybe removed previously?
14 April 2013
- 17:2417:24, 14 April 2013 diff hist +4 m Hiccup add link to Peristalsis in initial article introduction...
18 February 2013
- 13:3513:35, 18 February 2013 diff hist +4 m Tasha Yar usage ... cleaning up a strange sentence.
2 February 2013
- 23:5823:58, 2 February 2013 diff hist +3 m Neolithic Revolution →Subsequent revolutions: more english fixes...
- 23:5123:51, 2 February 2013 diff hist +5 m Neolithic Revolution →Domestication of animals in the Middle East: ... fix english...
- 22:2922:29, 2 February 2013 diff hist −5 m Murrah buffalo strange english usage "very used" ---> "used". Perhaps should be "often used" but since I don't know original intent I simply remove "very."
24 December 2012
- 14:1814:18, 24 December 2012 diff hist +26 m Quill Repair broken link for Supreme Court Hist. Society.
6 August 2012
- 23:2723:27, 6 August 2012 diff hist −1 Mars Reconnaissance Orbiter →Events and discoveries: spelling. "landing sight" --> "landing site"
26 June 2012
- 21:1221:12, 26 June 2012 diff hist 0 m .17 HMR clearly a 17hmr doesn't have the same casing as a 17hm2. I think this was a mistake, since hmr and hm2 *do* have the same bullet.
8 June 2012
- 15:0615:06, 8 June 2012 diff hist +51 m Talk:Turkey vulture →Images: replacement of existing wing spread TV picture.
- 15:0415:04, 8 June 2012 diff hist +7 m Turkey vulture New photo of T Vulture in "wing spread" stance.
6 May 2012
- 15:4515:45, 6 May 2012 diff hist +415 m Talk:Turkey vulture →Images: add pointer to new TV wing-drying photo.
17 March 2012
- 23:0023:00, 17 March 2012 diff hist −307 m Worcester Polytechnic Institute All fissionable material was removed from the ractor in Washburn in June/July of 2011. WPI Employees were sent an email on 29 July 2011 at 14:49.
22 February 2012
- 02:3502:35, 22 February 2012 diff hist −4 Romancing the Stone →Plot: "sailing boat" --> sailboat. This is a heavy-duty edit.
11 January 2012
- 03:3303:33, 11 January 2012 diff hist −1 m Titan (Varley novel) →Plot summary: fix spelling CHIRocco --> Cirocco
8 January 2012
- 13:5813:58, 8 January 2012 diff hist +4 m Malathion →Medical use: added link pointing to existing "pediculosis" page.
1 November 2011
- 02:2302:23, 1 November 2011 diff hist +2 m Kimagure Orange Road Add : to akane paragraph, repairing its indentation.
20 October 2011
- 23:2623:26, 20 October 2011 diff hist −1 m Misrata remove initial space in last paragraph of civil war text, so that the P is formatted correctly.
9 October 2011
- 00:0000:00, 9 October 2011 diff hist −1 m Bois des Îles →History: Russes wasn't th e1st woody fragrance, according to the Chanel Website it was Bois Des Iles. The sentence is in error..
