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Michigan task force:
- Michigan House launches safety task force after Oxford shooting. What it hopes to do The Detroit News
Oxford school to reopen:
- Students to slowly return to school after Oxford shooting AP News
Lawsuit:
- Oxford schools counselor says Fieger erroneously named him in lawsuits, getting death threats as a result MLive
- Fieger wants subpoena power to gain access to evidence in Oxford shooting for civil suit The Detroit News

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"Ethan Crumbley hoped that the shooting would “cause Biden to get impeached” according to an alleged diary entry." ^[1] ^[2]^[3]

Is this something that we should update on the right-side information bar? Im aware that its already in the Wikipedia page

^ "Ethan Crumbley planned Oxford school shooting 'to get Biden impeached'". The Independent. 19 May 2022.
^ Colton, Emma (19 May 2022). "Oxford shooting suspect Ethan Crumbley hoped massacre would get Biden impeached, records show". Fox News.
^ Alexander, Harriet (20 May 2022). "Michigan school shooter hoped the attack would spark Biden impeachment". Mail Online.

Semi-protected edit request on 7 March 2023

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Under 'Peretrator', 2nd paragraph, 1st sentence: Change: "Crumbley was born in Atlantic Beach, Florida, 15 miles (20 km) west of Jacksonville," to "Crumbley was born in Atlantic Beach, Florida, 15 miles (20 km) east of Jacksonville," (note: emphasis added to highlight the change for the editor. Final text should not be bold) 2001:18E8:2:106C:F000:0:0:577 (talk) 15:11, 7 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Done ಮಲ್ನಾಡಾಚ್ ಕೊಂಕ್ಣೊ (talk) 13:55, 8 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Why add date to the title unlike columbine or stoneman? DeadlyRagDoll (talk) 18:34, 1 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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Multiple police stations and school districts issued statements about the threats and actions that would be taken against the individuals who made them.

Change a single sentence to the sentence above. 73.167.238.120 (talk) 23:40, 4 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format and provide a reliable source if appropriate. The person who loves reading (talk) 23:59, 4 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Multiple police stations and school districts issued statements about the threats and actions that would be taken against individuals who make them.

Change the second sentence to the first sentence. 73.167.238.120 (talk) 00:56, 5 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Not done: please provide reliable sources that support the change you want to be made. The person who loves reading (talk) 00:59, 5 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I am requesting grammar changes, so I am unsure what reliable sources are needed. 73.167.238.120 (talk) 01:22, 5 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

In progress: An editor is implementing the requested edit. The person who loves reading (talk) 01:32, 5 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry about that. The person who loves reading (talk) 01:33, 5 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Done Thank you very much! Happy editing! The person who loves reading (talk) 01:34, 5 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

There is also a request that the word "the" come before the word "individuals." 73.167.238.120 (talk) 14:53, 5 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Done Thanks! The person who loves reading (talk) 14:55, 5 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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