Talk:Lauri Kristian Relander
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Criticism and neutral point of view
[edit]Is it just me or is this a really biased article? It seems almost as if it is an attack page because of the constant references to how seemingly bad Relander was as a president. I don't know anything about him other than that he was in the Handshake article so maybe he was "widely regarded" to be a bad president but it seems like those remarks should be confined into a Criticism section rather than all over the article. The other sections should be purely biographical. Here are some examples:
- "Opinion leaders could not take him seriously" is stated as fact and
- "Relander can not be considered a strong President" is an opinion and not helpful to the article.
- "Kallio did not talk straight to him and schemed behind [Relander's] back" is really informal language and it seems like there should be some sort of an [x] described their relationship with Kallio as etc.
- That he had "not enough common sense" is an opinion and stated as fact.
I would be bold and redo this whole article (or add a template) but in the meantime I was wondering if I could get some sort of consensus if we should put up an Unbalanced template or something of the sort. --- Mullafacation {talk page|user page} 17:45, 13 December 2021 (UTC)