Talk:Standing Up in the Milky Way

Standing Up in the Milky Way has been listed as one of the Media and drama good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Review: May 17, 2014. (Reviewed version).

A fact from Standing Up in the Milky Way appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 16 March 2014 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that the Cosmos: A Spacetime Odyssey episode "Standing Up in the Milky Way" was opened with a brief introduction by the President of the United States Barack Obama?

A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2014/March. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Standing Up in the Milky Way.

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Taylor Trescott (talk · contribs) 02:16, 19 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Think I'll review this one. Taylor Trescott - ^{my talk} + _{my edits} 02:16, 19 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Here goes:

Per WP:RS/IMDB, you should probably replace those cites to it, maybe to something like the episode's credits
Two DAB links that need fixing: Enterprise and National Geographic
After you've introduced Neil deGrasse Tyson, all following mentions of him should be just "Tyson"
I think you should mention the episode's ratings in the reception section
"and ready for shipment on June 29, 2014." -> "and is scheduled to be released on June 29, 2014" sounds better
You should mention Nicholson's 8.5 grade
"Positive review was also given by Slate journalist Phil Plait" Shouldn't there be an "a" before "Positive review"?

Looks ok. I'll put in on hold. Taylor Trescott - ^{my talk} + _{my edits} 18:03, 20 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Done. Phill24th (talk) 10:38, 21 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]

You think you could do anything about the IMDB cites? Otherwise looks good Taylor Trescott - ^{my talk} + _{my edits} 20:01, 21 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Yeah, OK. Working. Phill24th (talk) 07:19, 22 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed: Will that do? Phill24th (talk) 07:38, 22 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]