Talk:Battle of Plum Point Bend

Name

I recommend that the name of this article be changed to Battle of Plum Point Bend, which seems to be the consensus among historians writing about it, when they bother to name it at all.

Jack D. Coombe, Thunder along the Mississippi. calls it the "Battle of Plum Point." p. 124.

Gary D. Joiner, Mr. Lincoln's brown water navy, calls it the "Battle of Plum Point." p. 67.

Spencer C. Tucker, Blue and Gray navies, calls it the "Battle of Plum Point Bend."

John D. Milligan, Gunboats down the Mississippi, calls it the Battle of Plum Point Bend." pp.64ff.

Civil War naval chronology does not name the battle, but says only that it took place at Plum Point Bend. p. II-62.

Raimondo Luraghi, A history of the Confederate Navy, likewise writes only that it took place at Plum Point Bend. p. 169.

To defend the present name, I can find no sources other than Captain Walke's drawing that accompanies the article referring to it as the "Battle of Fort Pillow." PKKloeppel (talk) 13:43, 23 April 2008 (UTC)

Requested move

Battle of Fort Pillow (Naval) → Battle of Plum Point Bend — More widely-used name; see above —PKKloeppel (talk) 12:30, 24 April 2008 (UTC)

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GA Review

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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 06:49, 25 April 2023 (UTC)

I will take a look at this one. Zawed (talk) 06:49, 25 April 2023 (UTC)

Lead

• ...guarded by an ironclad be further...: is the "be" supposed to be there?
  • Rephrased. The grammar made sense in my mind, but that doesn't mean much
• Confederate vessels:...: I think the colon should be a comma?
  • Yes, corrected
• The Federal ironclads had lighter drafts than the Confederate vessels,...: I don't think lighter is quite right when referring to draft. Shallower would be better but that is used later in the sentence, so how about " The Federal ironclads had a reduced draft relative to the Confederate vessels,..."?
  • Actually, for this context, it generally works. For instance, the later tinclad warships were often known as "light drafts" because of their shallower drafts
    • Oh OK - I hadn't seen it expressed like that before. Zawed (talk) 04:17, 29 April 2023 (UTC)

Background

• In the first paragraph, the phrase "In February 1862" is used twice.
  • Fixed
• Captain Charles Henry Davis had taken command of the Federal squadron on May 9.: there is no antecedence for the squadron, was this the ships that ran past Island No. 10's defences or the naval ships of 12 April?
  • I've rejigged this section to clarify that the Fort Donelson, Island No. 10, and Fort Pillow Federal fleet is the same unit
• with the rest of his fleet upriver;...: suggest "with the rest of Davis's fleet upriver;"
  • I've rephrased this sentence, so the issue is no longer in question (this applied to both Davis and the prior commanding officer, so I have now named)

Battle

• ... fire another volley in the Confederate ship.: suggest " fire another volley into the Confederate ship."
  • Done
• ...; this time the fire came from Carondelet.: the "this time" seems unnecessary since the previous sentence already refers to Carondelet.
  • Done
• The Federal vessels had lighter drafts than...: same comment as the lead.
  • See reply above

Sources

• Sources appear reliable, the majority are university presses.
• I did a spot check based on the online source (cite 1); this checks out OK, AGF on the others.

Other stuff

• Image tags OK
• Dupelinks: 'Memphis, Tennessee', USS Benton, USS Pittsburgh, USS St Louis
  • Should be all resolved

I made a few little tweaks as I went through the article, but otherwise that's it for me. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 10:14, 28 April 2023 (UTC)

• • @Zawed: - All concerns have been actioned except for the light draft one, which I've posted a response to above. Hog Farm _Talk 03:15, 29 April 2023 (UTC)
    • This looks to be all in order, so am passing as GA as I believe that the article meets the necessary criteria. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 04:20, 29 April 2023 (UTC)

Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by Bruxton (talk) 13:39, 9 May 2023 (UTC)

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• ... that the casualties suffered at the battle of Plum Point Bend were very light given the amount of ordnance expended? Source: McCaul, Edward B., Jr (2014). To Retain Command of the Mississippi: The Civil War Naval Campaign for Memphis. Knoxville, Tennessee: University of Tennessee Press. ISBN 978-1-62190-135-8. Page 111
  • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Macks Creek Law
  • Comment: Additional hooks welcome

Improved to Good Article status by Hog Farm (talk) and Zawed (talk). Nominated by Onegreatjoke (talk) at 18:15, 5 May 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Battle of Plum Point Bend; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

• Article is long enough and was recently promoted to GA status. Article is well-sourced and neutrally written. Hook is interesting, short enough, and sourced with in-line citations. Source is off-line but accuracy is assumed in good faith. QPQ completed. Cbl62 (talk) 08:26, 8 May 2023 (UTC)

@Hog Farm, Onegreatjoke, Zawed, and Cbl62: My only question is whether the description needs quotes since it was stated by an individual. I am going to promote the hook but we can add the quotes later if needed. Bruxton (talk) 13:38, 9 May 2023 (UTC)