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Shipping discourse is currently a Culture, sociology and psychology good article nominee. Nominated by Generalissima (talk) (it/she) at 04:29, 1 April 2024 (UTC) An editor has indicated a willingness to review the article in accordance with the good article criteria. Further reviews are welcome from any editor who has not contributed significantly to this article (or nominated it), and can be added to the review page, but the decision whether or not to list the article as a good article should be left to the first reviewer. Short description: Debate over sexual content in fanfiction |
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A fact from Shipping discourse appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 16 April 2024 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
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Did you know nomination
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Hilst talk 14:16, 12 April 2024 (UTC)
- ... that a "pedophilic" relationship between two fictional adults led to an era of ship wars? Source: Urbańczyk, Agnieszka (2022). "Finding a Dead Dove in the Refrigerator. The Anti-Shippers' Call for Exclusion of Sensitive Content as a Means of Establishing Position in the Field of Fan Production". Przegląd Kulturoznawczy. 53 (3). doi:10.4467/20843860PK.22.027.16616., pp 413-414
Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 35 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 06:07, 1 April 2024 (UTC).
GA Review
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Nominator: Generalissima (talk · contribs) 04:29, 1 April 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Vortex3427 (talk · contribs) 11:58, 1 April 2024 (UTC)
- @Vortex3427: Pinging to check in! Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 03:33, 9 April 2024 (UTC)
- Asking for a second opinion here, due to reviewer absence and some revisions made since the review has been open. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 20:26, 2 May 2024 (UTC)
Got here from WP:DISCORD.
@Generalissima:
- Background
The term shipping [...] emerged [...] to refer to fans
That's "shippers". Needs to be rephrased "to refer to the fan practice" etc.- Ah yeah, good point. - G
- Link fandom.
- Done. -G
- For someone who's never heard of shipping before, it'd be good to specify that after the X-Files fandom it was used in a more general sense because the text doesn't point out the leap yet.
- Done. -G
period fanfiction websites alternatively alligned with either
What does period mean? Contemporary? Doesalternatively
need to be there, and maybe "aligned with both" instead.- Contemporary, but that's better here. And tweaked phrasing. -G
Many
Shippers.fans of particular pieces of media- Fair enough. - G
- Link
canon
to Canon (fiction).- Oh, didn't realize that existed. -G
Due to the intensity of emotional attachment to these pairings,
Because of this,- Oh yeah, I kinda already say that in the previous sentence. Ty. -G
- Can you elaborate on what
fandom spaces
means, exactly? I know the source doesn't really say, but it does describe Tumblr as animportant fandom space
- I feel like that doesn't need extra context to be understood to someone without context: I mention both fansites and large scale social media networks used by fans. Nevertheless, I tweaked the phrasing a little bit to make this more clear. - G
- The source doesn't say
The "destruction of LiveJournal"
butThe destruction of LiveJournal communities
, so it changes the meaning a little bit. Maybe just go with "This led to"? — Preceding unsigned comment added by WritingAboutCreepypastas (talk • contribs) 14:06, 10 April 2024 (UTC)- Changed to quote it more directly. - G
Sorry to butt in, but there is a {{citation needed}} and {{how}} tag on the page. These should be fixed before any possible GA promotion. In addition, the text was changed significantly (by another user) since the review started, so this may have to be taken into account too. Epicgenius (talk) 14:25, 16 April 2024 (UTC)
- @Epicgenius: @Vortex3427: I resolved both of these tags; the changes to the article are prose fixes though, so yeah we'll have to go back through that. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 15:17, 16 April 2024 (UTC)
- @Vortex3427: Just checking in. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 23:09, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
- Generalissima, please note that Vortex3427 may have opened the review, but has yet to post any actual review; the previous set of requests were by first-time GA reviewer WritingAboutCreepypastas. Vortex3427, if you aren't planning to return soon to conduct your GA review, it would be courteous to let Generalissima know that, so a new reviewer can formally be found. Many thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 23:01, 2 May 2024 (UTC)
- @BlueMoonset Ope. I didn't actually realize that, my apologies! Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 23:03, 2 May 2024 (UTC)
- (driveby comment) @BlueMoonset, WAC is the (poorly disclosed) LEGITSOCK of Vortex, per the small text on the bottom of the former's userpage. Queen of ♡ | Speak 01:19, 3 May 2024 (UTC)
- Generalissima, please note that Vortex3427 may have opened the review, but has yet to post any actual review; the previous set of requests were by first-time GA reviewer WritingAboutCreepypastas. Vortex3427, if you aren't planning to return soon to conduct your GA review, it would be courteous to let Generalissima know that, so a new reviewer can formally be found. Many thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 23:01, 2 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Vortex3427: Just checking in. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 23:09, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
- @Epicgenius: @Vortex3427: I resolved both of these tags; the changes to the article are prose fixes though, so yeah we'll have to go back through that. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 15:17, 16 April 2024 (UTC)
ZKang123 review
Rather interesting article to be on Wikipedia. Given I write fanfiction myself, let me look over.
Very well-written for such a topic on fandom culture, with adequate sourcing to academic commentary. Just a couple of proposed edits:
- "carefully distributed only within small cliques interested in the work." – "...interested in such works"
- Done. - G
- "allowed the free spread of work" – "allowed free distribution of works"
- Done. -G
- "the large websites still forced works" – "these websites..."
- Done. - G
- Might also add a news report of the Tumblr nsfw ban.
- I would like to, but none of the sources actually made an explicit connection to this, so I figure it could fall into synthy territory. - G
- "Antis have been described as "hybrids that exhibit traits of fans, anti-fans and anti-shippers."" – by who? The author of the source cited?
- Attributed quote in-text. - G
- "Inverted from anti-shipper" – would say "On the other hand"
- This is an etymological description; I made this more clear. -G
- Might remove "form a broad opposition to antis"
- "a 2013 survey revealed that only 38% of AO3 users were heterosexual, with more nonbinary users than men." – is it also possible to directly cite this 2013 survey in the article?
- The findings of the survey were posted on Tumblr, so I feel it's best to just stick to the academic source analyzing it. - G
- "has been described as a means to attack pro-shippers" – described by who?
- Attributed. - G
- I suggest having adequate in-text attribution when directly quoting academic material.
- Attributed or paraphrased direct quotes. -G
I think that's all for my side. Earwig shows no copyvio issues beyond lifted quotes. Putting GAN on hold.--ZKang123 (talk) 04:34, 4 May 2024 (UTC)
- @ZKang123: Okie-dokie artichokie. I think that's all of it! Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 15:23, 4 May 2024 (UTC)
- @ZKang123: I don't think you're really supposed to put a review that someone else has been working on on hold? Elli (talk | contribs) 04:50, 4 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Elli: oh shoot, because on the WP Discord Generalissima was asking for a second opinion and hence I offered my views. However, if the other reviewer has other comments, then eh... Shoot...--ZKang123 (talk) 04:56, 4 May 2024 (UTC)
Alright everything is adequately addressed. Passed. --ZKang123 (talk) 07:48, 5 May 2024 (UTC)
The article title: is it too generic, or is there a need for etymology?
This is an interesting article, but the direction it takes surprised me. With a title like "Shipping discourse" I expected an overview of discourse about "shipping" generally (i. e. of how people talk about shipping). However, this seems to be covering the history and academic interpretation of a very specific range of shipping discourse focused around certain kinds of content within certain communities (possibly even at a certain moment in time, i. e. 2010s onward). The redirect of "ship wars" to here is especially surprising, since if I wanted to read about "ship wars" I'd expect to read about the back and forth that happens as people propose and oppose certain fictional romantic pairings (Zutara versus Kataang for instance, to use Avatar: The Last Airbender as an example), rather than about this much more abstract level of discourse that's about the inclusion or exclusion of certain genres/ranges/kinds of content. This article seems to be covering example of discourses people have about shipping, but what I've read about this elsewhere doesn't seem to mean to give the impression that this is the entirety of shipping discourse, or discourse about shipping, or in other words general talking about shipping (i. e. Zutara versus Kataang could be another example of "shipping discourse" even though it's not part of this more abstract conversation).
I think the title of this article would be better if it was more specific (maybe "Pro-shipping and anti-shipping" or ", and I think "ship wars" should redirect to shipping (fandom). Alternatively, if this particular title and term is in fact specifically about this (is this in fact an emic term?), some sort of summarization of the etymology of it would be helpfu. Hydrangeans (she/her | talk | edits) 06:11, 13 April 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you for raising this point, it was something I really racked my head against titling this thing. Talking to a lot of people in fandom circles, this was the term that seemed to be the most common to refer to this particular debate. Pro-ship vs anti-ship debate would be an unambiguous title, but I think that "Shipping discourse" works in the sense that there isn't other notable discourses about shipping characters (AFAIK, of course). I'll try to add in some more stuff about the etymology; the specific use of the term discourse in Tumblr circles is very idiosyncratic and inscrutable. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 15:28, 13 April 2024 (UTC)
- If this is an emic and specific term and not an etic and generic term, an etymology section would help clear this up. I also notice that the term "shipping discourse" itself only appears once in the body paragraph, furthering the impression that it's a generic term invented for the Wikipedia article title rather than an emic term from the discourse itself.
"Shipping discourse" works in the sense that there isn't other notable discourses about shipping characters (AFAIK, of course)
—I suppose I would say that shipping itself is the most notable of all possible discourses about shipping characters, i. e. the discourse (i. e. talking/conversation) that fans have about the ships themselves (Zuatara or Kataang? Team Gale or Team Peeta? etc.), as opposed to this seemingly Tumblr/AO3-specific abstract-level conversation. Hydrangeans (she/her | talk | edits) 18:13, 14 April 2024 (UTC)
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