Talk:Transcendental Meditation

Summary of Research from the TMT article

Tijfo suggests that we include a summary of the most reputable reviews from the TMT article. This seems the logical thing to do. This should be a general principle that we maintain over time. Perhaps, the situation will change in the TMT article, reviews will be added, some will be considered obsolete and removed, etc. We would simply keep adjusting the TM article to the situation in the TMT article. One might disapprove the current situation about Research in the TMT article or disapprove the way the general principle is going to be applied, but I cannot see why one would disapprove the general principle itself. (I have not yet looked at the current situation concerning research in the TMT article, but it does not matter - I think we should apply this general principle.) Edith Sirius Lee (talk) 14:38, 7 December 2010 (UTC)

We have consensus on this talk page to include in this article only content that is summarized from its own article-suggestion #5. I don't see agreement to change that. Maybe I misunderstand the comment above.(olive (talk) 17:15, 7 December 2010 (UTC))

You did not express your concern explicitly, Olive, but from what I can guess, I would say that you have a good point! We should not directly summarize the most reputable reviews, but only the content of the TMT article, which is itself sourced in part in these reviews. It is a subtle distinction, but if we want to respect the consensus around suggestion #5, this is what we must do. Edith Sirius Lee (talk) 18:17, 7 December 2010 (UTC)

I also struck a sentence that could have been misinterpreted - of course, we will have to start from the TMT article to summarize it. Edith Sirius Lee (talk) 18:22, 7 December 2010 (UTC)

At the moment given the RfC we have agreement to include in this article only summaries form those topics which have their own articles. At this time that does not include the research. however there is also agreement to create an article on the TM research.(olive (talk) 23:32, 7 December 2010 (UTC))

Is your concern here only that we should not have a complete section to summarize the research topic or any other topic without its own detail article? Of course, a summary of the research topic would have to be a part of the section that summarizes the detail TMT article. Edith Sirius Lee (talk) 12:14, 10 December 2010 (UTC)

Back to suggestion #5 and the move of the three sections

As the previous thread implies, I believe that "discussion on Research is important" but, I propose that we move along with Will BeBack's last advice "we can resolve disputes as they come up." I disagree though with "no one disagrees with moving those sections". Doc James expressed a clear "oppose" to suggestion #5, explaining why he moved back these sections. SJ asked him what he suggests. I wrote "Let see what Doc James proposes", but he must be busy with other things - we did not hear from him about that. I also asked in the TMT article itself about moving these three sections, but all discussions stopped in the TMT article since Dec 3. So, I would not be comfortable with moving these three sections at this stage before we hear from others. I only meant that we should do it and don't see how someone can disagree. Edith Sirius Lee (talk) 10:00, 9 December 2010 (UTC)

Done.   Will Beback  talk  10:55, 9 December 2010 (UTC)

I applaud in one way, but would not have done it myself. I feel that we should wait longer for this kind of moves and favor careful and in depth discussions toward consensus in talk pages. However, now that this is done, I will be happy to get a consensus around that move, even if we did not have it before. Edith Sirius Lee (talk) 12:34, 9 December 2010 (UTC)

Renewed or new consensus around a TM article with only summaries

It appears that hidden behind an apparent consensus around suggestion #5, there were different viewpoints on what should be the summaries. This can easily be documented with diffs. So, I suggest that we confirm or obtain a consensus around the following: we move the three sections Theoretical concepts, Characterizations and Marketing in the TMT article, but then avoid any turmoil, do not include Research, Characterizations, Theoretical concepts, Marketing and any similar topic "without their own detail article" back into the summaries. At the same time that I propose this, I am aware that a completely different understanding of suggestion #5 emerged later on:

• The summaries will be done in accordance with the guideline [1].
• The TM article will contain only summaries of the three detail articles TM history, TM technique and TM movement together with its own Intro, References, External Links and Further Reading sections.
• The three sections Theoretical concepts, Characterizations and Marketing are moved in the TMT article.

I will be happy to join a consensus around that too. I can also accept a proposal that we do not try to get a consensus on what should be the summaries, that is, we do not fix any specific constraint, just move on and resolve specific disputes as they come up. We just need to agree on one direction, the latter proposal being the default. Edith Sirius Lee (talk) 16:57, 9 December 2010 (UTC)

To quote olive from just two days ago, "<Sigh>". Fladrif (talk) 17:29, 9 December 2010 (UTC)

I made some minimal change to my comment above, just changed the order - I was working on this before Fladrif's comment. It is not related to his comment. Edith Sirius Lee (talk) 18:12, 9 December 2010 (UTC)

@Fladrif, I think it is useful to acknowledge the different viewpoints on what should be the summaries. Looking back at the discussions in the last Rfc, I realize that, indeed, there was most likely a consensus around the "no turmoil" approach, the "keep it as it is" approach of suggestion #1, but only after having moved out the Characterizations, Theoretic concepts and Marketing sections. Is that the case? Edith Sirius Lee (talk) 18:22, 9 December 2010 (UTC)

Edith.To clarify: Your second point is not in suggestion #5. The other two points are procedural points and are not explicitly related to the suggestions laid out in the RfC.(olive (talk) 18:45, 9 December 2010 (UTC))

Thanks for clarifying Olive. Perhaps we can all move on to the editing of the articles based on the suggestion £5 now? --BwB (talk) 18:53, 9 December 2010 (UTC)

Great ! Is any topic "without its own detail article" excluded from the summaries? Was this the point that I misunderstood before? Sorry, if I did misunderstood it. Edith Sirius Lee (talk) 19:02, 9 December 2010 (UTC)

WP:lead violation

The following sentences violate WP:Lead. How do we proceed to respect it?

TM is one of the most widely practiced, and among the most widely researched meditation techniques. Independently done systematic reviews have not found health benefits for TM beyond relaxation or health education.

Edith Sirius Lee (talk) 19:17, 9 December 2010 (UTC)

Half of the discussion on this page seems to be about that sentence on research. It's not the most pressing issue. Why do you keep bringnig it up? 19:24, 9 December 2010 (UTC)

I thought a violation of WP:LEAD should be addressed. That's all. I thought it was helpful to bring this to the attention in the talk page. I agree there are other issues. We have to start somewhere. Edith Sirius Lee (talk) 19:33, 9 December 2010 (UTC)

Let's start somewhere else. If we're going to review the lead then let's review the whole thing, not a single sentence. However, the more logical thing would be to fix the summaries first. I had earlier suggested using the article intros as the basis for the summaries. Any opposition to that?   Will Beback  talk  19:47, 9 December 2010 (UTC)

Interesting, after your previous comment, I had exactly the same thought with regard to WP:LEAD: we should not focus only on that particular sentence. Let see what others think. Why do you want to fix the article. Who said it must be fixed? Suggestion #1 was to "keep it as it is" and suggestion #5 was only slightly different, it was not about fixing the whole article, all the summaries. Are you sure that you respect consensus here? Edith Sirius Lee (talk) 20:07, 9 December 2010 (UTC)

I don't understand you.   Will Beback  talk  01:22, 10 December 2010 (UTC)

The main point is that I prefer that we move ahead with proposition #5. The rest are details. Let us see what others have to say. Edith Sirius Lee (talk) 03:36, 10 December 2010 (UTC)

I thought the point of #5 was that we'd move the three section to TMT. What's left to do?   Will Beback  talk  03:54, 10 December 2010 (UTC)

Yes, I agree with Will. The next obvious step is to clean up what we have in place. Some combination of the summary in place now and the intro from each article represented? Is that what you're suggesting, Will? Once we have a solid, neutral, cleanly written article, we can move on deal with any further additions. My thoughts anyway.(olive (talk) 04:02, 10 December 2010 (UTC))

This is a very general statement. Hard to disagree with it. I should have realized that fixing or cleaning the article does not mean that we will violate the consensus on suggestion #5. Edith Sirius Lee (talk) 04:22, 10 December 2010 (UTC)

Intros should be good summaries, so we can minimze the editing and inevitable disputes by simply using the intro of the subsidary articles as the summaries. A little editing would be necessary to reduce redundant material, especially in the first sentences, but it could be minimal. It'll also be easy to keep the articles synchronized - changes to the child article intros can just be mirrored here.

There are threads at Talk:Transcendental Meditation technique and Talk:History of Transcendental Meditation regarding improvements to those intros. I suggest it might productive to fix those first, then copy them here, then re-write this intro as a top-level summary. Does that make sense?   Will Beback  talk  11:39, 10 December 2010 (UTC)

I am trying now to understand Olive's explanation of the consensus on suggestion #5:

I'm sorry I don't know how else to explain. The TM article can have a summary about TM technique because we have a TM technique article, but not a summary about TM characterizations because we don't have an article on TM characterization. (olive (talk) 19:18, 8 December 2010 (UTC))

TM characterizations is used as an example here by Olive. She says the same thing about the research topic. Doesn't the Intro include a summary of Research, Characterizations, etc. Edith Sirius Lee (talk) 12:04, 10 December 2010 (UTC)

The intro need to be rewritten, but a lot of work needs to be done elsewhere too. I'm suggesting fixing the foundations first. Or, as a wise man used to say, "water the root to get the fruit".   Will Beback  talk  12:32, 10 December 2010 (UTC)

I think the quote is "Water the root to enjoy the fruit". --BwB (talk) 12:48, 10 December 2010 (UTC)

Yes, and if we place it in its context, the "root" is whatever is within our brain or obtained through it that allows us to take decisions that are moral, useful, etc. I am not sure that Intros of articles fit that description.Edith Sirius Lee (talk) 15:53, 10 December 2010 (UTC)

While minimizing discussion seems a good idea, throwing out the summaries in place now doesn't. I'd like to see a combination of intro and present summary. I'm very busyt today but will draft a version tomorrow and post it here so everyone can look at it if that's ok.(olive (talk) 17:08, 10 December 2010 (UTC))

Not only OK, but thank you for all the work. I think it is a good way to proceed ahead. Edith Sirius Lee (talk) 17:52, 10 December 2010 (UTC)

Since the two of the intros are being re-written, any work synthesizing summaries based upon them will become obsolete quickly.   Will Beback  talk  23:09, 10 December 2010 (UTC)

Did I understand you to say we should use the intros to create the summaries? Is there a difference between using those very same intros, and combining them with the content now in the summaries. Same intros. Different use. Maybe I misunderstand what you're saying. And sorry, but I don't think your reason holds water. Articles are always being changed. I'll draft a version and of it changes the summary can be changed. We could be waiting around a long time for an article on Wikipedia in this area to remain unchanged.(olive (talk) 00:23, 11 December 2010 (UTC))

I've responded with an example below.   Will Beback  talk  09:30, 11 December 2010 (UTC)

Using intros for summaries

Intro from Transcendental Meditation movement

The Transcendental Meditation movement (also referred to as Transcendental Meditation (TM), "Maharishi's worldwide movement", and previously as "World Government")[1] is a world-wide organization founded by Maharishi Mahesh Yogi in the 1950s. It includes programs and organizations connected to the Transcendental Meditation technique, developed and or introduced by the founder.[2][3] Besides the TM technique proper, the TM movement also advocates the "advanced" TM-Sidhi program including "Yogic flying", Maharishi Vedic Science, Maharishi Vedic Medicine, Maharishi Sthapatya Veda, and other "technologies" and products.

Estimated to have tens of thousands of participants, with high estimates citing as many as several million,[4] the global organization also consists of close to 1,000 TM centers, and controls property assets of the order of USD 3.5 billion (1998 estimate).[5] Most Movement organizations have tax exempt status; others have operated for-profit.[6][7]

The movement has made unsuccessful attempts to attain political influence during the early 2000s, by means of its Natural Law Party in elections in various democracies, and by means of trying to attain sovereignty as a microstate for its Global Country of World Peace.

The TM movement has been described as a spiritual movement, as a new religious movement, and a "Neo-Hindu" sect.[8] It has been characterized as a religion, a cult, a charismatic movement, a "sect", "plastic export Hinduism", a progressive millennialism organization and a "multinational, capitalist, Vedantic Export Religion" in books and the mainstream press,[8][9] with concerns that the movement was being run to promote the Maharishi's personal interests.[10]

Other sources assert that TM is not a religion, but a meditation technique; and they hold that the TM movement is a spiritual organization, and not a religion or a cult.[11][12][13]Participation in TM programs at any level does not require one to hold or deny any specific religious beliefs; TM is practiced by people of many diverse religious affiliations, as well as atheists and agnostics.[14][15][16][17]

Current summary

The Transcendental meditation movement came out of the Spiritual Regeneration Movement (SRM) founded by the Maharishi in 1958. The SRM was incorporated as a religious organization, however, this wording was removed from the articles of incorporation in the 1970s in an effort to appeal to a more secular west.[4]

The Transcendental Meditation movement encompasses initiatives by Marishi Mahesh Yogi spanning multiple fields and across several continents. Sociologist J.R. Coplin says that TM is both a "private technique" and a "public ideology".[52]

The terms "Transcendental Meditation", "TM", and "Science of Creative Intelligence" are servicemarks owned by Maharishi Foundation Ltd., a UK non-profit organization.[53] These servicemarks have been sub-licensed to the Maharishi Vedic Education Development Corporation (MVED), an American non-profit, tax exempt organization which oversees teaching the Transcendental Meditation technique and related courses in the U.S.A.[54][55]

Two entities, the Maharishi School of Vedic Sciences-Minnesota (as a successor to the World Plan Executive Council)[56] in 1997 and the Maharishi Spiritual Center in 2001, were denied property tax exemptions as the educational activities of the organizations did not reach the ‘purely public charity’ threshold in one case, and did not involve the entire real estate in the other.[57]

Transcendental Meditation is taught in the United Kingdom by the Maharishi Foundation, a registered educational charity (number 270157).[58] TM is taught in South Africa by teachers registered with Maharishi Vedic Institute — a non-profit organisation, registration number 025-663-NPO.[59] In Australia TM is taught through the Maharishi's Global Administration through Natural Law Limited, which is registered as a non-profit educational institution.[60]

The Skeptics Dictionary refers to TM as a "spiritual business".[61] Edzard Ernst and Simon Singh note in their book Trick or Treatment that TM is part of a larger system of beliefs than other types of meditation, with strong religious associations.[62]

In 1992, a political party, the Natural Law Party (NLP) was founded based on the principles of TM.[4] Most of the party was disbanded by 2004.[4] NLP ran candidates in at least ten countries, including the United States, Canada, UK, several European countries, Israel and India, but rarely received more than a few percent of the vote. Candidates in Croatia and India did win seats for regional councils.

As we can see, these are totally different. Both could be improved by combining them into one good summary. My suggestion is to take good material from the current summary and integrate it into the TMM intro, then copy that integrated summary back here. That means we have one summary of the TMM, instead of two different ones. the same for the other child articles. Doing so minimizes the editing of the most contentious sections of articles on a contentious topic. If we have two separate summaries, then we need to have two separate discussions, doubling the effort for no reason. Is there a good reason why the summary here should be substantially different from the intro of the artuicle itself, other than a little redundant context info?   Will Beback  talk  09:29, 11 December 2010 (UTC)

No the intros should be ostensibly the same. --BwB (talk) 09:39, 11 December 2010 (UTC)

The two should be synchronized, but I don't think it matters how that's done. To start it would be fine to create one summary/lead and add it to both the lead of the daughter article and the summary article of the parent article, then allow it to expand from there as needed.(olive (talk) 19:23, 11 December 2010 (UTC))

Here's a version: Kind of bare bones. How is this? Too short, too long, not enough information. I'm not attached in anyway. Just seeing what everyone has in mind by posting something. I feel this is approachable for anyone wanting a little information. All of the trademark/tax stuff seems like too much detail and what the casual reader who only goes as far as the lead or a summary will get bogged down in. Comments needed and welcome.(olive (talk) 20:49, 11 December 2010 (UTC))

This discussion has been closed. Please do not modify it.
The following discussion has been closed. Please do not modify it.
First draft intro/summaryTranscendental Meditation movement: The Transcendental Meditation movement (also referred to as Transcendental Meditation (TM), "Maharishi's worldwide movement", and previously as "World Government")[1] is a world-wide organization founded by Maharishi Mahesh Yogi in the 1950s. It includes programs and organizations connected to the Transcendental Meditation technique, developed and or introduced by the founder including the "advanced" TM-Sidhi program that includes "Yogic flying. Estimated to have tens of thousands of participants, the global organization also consists of close to 1,000 TM centers, and controls property assets of the order of USD 3.5 billion (1998 estimate).[5] In 1992, a political party, the Natural Law Party (NLP) was founded based on the principles of TM.[4] Most of the party was disbanded by 2004.[4] NLP ran candidates in at least ten countries, including the United States, Canada, UK, several European countries, Israel and India, but rarely received more than a few percent of the vote. Candidates in Croatia and India did win seats for regional councils. The TM movement has been described as a spiritual movement, as a new religious movement, and a "Neo-Hindu" sect.[8] It has been characterized as a religion, a cult, a charismatic movement, and a "sect", a progressive millennialism organization and a "multinational, capitalist, Vedantic Export Religion" in books and the mainstream press,[8][9] with concerns that the movement was being run to promote the Maharishi's personal interests.[10] Other sources assert that TM is not a religion, but a meditation technique; and they hold that the TM movement is a spiritual organization, and not a religion or a cult.[11][12][13]Participation in TM programs at any level does not require one to hold or deny any specific religious beliefs; TM is practiced by people of many diverse religious affiliations, as well as atheists and agnostics.[14][15][16][17] I did take out "Neoplastic ... " whatever that was... if one source makes a comment I don't think it belongs in a lead...but again open to comments/suggestions.(olive (talk) 20:53, 11 December 2010 (UTC))

I'm not sure what is being proposed. If this is also suppose to be the intro of the TMM article then let's discuss it on that talk page instead of here.   Will Beback  talk  08:43, 12 December 2010 (UTC)

I've copied the main parts of the drafting thread to Talk:Transcendental Meditation movement#Proposed intro. I hope that's acceptable. Let's discuss it there and then copy the finished product into this article.   Will Beback  talk  12:45, 13 December 2010 (UTC)

Independently done systematic reviews

• While some independently done systematic reviews have not found health benefits ...others have found that the practice of Transcendental Meditation leads to lower blood pressure, decreased propensity towards addiction, and improved academic performance.

This is newly added material. I'm still tracking down some of these papers, which have incomplete citations, but the first one listed, is certainly not independently done. The authors are Robert H. Schneider, Charles N. Alexander, Frank Staggers, Maxwell Rainforth, John W. Salerno, Arthur Hartz, Stephen Arndt, Vernon A. Barnes, and Sanford I. Nidich. Most or all of those people are closely connected with TM. I am going to revert this addition on the assumption that the editor didn't know what is meant by "independently done systematic reviews". The material may be worth adding to the new TMR article if it complies with MEDRS.   Will Beback  talk  22:18, 16 December 2010 (UTC)

You're going to remove reliably sourced content?

This topic (independent) has come up again and again. Lets define "independently" done. And lets look at MEDRS. We are giving an overview of TM research not stating these are supporting studies for health benefits. The sentence in place before this was added is one that I have raised concerns about in the past, but always discussion was deflected elsewhere so we never quite got to it. It seems we have to deal with it now.

There are many reviews on TM.

So seems the discussion we have at hand has to deal with:

• Defining independent.
• MEDRS as per the lead.
• Dealing with the content of the sentence previously in place if necessary

This is the area I was in the process of filing a mediation for...Maybe we need help with this since these three points come up over and over with no resolution in sight.(olive (talk) 22:53, 16 December 2010 (UTC))

We could move it into a different sentence that contrasts independently done reviews with reviews conducted by TM researchers. But right now, the material mis-summarizes the sources by mislabeling them as independent. I found this:

• Alexander CN, Robinson P, Rainforth MV. Treating and preventing alcohol, nicotine, and drug abuse through Transcendental Meditation: a review and statistical meta-analysis. Alcoholism Treatment Quarterly 1994 11(1/2):13-87

Obviously, that isn't an independent review.   Will Beback  talk  23:03, 16 December 2010 (UTC)

• Nidich, S.I. et al. School effectiveness: Achievement gains at the Maharishi School of the Age of Enlightenment. Education 107: 49-54, 1986.
• Nidich, S.I. and Nidich, R.J. Increased academic achievement at Maharishi School of the Age of Enlightenment: A replication study. Education 109: 302-304, 1989.

These aren't independent and they don't even appear to be reviews. They are not included int he text of the article, so they do not belong in the intro. I suggest moving this discussion to the TMR talk page, where we can consider adding some of this material to that article.   Will Beback  talk  00:22, 17 December 2010 (UTC)

Seeing no other comments, I'll move this material and discussion to the TMR talk page.   Will Beback  talk  04:48, 17 December 2010 (UTC)

See Talk:Transcendental Meditation research#Other studies.   Will Beback  talk  05:04, 17 December 2010 (UTC)

Its probably a good idea to give others chance to respond. I'll continue the discussion on the concerns I have here. If Will wants to have another discussion ongoing on the TM research page that would be fine with me. I'll be able to comment later tomorrow.(olive (talk) 05:11, 17 December 2010 (UTC))

It seems logical to discuss research on the research talk page, but if you have a different perspective I'd be happy to hear it. I've invited the editor who added this to respond, but I'm not holding my breath.   Will Beback  talk  05:19, 17 December 2010 (UTC)

Bone of contention

• Independently done systematic reviews have not found health benefits for TM beyond relaxation or health education.

This text has been a bone of contention. With the reorganization of the article we no longer devote as much space to research, so this is more detail than we need here. I've moved it to the intro of the TMR. That's the logical place to thrash it out further. I've replaced with text based on the compromise language proposed by TimidGuy:

• The scientific research has been of uneven rigor and quality.

The whole intro will need to be re-written soon, so this is just a stopgap.   Will Beback  talk  06:18, 17 December 2010 (UTC)

Yes this covers it succinctly The first line covers it more succinctly. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 08:46, 18 December 2010 (UTC)

Good. Was this intentional?[2]   Will Beback  talk  09:09, 18 December 2010 (UTC)

Sorry I meant that the line above is a good summation of the research. Not sure why it was removed. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 09:24, 18 December 2010 (UTC)

I tried to explain my reasoning. I moved the first line to the Transcendental Meditation research intro and used briefer language, the second line, here. I'd thought that other editors would appreciate that but if no one prefers this we can undo the edits.   Will Beback  talk  09:46, 18 December 2010 (UTC)

(undent) if we think it is too long we could remove "and among the most widely researched meditation techniques" The volume of research does not matter as much as the conclusions of said research. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 10:08, 18 December 2010 (UTC)

"Widely researched" is a frequent assertion which appears in good sources. While we might argue about quantity versus quality, the quantity is an often-noted characteristic. Quality less so, but still significant.

Anyway, if no one endorses this change I'll revert my edits to both articles.   Will Beback  talk  11:02, 18 December 2010 (UTC)

I have no problem with leaving it in but if we all feel we need to cut stuff out there are many things that we should trim before the conclusions of a Cochrane review regarding the foundations of TM. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 11:12, 18 December 2010 (UTC)

That may be so. You haven't been active on this page recently so you may have missed some of the recent threads. I believe there's no major opposition to reworking this topic from the ground up, so to speak, by improving the sub-topic intros (especially TM research and TM history), then using those intros as the summaries here. The final step, presumably, would be to re-write this intro as a top-level summary. If we follow that plan then we'll be back here soon enough to discuss the intro. That's why I said that I was making a stopgap edit. No big deal. If it's not an improvement we can go back to what we had before.   Will Beback  talk  11:32, 18 December 2010 (UTC)

"foundation of TM"? I'm not sure what that means. At any rate, I'm not so comfortable with an edit made that unilaterally reverts another edit made with discussion. I'd suggest that if an editor is not part of a discussion that rather than trump the discussion of other editors with his own individual opinion he might comment and discuss first. Will's version was a compromised version of a sentence that is contentious. What Doc has readded misrepresents the sources, it ignores reviews and meta-anlayses that say the opposite, it ignores all of the research that uses comparators other than relaxation and health education, etc. It also selectively references just 3 of the 14 research reviews that are included in the article, and in general compromises the accuracy of the article. We need to deal with this sentence. We can't just ignore that kind of blatant inaccuracy(olive (talk) 16:02, 19 December 2010 (UTC))

The "independently done" sentence has been discussed extensively, and my edit was not, so if anything reverting back to the old version is more appropriate.   Will Beback  talk  01:19, 20 December 2010 (UTC)

I don't agree. If that were the case, then any time no matter the discussion another editor can come in ignore the discussion and whatever progress has been made towards collaboration and compromise and undo the time and efforts of other editors. How does that respect both those editors and that process. I won't revert Doc but I would ask him to consider what I'm saying.(olive (talk) 04:28, 20 December 2010 (UTC))

Olive, what discussion are you referring to? Where did we agree to the text I added? I don't see anyone endorsing my bold edit. You certainly didn't. The fact that it was reverted is part of BRD. I made the bold edit without prior discussion, Doc James reverted it, now we're discussing. Standard operating procedure.   Will Beback  talk  04:39, 20 December 2010 (UTC)

No, you're right. We didn't discuss this as a particular way of dealing with a long-held, contentious sentence. You made the edit and we moved immediately to another talk page. I assumed my lack of complaint and willingness to move on would be seen as agreement. If this was a first instance of this editor making edits no matter the discussion, I'd think less of it, but its not. However, lets move on. The sentence is a concern, and we will have to deal with it at some point soon. (olive (talk) 05:04, 20 December 2010 (UTC))

P.S. On a contentious article after an arbitration that cautioned all editors to behave in ways that are considered collaborative, I wonder how much WP:BOLD we should be practising.(olive (talk) 05:04, 20 December 2010 (UTC))

(undent)If people wish to suggest changes to the medical aspect of the article we should return back to a structured RfC similar to what we went through to generate the current summary of the literature. If someone does this they should also alert all the previous people who commented. I do not wish to read through everything here on an ongoing basis as much of it is unpleasant. Content is not to be decided by "the last person standing" Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 05:14, 20 December 2010 (UTC)

@James: I really don't understand what you're saying in some ways, but this I know. If you want to make substantial edits to a contentious article please take part in the discussion before you make those edits. Nobody likes to hash through each sentence word by word trying to find agreement. Sure its easier to just write your own version, insert it and walk away. We all would like to do that. But that's just not the way collaboration works. I really think that we can come to agreements/compromises on this material as long as no one short circuits the process of discussion. I realize that as an emergency doc you make unilateral decisions all of the time in order to save lives, and with little or no time to discuss things. This has to be more collaborative, and there is no rush or urgency. Anyway. I respect your background and the way you have to operate in your profession. Maybe give this a thought I've suggested mediations recently as a way to work though this sentence and the research . We've already had an RfC on it which was cut short.(olive (talk) 05:31, 20 December 2010 (UTC))