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1a. the prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct.
The article is well written, but I have three minor issues after I went through it. Firstly, be consistent with the format of dates (eg. "29 June" or "July 27"). Secondly, I suggest the usage of KPAF to describe the North Korea air force (eg. KPAF 1st Air Division) instead of "NK", because I noticed both were used at different parts of the article. Thirdly, I don't quite get this sentence: "Meanwhile, the 3rd Bombardment Group bombed targets around Seoul, seeking to slow the North Korean advance from the captured city." Are the North Koreans retreating?
Fixed all three issues. —Ed!(talk) 21:13, 5 September 2011 (UTC)
The first air-to-air and air-to-ground operations conducted by both sides were well covered, and the effectiveness of air operations in the early battles of the war were put into context without going into unnecessary detail. Well done.
Thanks for fixing the issues I've brought up. Consequently I will pass this article for GA because I can't spot any further problems, and I'm hoping to see similar air war articles in the future.Canpark (talk) 12:12, 6 September 2011 (UTC)
I have responded to your concerns. Thanks for your review. —Ed!(talk) 21:13, 5 September 2011 (UTC)