Talk:Azahriah

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Feedback from New Page Review process

I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Good start, of course it needs work. I'm marking as reviewed based on souring in the Hungarian article. Happy editing!

North8000 (talk) 14:56, 30 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Did you know nomination

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: rejected by reviewer, closed by Z1720 talk 15:36, 10 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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... that 22-year-old singer Azahriah is the first Hungarian artist to sell out Puskás Arena three consecutive times? Source: "Május 24–25–26-án Azahriah magyarként egyedülálló módon háromszor is megtölti a Puskás Arénát, ezzel pedig beírja magát a hazai zenetörténetbe." (Trans: Unparalleled, Azahriah will fill Puskás Arena three times, on 24, 25 and 25 May, writing himself into Hungarian music history). https://www.vg.hu/extra/2024/01/egyetlen-fellepese-lesz-azahriah-nak-a-tripla-puskas-koncert-elott-sopronban-talalkozhatnak-a-sztarral-a-rajongok
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- Comment: Significantly expanded from mere stub, based on Huwiki article, with sources.

5x expanded by Xia (talk) and Mikoczi (talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 5 past nominations.

Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.

Xia ^{talk to me} 18:48, 17 April 2024 (UTC).[reply]

(Another reviewer may review this for necessary as this is my first review of a DYK BTW so sorry if I am not the best.) First thing, you need to complete a QPQ, meaning that you have to review another DYK article. The second problem, has something to do with the dates. It is a mix of dmy and mdy and the article should use one of those date formats, preferably dmy because its in Europe but mdy is also acceptable. Plus per MOS:DATESNO, no comma (and no full stop) is used for dmy dates so should be 26 May 2024 rather than 26. May, 2024. I also think a little bit of copyediting is necessary. I have also made an alternative hook because otherwise it looks like he performed three times on unspecified days: ALT0a: that 22-year-old singer Azahriah is the first Hungarian artist to sell out Puskás Arena on three consecutive days? — Preceding unsigned comment added by JuniperChill (talk • contribs) 20:18, 24 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Xia and Mikoczi: Please address the above, including the QPQ. Z1720 (talk) 14:05, 2 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Possibly a moot point, but I would never ever have approved that hook in a month of Sundays, because not only are the dates are in the future and Co-op Live#Opening events and delays says there's no guarantee they will in fact go ahead, but I would question the interestingness of that hook to an audience who may not have heard of Puskás Arena.--Laun chba ller 21:23, 2 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I also think that given its name, people would think it is an arena when it is actually a stadion. Pretty much everyone knows the o2 and Manchester arena. JuniperChill (talk) 09:47, 3 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

After two weeks since I first reviewed this, I haven't seen anyone address the QPQ and the presentation of the article (ie, date format). No edits since 18 April, save one. JuniperChill (talk) 11:00, 8 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]