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Reviewer: Kyle Peake (talk · contribs) 06:03, 8 June 2020 (UTC)

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Big article, will start on it soon though. --Kyle Peake (talk) 06:03, 8 June 2020 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Use bullet points instead of flatlist in the infobox  Done removed the flatlist
• We do not note executive producers anymore after a discussion closed on this; also, there are too many named right now in general  Done Removed 4 producers who were less involved
• Remove wikilink on studio album  Done
• "the completion of her The Truth About Love album" → "the completion of The Truth About Love"  Done
• "Developed over a three-year period" → "Developing over a three-year period"  Done
• "a pop album, Beautiful Trauma also" → "a pop album, it also"  Done
• "Lyrically, the record primarily reflects" → "The lyrical content primarily reflects"  Done
• "The album received generally mixed" → "Beautiful Trauma received generally mixed"  Done
• "many of whom praised its overall production" → "many of whom praised the overall production"  Done
• "some thought the album was" → "some thought it was"  Done
• "questioning its originality" → "questioning the originality"  Done
• "Beautiful Trauma debuted at number one on the" → "The former debuted at number one on the"  Done
• Target platinum to RIAA certification  Done
• "after moving one million units" → "for sales of 1,000,000 certified units"  Done
• "reached number one in over ten countries" → "reached the summit in over 10 other countries," per MOS:NUM  Done
• "Australia, Canada, New Zealand, United Kingdom, and Switzerland, and top-ten" → "Australia, Canada, New Zealand, Switzerland, and the United Kingdom, and top 10"  Done
• "Beautiful Trauma was among the best-selling albums of 2017 and 2018" → "it was among the best-selling albums of 2017 as well as 2018"  Done
• "has sold over three million units worldwide" → "has sold over 3,000,000 units worldwide"  Done
• "as a lead single to commercial success" → "as the lead single from Beautiful Trauma to commercial success" with the wikilink added like here  Done
• "eight countries and peaking within the top-ten in a dozen others, while reaching number thirteen" → "8 countries and peaking within the top 10 in 12 others, while reaching number 13" since MOS:NUM says comparable values need to be consistent  Done
• "The second single from the album, the title track," → "The second single, the title track," with the appropriate target added  Done
• "performed moderately and reached top forty" → "was moderately successful and attained top 40"  Done
• "of over ten countries" → "of over 10 countries"  Done
• "had a limited release" → "had limited releases"  Done
• Sure you shouldn't mention the release months of the other three singles, since that is notable? But not exact date like the lead single.  Done Added months of release
• "which ran from March 2018 to November 2019 and grossed over $390 million" → "that ran from March 2018 to November 2019 and grossed over $390,000,000"  Done
• "Beautiful Trauma received two Grammy Award nominations for Best Pop Vocal Album and Best Pop Solo Performance for "What About Us" at the 60th and 61st ceremony." → "It received a Grammy nomination for Best Pop Vocal Album at the 60th ceremony, while "What About Us" was nominated for Best Pop Solo Performance at the [[61st Grammy Awards|61st ceremony]."  Done

Background

• "with approximately seven million copies sold worldwide" → "having sold approximately 7,000,000 copies worldwide"  Done
• "that Pink signed a new multi-album deal" → "that Pink had signed a new multi-album record deal"  Done
• "a collaborative album titled rose ave. with Canadian singer-songwriter Dallas Green under" → "a collaborative album titled rose ave., with Canadian singer-songwriter Dallas Green, under"  Done
• Mention that the release was in October 2014  Done
• "decided to take a break from" → "decided to take a hiatus from"  Done
• "However, during this time, she released some songs," → "However, she released some songs during the hiatus,"  Done
• "thirteenth season" → "13th season" and target to The Ellen DeGeneres Show (season 13)  Done
• "for the soundtrack of" → "that was featured on the soundtrack of"  Done
• "that she was in the writing process for" → "that she was going through the writing process for"  Done
• "through a post on her" → "via a post on her"  Done
• "about a potential release during the latter half" → "about a potential Pink release during the later half" or maybe even "second half"?  Done
• "pushed back to the following year" → "pushed back to 2017"  Done
• "child, a son, Jameson Moon Hart, on" → "child, a son named Jameson Moon Hart, on"  Done
• Can you mention that the nature of the music video was unknown at the time, since it otherwise sounds like one for the album rather than a song?

Kyle Peake, Should it be something like "The singer announced in July 2017 that she was filming a music video for an unknown song at that time"? – Gabrielflorin01 (talk) 16:31, 8 June 2020 (UTC)

Not exactly that but something similar; mention it was not a known song but "at that time" is probably not the best to be included here. --Kyle Peake (talk) 17:36, 8 June 2020 (UTC)

 Done Added "for an upcoming single", I think that should be enough to cover the unknown nature of the song. – Gabrielflorin01 (talk) 08:07, 9 June 2020 (UTC)

• "She later shared a video from the set" → "Pink later shared a recording from the set of the video"  Done

Writing and inspiration

• Img needs alt text  Done
• Add a ref to back up the main text's quote, also the text needs a fullstop at the end  Done
• "the longest Pink has ever worked" → "the longest that Pink has ever worked"  Done
• "except for dumb sad stuff."" → "except for dumb sad stuff"."  Done
• "she considered her career hiatus beneficial, helping" → "Pink considered her career hiatus beneficial, citing it as helping"  Done
• "During the break, the singer has" → "During the hiatus, the singer"  Done
• "saying that her main focus was" → "saying that the main focus was"  Done
• "honest as I could."" → "honest as I could"."  Done
• "the 2016 United States presidential election, and" → "the 2016 United States presidential election and"  Done
• Remove wikilink on cancer  Done
• "for Beautiful Trauma. The singer enlisted" → "for Beautiful Trauma, with the singer enlisting"  Done
• "longtime collaborators such as" → "longtime collaborators, such as"  Done
• "new project partners, including" → "new project partners like"  Done
• "A total of fifty songs were composed" → "A total of 50 songs were composed"  Done
• "development, one of them being" → "development, including"  Done
• "the song was inspired by the" → "the song took inspiration from the"  Done
• The target to Suffragette should be on "of the same name" instead  Done
• "was co-written and co-produced by" → "was written and produced by"  Done
• "Tobias Jesso Jr. at the Earthstar Creation Center," → "Tobias Jesso Jr., at the Earthstar Creation Center"  Done
• "The song was recorded" → "The track was recorded"  Done
• "while the singer was pregnant" → "while the former was pregnant" to not overuse "the singer"  Done
• "She also described the track" → "Pink described the track"  Done
• "done in my life" and credited Nina Simone" → "done in my life", and credited American singer Nina Simone"  Done
• "co-wrote "I Am Here" in Los Angeles with Billy Mann and Christian Medice" → "co-wrote "I Am Here" with Billy Mann and Christian Medice in Los Angeles"  Done
• "A year later, in July 2017, the singer contacted Mann" → "The following year, Pink contacted Mann in July"  Done
• Target to Gospel music on "gospel" instead  Done
• "The pair traveled to" → "The two of them traveled to"  Done
• "and held a recording session" → "and booked a recording session"  Done
• "Houser Audio with a thirty-piece choir" → "Houser Audio, with a 30 piece choir"  Done
• "was co-written by Pink, Max Martin, and Shellback" → "was written by Pink, Max Martin, and Shellback"  Done
• "him in which she confessed her love and admiration for him and asked" → "him, confessing her love and admiration for the rapper, and asking"  Done
• "About Eminem, she commented" → "Speaking of Eminem, she commented"  Done

Title and artwork

• Swap the order around since the artwork was revealed before she spoke about the title, and then retitle this section to Artwork and title  Done
• "see the good side of it" → "see the world's good side"  Done
• "natural disasters at every turn, [...] but" → "natural disasters at every turn". She continued, "but"  Done
• "The record's artwork was unveiled along" → "The artwork for Beautiful Trauma was unveiled simultaneously"  Done
• "Kurt Iswarienko, Pink is standing" → "Kurt Iswarienko, the cover art shows Pink standing"  Done
• Target hoop earrings to Earring  Done

Musical and lyrical interpretation

Overview

• "Lyrically, the record has an" → "Lyrically, the album has an"  Done
• "theme and addresses insecurities and imperfect relationships," → "theme, addressing insecurities and imperfect relationships,"  Done
• [10][37][38] should all be solely at the end of the sentence in this order  Done
• "while Rolling Stone wrote that" → "while Rolling Stone staff wrote that"  Done
• The info about pregnancy and vocal style changing is not backed up by the source  Done Added the correct source
• Target ballads to Sentimental ballad  Done

Song analysis

• Retitle to Songs analysis since it is more than one  Done
• Imgs need alt text  Done
• "co-wrote and co-produced" → "both co-wrote and co-produced"  Done
• Add ref(s) on the img main text to verify the information  Done
• "titular track "Beautiful Trauma" is" → "titular track, "Beautiful Trauma", is"  Done
• "song produced solely by" → "song that was produced solely by"  Done
• Target piano chords to Chord (music)  Done
• "troubled relationship compared to" → "troubled relationship and compare it to"  Done
• [27][44] should both be solely at the end of the sentence  Done
• "centered around subjects of" → "centered around the subjects of"  Done
• "pop rock number" → "pop rock track that was"  Done
• "inspired by Pink's difficulties faced in her relationship with her husband" → "inspired by the difficulties that Pink faced in her relationship with husband" since we obviously know that's her husband  Done
• Drowned In Sound should be Drowned in Sound instead  Done
• "between "Whatever You Want" and" → "between the track and"  Done
• "The album's lead single" → "The lead single from Beautiful Trauma" with the wikilink  Done
• "was co-written by Pink, Johnny McDaid," → "was written by Pink, McDaid," since you have already identified him by full name  Done
• "was handled by the latter" → "was handled by the latter of the three"  Done
• Sources do not say anything about four on the floor? → Source [42], the Billboard article, says "delivered over a dolorous 4/4 pulse" – Gabrielflorin01 (talk) 17:52, 8 June 2020 (UTC)

My bad, I didn't understand that initially sorry, I see it now. --Kyle Peake (talk) 20:11, 8 June 2020 (UTC)

• "Its political lyrics" → "The political lyrics" with the target fixed as suggested too  Done
• "is a piano ballad deemed as an" → "is a piano ballad, deemed as an"  Done
• "of growing up and longing for" → "of growing up while longing for"  Done
• [35][36] should both be solely at the end of the sentence  Done
• Wikilink guitar to itself  Done
• Remove target on power ballad  Done
• "music with elements of" → "music, with elements of"  Done
• "was co-written by Pink and" → "was written by Pink and"  Done
• Target Michael Busbee to busbee  Done
• Target feminist to Feminism  Done
• "chant" which depicts women" → "chant" that depicts women"  Done
• [38][46][35] put in numerical order  Done

Release and promotion

Live performances

• "to promote the album's release" → "to promote the release of Beautiful Trauma"  Done
• Remove wikilink on Germany  Done
• "She was a headliner of the V Festival" → "During Pink's headline set at the V Festival that year"  Done
• "she performed "What About Us"" → "she performed the song"  Done
• "and sang "What About Us" as" → "and sang the song as"  Done
• "at The Theater at" → "at The Theater of"  Done
• Target Ace Hotel to Ace Hotel Los Angeles  Done
• "premiering tracks from Beautiful Trauma to" → "premiering tracks from the album to"  Done
• Remove wikilink on The Ellen DeGeneres Show  Done
• "during the same day" → "that same day"  Done
• "Pink performed on BBC Radio 1's Live Lounge "What About Us"," → "Pink performed the song for BBC Radio 1's Live Lounge,"  Done
• Put release years of the other songs in this sentence in brackets for each respective song
• Target singles to Single (music)  Done
• "her setlist included "What About Us"," → "the setlist included a performance of "What About Us"," to specify it was not cut from the ultimate setlist  Done
• "On September 22, 2017, Pink" → "On September 22 of that year, Pink"  Done
• Do not follow my advice for years in brackets in this sentence though, since there's too many songs to do it here
• Img needs alt text  Done
• Main text of the img needs a fullstop at the end  Done
• "with the release of the album" → "with the release of Beautiful Trauma"  Done
• "the singer partnered with" → "Pink partnered with"  Done
• "a short documentary which included" → "a short documentary that includes"  Done
• "interviewed and performed "What About Us" and "Beautiful Trauma" on Good Morning America" "interviewed on Good Morning America and also performed the two tracks"  Done
• "Pink performed at" → "Pink performed during"  Done
• "from the album" → "from Beautiful Trauma"  Done
• "Pink appeared" → "Pink appeared on"  Done
• "The singer also performed "Barbies"" → "The singer performed "Barbies""  Done
• "on November 8, 2017" → "on November 8 of that year"  Done
• Wikilink string quartet to itself  Done
• Wikilink Carpool Karaoke to itself  Done
• "segment singing her previous singles, along with" → "segment, singing her previous singles as well as"  Done
• Target JW Marriott Hotel to L.A. Live as this is the appropriate one in the Los Angeles context  Done
• "for a highly choreographed performance" → "for a heavily choreographed performance"  Done
• "was met with positive reception" → "was met with positive reviews from critics"  Done
• "of the night, adding, "what" → "of the night, with the staff adding that "what"  Done
• "by performing "What About Us" at" → "by performing "What About Us" for"  Done
• Place target to The X Factor (British series 14) on "fourteenth series" text only  Done I also corrected fourteenth series to 14th series – Gabrielflorin01 (talk) 19:35, 8 June 2020 (UTC)

Haha I should have spotted that, nice one! --Kyle Peake (talk) 20:11, 8 June 2020 (UTC)

• After you have done this, target The X Factor UK to The X Factor (British TV series)  Done
• Remove wikilink on France  Done
• "at the Élysée Montmartre, in Paris, as" → "at the Élysée Montmartre in Paris as"  Done
• "where she gave an interview" → "where she was interviewed"  Done
• "the video for "Wild Hearts Can't Be Broken" finds" → "the accompanying music video sees"  Done
• "in a barren room with a white tank top" → "in a barren room, wearing a white tank top"  Done
• Wikilink USA Today to itself  Done
• "called it "stunning"," → "called the visual "stunning","  Done

Singles

• "was released as the album's lead single" → "was released as the lead single from Beautiful Trauma" with the wikilink removed  Done
• Target music critics to Music journalism  Done
• "who praised its lyrical content and production" → "who praised the lyrical content and production"  Done
• "topping the national charts of eight countries" → "topping the national charts of 8 countries"  Done
• "within the top-ten in a dozen others" → "within the top 10 in 12 others"  Done
• "In the United States, "What About Us" peaked at number thirteen" → "In the US, "What About Us" peaked at number 13"  Done
• Platinum should not be capitalised and target platinum to RIAA certification  Done
• "signifying sales of 1,000,000 copies" → "signifying sales of 1,000,000 certified units"  Done
• Remove wikilink on music video  Done
• "Georgia Hudson and choreographed" → "Georgia Hudson, and choreographed"  Done
• "RJ Durell (known collectively as the GoldenBoyz), was" → "RJ Durell, known collectively as the GoldenBoyz, was"  Done
• "and unheard people who unite" → "and unheard people uniting"  Done
• "symbolizing harmony" → "symbolizing love" as that is backed up from ref(s) while harmony is not  Done
• "was planned to be the second single from" → "had been slated for release as the second single from"  Done
• [37] should solely be at the end of this sentence  Done
• [95][96][97] ditto for all in their sentence  Done
• "and was released to American" → "and was later released to US"  Done
• "on November 21, 2017 as the second official single" → "on November 21 of that year as the second single"  Done
• "portrays a married couple, Pink" → "portrays a married couple; Pink"  Done
• "doing daily routines and dancing" → "going through daily routines, and dancing"  Done
• "They open up to each other" → "The couple open up to each other"  Done
• "performed moderately on the charts" → "performed moderately on record charts"  Done
• "top forty positions in over ten countries" → "top 40 positions in over 10 countries"  Done
• "and the United Kingdom" → "and the UK"  Done
• Img needs alt text  Done
• Main text of the img needs a fullstop at the end  Done
• "clips from her performance at Super Bowl LII, and clips of her at the 2017 MTV Video Music Awards" → "clips from both her performance at Super Bowl LII and appearance at the 2017 MTV Video Music Awards"  Done
• "from the Apple Music documentary" → "from On The Record: P!nk - Beautiful Trauma" since otherwise makes for confusion when reading  Done
• "was sent to hot adult contemporary radio stations" → "was sent to US hot adult contemporary radio stations" with the appropriate wikilink since you can do that to redirects for sections/sub-sections  Done
• "peaked at number eleven and twenty-two, respectively, on the" → "peaked at number 11 and 22 on the US"  Done
• "charts from the United States" → "charts, respectively"  Done
• Are you sure "selected territories" shouldn't be a bit more specific? – I added Europe since the song impacted several European airplay charts. Gabrielflorin01 (talk) 20:02, 8 June 2020 (UTC)
• "The music video that accompanied the song" → "The music video for the song"  Done
• "Larn Poland and was shot" → "Larn Poland and shot"  Done
• Put target to Northbridge, Western Australia only on Northbridge and wikilink Western Australia to itself  Done
• ""Secrets" topped the Billboard Dance Club Songs ranking" → ""Secrets" topped the US Dance Club Songs chart"  Done
• "to achieve this feat, following" → "to achieve this feat, following on from"  Done

Tour

• "Pink announced on October 5, 2017, that she" → "Pink announced on October 5, 2017 that she"  Done
• "a second North American leg" → "a second North American leg of the tour,"  Done
• "In July of the same year" → "In October of the same year" since that's what the ref backs up  Done
• "was extended towards the next year" → "was extended towards 2019"  Done
• "89 in Nord America" → "89 in North America"  Done
• "27 in Europa, and one" → "27 in Europe, and 1"  Done
• "many praising the setlist" → "with many critics praising the setlist"  Done
• "the singer's vocals and aerial acrobatics" → "Pink's vocals as well as her aerial acrobatics"  Done
• "the eleventh highest-grossing tour of all time and the second" → "the eleventh highest-grossing tour of all time, and the second" to specify difference  Done
• "earning $397.3 million from over three million tickets" → "earning $397,300,000 from over 3,000,000 tickets"  Done

Critical reception

• Up to 10 reviews are allowed in the Album ratings box; more can be added that are notable, especially The Independent and make sure that they are ordered alphabetically; The Guardian should be before Idolator, for example  Done Added Drowned in Sound and PopMatters. – Gabrielflorin01 (talk) 20:58, 8 June 2020 (UTC)
• "received a generally mixed response from contemporary music critics" → "was met with generally mixed reviews from music critics" with no target  Done
• Target average to Weighted arithmetic mean  Done
• "Another music-aggregator AnyDecentMusic? gave Beautiful Trauma a score of 5.7 out of 10, based" → "Aggregator AnyDecentMusic? gave it 5.7 out of 10, based"  Done
• Remove wikilink on USA Today  Done
• "the stripped-back arrangements which emphasize" → "the "stripped-back arrangements" for emphasizing"  Done
• "pointing out the singer's consistency" → "pointing out Pink's consistency"  Done
• Remove the rating of Chuck Arnold from being in prose since it's cited in the ratings box  Done
• "sound and compared the theme" → "sound, and compared the theme"  Done
• "with Pink's previous album, The Truth About Love (2012)" → "with The Truth About Love"  Done
• "Jamie Otsa of Drowned in Sound praised" → "Otsa praised"  Done
• "and its wide array of influences" → "and wide array of influences"  Done
• "Billboard's Andrew Unterberger believed" → "Unterberger believed"  Done
• Remove The Independent rating from being written out in prose  Done
• "Likewise, Josh Hurst of Slant Magazine found" → "Likewise, Hurst found"  Done
• "Evan Sawdey of PopMatters was ambivalent toward the record's" → "Sawdey was ambivalent toward the album's"  Done
• "gave the album a mixed review" → "gave the album a somewhat mixed review"  Done

Accolades

• "ranked Beautiful Trauma at number 20" → "ranked the album at number 20"  Done
• "listed the record as the thirtieth best album of 2017" → "listed the album as the 13th best of 2017"  Done
• "has received nominations for" → "received nominations for"  Done
• "the 61st Grammy Awards and" → "the 61st Grammy Awards, and"  Done
• "Beautiful Trauma was nominated for the" → "the album was nominated for the"  Done

Commercial performance

• "In the United States, the album debuted at number one on the" → "Beautiful Trauma debuted atop the US"  Done
• "moving 408,000 album-equivalent units" → "with sales of 408,000 album-equivalent units,"  Done
• "and becoming her second consecutive number one album in the country" → "and becoming Pink's second consecutive number one album on the chart"  Done
• "The album's sales were aided by her tour audience, the cost of the album" → "The sales were aided by her tour audience, with the cost of the album"  Done
• "and the album being redeemable" → "and Beautiful Trauma being redeemable"  Done
• Are you sure that the fact Swift surpassed this is notable? The term "acquired" is like stating "became" in the sense it doesn't imply that was the same forever.  Done Removed the Swift filler information. – Gabrielflorin01 (talk) 08:02, 9 June 2020 (UTC)
• "Furthermore, the album had" → "Furthermore, the former had"  Done
• "and also became her best" → "and also became Pink's best"  Done
• Remove the stats that follow per WP:CHARTS up until the "After selling 628,000 copies..." point  Done
• "in the country throughout 2017, Beautiful Trauma" → "in the US throughout 2017, Beautiful Trauma"  Done
• "In the week ending May 17, 2018" → "For the week ending May 17, 2018"  Done
• "vaulted from 83–2 on" → "rose 81 places from number 83 to number 2 on"  Done
• "selling 135,000 copies and 139,000 album-equivalent units" → "with sales of 139,000 units, including 135,000 copies"  Done
• "The album was certified" → "Beautiful Trauma was certified"  Done
• "by the Recording Industry Association of America (RIAA) for" → "by the RIAA for"  Done
• "Beautiful Trauma opened at number-one with" → "it opened at number one, with"  Done
• "opening week of the year at that time" → "opening week of 2017 at the time"  Done
• "after The Truth About Love (2012)" → "after The Truth About Love"  Done
• "the album topped the chart again" → "Beautiful Trauma topped the chart again"  Done
• "an additional 16,000 album-equivalent units" → "an additional 16,000 units"  Done
• "which denotes 160,000 units moved there" → "which denotes 160,000 units moved in that country"  Done
• "In the United Kingdom, Beautiful Trauma debuted" → "Beautiful Trauma debuted"  Done
• "UK Albums Chart with first-week sales" → "UK Albums Chart, with first-week sales"  Done
• "became her second number-one album in the nation after" → "became her second number one album in the UK, after"  Done
• "The record sold 372,000 copies" → "The former had sold 372,000 copies"  Done
• "finishing as the nation's highest-selling album" → "finishing as the country's highest-selling album"  Done
• "and has been certified platinum" → "and been certified platinum"  Done
• Mention how many sales/units the BPI certification entails  Done
• "the album reached the top of the charts" → "Beautiful Trauma reached the summit of the charts"  Done
• "as well as the top-ten in other nations" → "as well as the top 10 in other countries"  Done
• "In France, Beautiful Trauma debuted" → "In France, the album debuted"  Done
• "highest-charting record" → "highest-charting album"  Done
• "The album sales exceeded 100,000 units" → "The sales of Beautiful Trauma exceeded 100,000 units"  Done
• "The record sold 50,000 copies" → "Beautiful Trauma sold 50,000 copies"#  Done
• [156] should solely be at the end of the sentence with [157][158]  Done
• "at the top of the ARIA Albums Chart with" → "at the top of the ARIA Albums Chart, with"  Done
• "Its total sales in the country" → "The total sales in Australia"  Done
• "where it remained at number-one" → "where the album remained at number one"  Done
• "for more than one week after" → "for more than a week, after"  Done
• "number-one album by a female artist" → "number one album by a female artist in the country"  Done
• "finished as the second-highest" → "finished 2017 as the second-highest"  Done
• [161][162] should solely be at the end of the sentence with [163]  Done
• "In New Zealand, the record" → "In New Zealand, the album"  Done
• "it was the third and eight" → "Beautiful Trauma was the third and eighth"  Done
• "and had sold over three million units" → "and had sold over 3,000,000 units"  Done
• Nice edition for the worldwide stats, but by when "had" it sold that type of amount? – Added "by March 2019" since that's when the IFPI numbers came out. Gabrielflorin01 (talk) 08:02, 9 June 2020 (UTC)

Track listing

• Add "Credits adapted from liner notes" at the top of this section with the appropriate ref  Done
• Is Shellback not credited under his real name?

No. Shellback is credited on both writing and production only with his nickname. – Gabrielflorin01 (talk) 11:37, 9 June 2020 (UTC)

• Are you sure Mattman & Robin should be targeted for two members in a row under Writer(s)?  Done Removed the latter target. – Gabrielflorin01 (talk) 11:37, 9 June 2020 (UTC)
• Remove wikilink on busbee under Producer(s)  Done

Personnel

• Put (all tracks) after Pink's name  Done
• Remove wikilinks/targets on any personnel listed after Performers and musicians that have already been wikilinked to earlier in this section  Done
• What track(s) did Dave Kutch master?  Done Added mastering for the whole album. – Gabrielflorin01 (talk) 11:51, 9 June 2020 (UTC)

Kyle Peake Would it be a good idea to reassembly the whole section and turn, for example, "piano (5, 7), bass (5, 7), guitar (5, 7), keyboards (5, 7)" into "piano, bass, guitar, keyboards (tracks 5, 7)"? – Gabrielflorin01 (talk) 11:51, 9 June 2020 (UTC)

Yeah that idea would work, but for personnel that only had a number of their roles for certain tracks, write "*Jack Antonoff – background vocals (1), drums, guitars, bass, synths (1, 10), piano (10)" for example --Kyle Peake (talk) 20:21, 9 June 2020 (UTC)

Charts

Weekly charts

• Good

Year-end charts

• 2019 charts should be sortable like the other two  Done

Decade-end charts

• Good

Certifications

• Certification Table Bottom template should be different since it needs to explain the double-dagger as well  Done
• Are you sure Worldwide sales belongs here since there's no certification? If so, then add (IFPI) in brackets and why are two refs cited here?

There have to be two refs because one cites 2017 sales (1.8M) and the other 2018 sales (1.2M), bringing it to a total of 3M. – Gabrielflorin01 (talk) 12:07, 9 June 2020 (UTC)

Ah, now I understand you. --Kyle Peake (talk) 13:15, 9 June 2020 (UTC)

Release history

• Format → Format(s)  Done
• Shouldn't this be for Various instead of the United States, since the album was a worldwide smash?  Done

References

• Make sure all of these are archived by using the tool

Could you please add here the link to the tool? I don't think I know much about it. – Gabrielflorin01 (talk) 13:20, 9 June 2020 (UTC)

Go to View history and click on Fix dead links --Kyle Peake (talk) 13:23, 9 June 2020 (UTC)

• Copyvio score looks fine at 37.5%
• Cite AllMusic as publisher instead for ref 2 and authorlink Stephen Thomas Erlewine  Done
• Cite Digital Spy as publisher instead for ref 5  Done
• Ditto for refs 7, 77 and 79 but with no wikilink  Done
• Delete Billboard Staff from being cited for refs 8, 49, 76 and 134  Done
• Forbes is unreliable on ref 9 per WP:RSP so remove, and replace if possible  Done
• Cite Idolator as publisher instead for ref 12 and fix MOS:QWQ issues  Done
• Cite NME in the work/website parameter instead for ref 13  Done
• Just to note, when I make requests like the one above and italicise in my suggestions, I am not telling you to add italics but to replicate how this parameter looks.
• Cite ABC News as publisher instead for ref 14  Done
• Cite OnMilwaukee as publisher instead for ref 15  Done
• Change EarnTheNecklace.com to EarnTheNecklace for ref 16  Done
• Cite E! as publisher instead for ref 17  Done
• Cite Idolator as publisher instead for refs 18, 60, 63 and 126  Done
• Cite RCA Records as publisher instead for ref 24 and fix MOS:QWQ issues  Done
• Remove wikilink to RCA Records on ref 26  Done
• Target Vulture to Vulture.com instead on ref 34  Done
• Cite AllMusic as the sole publisher for ref 35, with no wikilink, and remove All Media Network altogether as well as the authorlink  Done
• Wikilink Financial Times on ref 41  Done
• Cite CBS News as publisher instead on ref 48  Done
• Remove wikilink to Financial Times on ref 51  Done
• Cite MTV as publisher instead for ref 53  Done
• For refs 56 and 68, are you sure Instagram is reliable?

I removed ref 56 since it wasn't necessary, but I couldn't find anything about the Jimmy Kimmel performance except for the Instagram post. – Gabrielflorin01 (talk) 17:38, 9 June 2020 (UTC)

That should be fine, since it's her official Insta. --Kyle Peake (talk) 20:21, 9 June 2020 (UTC)

• Cite BBC as publisher instead for ref 59  Done
• MOS:QWQ issues with ref 65  Done
• Cite NME instead for refs 71 and 116  Done
• Target Elle to Elle (magazine) on ref 75  Done
• Cite BBC as publisher instead for ref 78  Done
• Change SortirAParis.com to SortirAParis for ref 80  Done
• MOS:QWQ issues with refs 81 and 83  Done
• Cite MTV as publisher instead for ref 86 and fix MOS:QWQ issues  Done
• Remove wikilinks on Billboard under ref 92, change Swiss Hitparade to publisher, wikilink to Official Charts Company and change the latter's title to Pink | full Official Chart History  Done
• Cite All Access as the publisher for 98 instead  Done
• MOS:QWQ issues with ref 99  Done
• Remove target on Elle for ref 100 and fix MOS:QWQ issues  Done
• MOS:QWQ issues with 101  Done
• Cite All Access as the publisher for ref 108  Done
• Cite iTunes Store (US) as publisher instead for ref 109 with the wikilink, plus remove the date parameter since that's the release date  Done
• Cite PR Newswire as publisher instead for ref 115 and fix MOS:CAPS issues  Done
• Cite The Boston Globe instead for ref 121  Done
• Cite Metacritic as publisher instead for 124 and delete CBS Interactive altogether, plus remove the date because reviews came in after then  Done
• Cite AnyDecentMusic? as publisher instead for 125 and remove the date per above  Done
• Cite ABC News as publisher instead for ref 129  Done
• Remove target on People for ref 131  Done
• Remove wikilink to The New York Times on ref 132  Done
• Are you sure ref 133 shouldn't cite Grammy instead?

I believe that Grammy refers strictly to the literal award and award show, while The Recording Academy seems more suitable since they make press releases and the members of the Academy vote for nominations. – Gabrielflorin01 (talk) 17:38, 9 June 2020 (UTC)

• Remove FYI Staff from refs 143 and 144, plus cite FYIMusicNews and as publisher instead  Done
• Cite Official Charts Company as publisher instead for ref 147 and remove the wikilink  Done
• Cite Official Charts Company as publisher instead for ref 148  Done
• Ref 149 is missing an accessdate  Done
• Cite Music Week as work/website instead for ref 150  Done
• Change Pure Charts in France to Pure Charts for ref 153, citing as publisher instead  Done
• Cite Aficia as publisher instead for ref 154  Done
• Change noise11 to Noise11 for ref 157, citing as publisher instead and with the appropriate target  Done
• Ditto for refs 158, 158 and 160, but with no targets  Done
• Cite Australian Recording Industry Association as publisher instead for ref 161  Done
• Remove wikilink on International Federation of the Phonographic Industry for ref 167  Done
• iTunes Store should be cited as publisher instead for citations under ref 168, with no wikilinks. Also, you should cite various countries since this album was a worldwide success; no more than 7 is advised though and put the national retailer in brackets; iTunes Store (US) for example. Remove Amazon.com from the title of that citation, do the same for United States and target the publisher Amazon.com to Amazon (company).  Done Added France, Germany, Italy, Spain and Sweden stores. – Gabrielflorin01 (talk) 17:38, 9 June 2020 (UTC)

The Amazon citation still needs fixing; remove United States from the location parameter since Amazon.com makes this obvious and wikilink the latter to Amazon (company) --Kyle Peake (talk) 20:21, 9 June 2020 (UTC)

@Kyle Peake:  Done Fixed everything. – Gabrielflorin01 (talk) 21:00, 9 June 2020 (UTC)

• Cite Tower Records Japan as publisher instead for ref 169 and target to Tower Records  Done
• Fix ref 174's accessdate  Done
• Cite Oricon as publisher instead for ref 183 and include the language parameter  Done
• How can ref 188 be accessed in 2015 when the album wasn't even released until 2017?  Done
• Change ref 195 to citing Hung Medien and as publisher instead  Done
• Cite Ultratop as publisher instead for refs 196, 197 and 218  Done
• Cite GFK Entertainment Charts as publisher instead for refs 201 and 211, with no wikilinks  Done
• Ref 202 doesn't lead directly to the year-end chart; insert a new URL that does instead and check it is archived properly once you have done that too  Done
• Ditto for refs 203 and 213 except they only need an archive, since Recorded Music NZ always has this issue with the year end charts  Done
• Cite Hung Medien as publisher instead for ref 204  Done
• Remove wikilink to Official Charts Company for ref 212  Done
• Cite Australia Recording Industry Association as the publisher for ref 219 and fix the acccessdate formatting  Done
• Cite Izvestia Music as publisher instead for ref 226  Done

Final comments and verdict

• Since this is a large article as I said before, I will be doing it in stages somewhat, but you can respond to any changes as soon as they are requested. --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:56, 8 June 2020 (UTC)

•  On hold for a week until these issues are fixed, since I think that will be enough time. Man, that was a long article! --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:52, 9 June 2020 (UTC)

@Kyle Peake: Hi! Thank you very much for dedicating your time and energy into reviewing this big article. I think I covered every suggestion and issue. Please let me know if I missed something or if there's anything else I can do. Greets; – Gabrielflorin01 (talk) 17:41, 9 June 2020 (UTC)

@Gabrielflorin01: So close, just respond to what I have said now and it should be fine. --Kyle Peake (talk) 20:21, 9 June 2020 (UTC)

✓ Pass, good work in such short time! --Kyle Peake (talk) 05:55, 10 June 2020 (UTC)