Talk:cê
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![]() | A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on May 23, 2008. The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that a Brazilian music expert noted Caetano Veloso's uncertain sexual orientation in his 2006 album cê? |
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[edit]This review is transcluded from Talk:Cê/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
- The non-inline cited reference at the bottom could go in its own section... perhaps have a ==References==, and then a ===Works cited=== and ===Footnotes=== or something like that...
- Split into ==Footnotes== and ==References==.
- I suck at writing leads. Have you tried to improve it since I worked on it?
- Seems pretty good to me...aren't you supposed to give me constructive criticism? :) Seriously, though, all I've changed is the sentence about critical commentary.
- Bah, I like reminding myself of my limits. dihydrogen monoxide (H2O) 00:58, 29 May 2008 (UTC)
- Seems pretty good to me...aren't you supposed to give me constructive criticism? :) Seriously, though, all I've changed is the sentence about critical commentary.
- "When he writes lyrics, Veloso typically uses the word você, but sings cê" - might want to make it more clear that he writes você by says cê (am I right?)... it's a bit awkward for now
- Smoothed out a bit, I think.
- "However, the inspiration for the album's title came when the musician physically wrote cê instead" - The however seems out of place, and this is a bit awkward in general...
- See above.
- "from nearly every critic reviewing it" - you only cite... two reviews, so it's a bit weird to say this...
- Ping? dihydrogen monoxide (H2O) 00:58, 29 May 2008 (UTC)
- See below. --Kakofonous (talk) 01:05, 29 May 2008 (UTC)
- Ping? dihydrogen monoxide (H2O) 00:58, 29 May 2008 (UTC)
- Could you use some more reviews from here? Even small snippets from stuff not linked would be cool, I guess... to give some more variety
- Took another New York Times review, plus Stylus Magazine and The Village Voice. That enough? :) --Kakofonous (talk) 22:14, 28 May 2008 (UTC)
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[edit]Please leave a note on my talk page when you're done with these comments. Cheers, dihydrogen monoxide (H2O) 12:02, 28 May 2008 (UTC)
- All looks good, so passed. dihydrogen monoxide (H2O) 01:22, 29 May 2008 (UTC)
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