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A portion of the copy from this page can also be found on the CSAC Web Site at www.csac.counties.org. It was used this page with the explicit consent of the Association's Director of Public Affairs & Member Services.

Reads like a PR piece

I added the {{Newsrelease}} template because the article reads pretty much like a PR piece, not an encyclopedia. For example:

"the issues that CSAC is confronting are enormous; their outcomes have the potential of permanently changing the landscape of California government"

"In Washington, D.C., CSAC has not only taken California’s message to Capitol Hill, but has also been influential in the development of the [National Association of Counties’ (NACo][5]. legislative platform."

"to offer municipal finance services to counties and to private entities that provide significant public benefit to the residents of counties."

"Throughout discussion on each of these key areas, CSAC has been – and will continue to be – the voice of California counties"

"Are enormous" "been influential" "significant public benefit." "Will continue to be" All peacock WP:PCK terms--and an unsubstantiated crystal ball predicton. And says who? Primary sources, i.e., the Association itself, aren't enough.Barte (talk) 20:33, 5 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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