Talk:California State Route 11

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 17:55, 24 April 2016 (UTC)

Hi! Happy to review. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 17:55, 24 April 2016 (UTC)

Nice article. Here are my comments:

  • Lead
  • "plan" looks a bit too repeated in the first few lines.
  • Don't say currently, say something like as of 2016.
  • I think it should be clear from the first line itself that the route is under construction.
  • Route description
  • Maybe History should precede this section? That's the order I have seen in similar articles.
  • I would say that 4 out of 5 actually have the History second, though both are valid per WP:USRD/STDS. --Rschen7754 05:57, 27 April 2016 (UTC)
  • You should know better about this. Do as you think best. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 12:06, 27 April 2016 (UTC)
  • State Route 11 (SR 11) is a state route in San Diego County Please mention this part as well when you begin with the main article.
  • In such a short article, I don't think this is necessary; it's in the lead, and in the Major intersections section. --Rschen7754 06:14, 27 April 2016 (UTC)
  • Reword currently as suggested above.
  • History:
  • The entire road could be complete by 2017 You mean "is expected to be complete by"? I think this fact is important enough to be mentioned in the lead.
  • Are all points in the table sourced?
    • Added references for the two that weren't. --Rschen7754 04:08, 29 April 2016 (UTC)

That should be it. I will return this weekend. I would be happy to promote this once the above points are addressed. Cheers, Sainsf <^>Feel at home 12:06, 27 April 2016 (UTC)

@Sainsf: all done. --Rschen7754 04:08, 29 April 2016 (UTC)
Thanks Rschen7754. I see no more issues with the article, really good work. This is promoted. Cheers! Sainsf <^>Feel at home 03:56, 30 April 2016 (UTC)