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Editing this Complex Sentence For Clarity

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I intend to edit this complex sentence for clarity

"In November 1964, Sigman was the secretary of the Allied Council of Senior Citizens of Wisconsin (a senior citizens' rights organization), attended the first meeting of that organization, in Milwaukee and spoke to the press.[5] "

Once edited, it will read

"Sigman served as secretary for the Allied Council of Senior Citizens of Wisconsin (a senior citizens' right organization) in November 1964, speaking to the press at the organization's first meeting In Milwaukee." Pamelawharmby (talk) 19:34, 15 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

These sentence edits have now been made--Pamelawharmby (talk) 19:40, 15 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]