Talk:Ed Massey

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Hello. To whoever added this comment about a close tie to the subject, what are you referring to? I have read over 50 articles about this artist, Ed Massey, and have carefully cited and linked every fact shared. Please be more specific rather than adding a generalized assertion. Please read all 50 articles before tagging the page for lack of neutrality. There is no conflict of interest here.

The text has been reviewed and edited, again, for neutrality.

Thank you. Vesta Sung Vestasung (talk) 00:30, 18 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I have cut about 40% of the material you added. You cannot source items to the article subject, as the article subject is not a reliable source! The puffery and exaggeration in your version of the article is massive. I encourage you to read WP:RS and WP:FIVEPILLARS. We endeavour to be neutral, not to promote subjects with puffery. I have cut the aritcle down to a reasonably neutral form. ThatMontrealIP (talk) 02:22, 18 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]