Talk:Fabrizia Ramondino

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I read phrases like "she intertwines them flawlessly into the culture of the cities her stories are set in". If this is a quote then it should have quote marks. If it is an original sentence then its bit too flowery for wiki. Is there a simpler and more direct way of saying that? e.g. her stories include the local culture. Victuallers (talk) 23:32, 24 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]

It is a nice article, so I just added wikilinks, quotations for the title of a piece of art, and fixed some grammar. Sarahmey (talk) 00:41, 26 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]