Talk:Flag of the Yakut Autonomous Soviet Socialist Republic

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Date	Process	Result
November 11, 2018	Featured article candidate	Not promoted

The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was archived by Ian Rose via FACBot (talk) 21:53, 11 November 2018 [1].

Flag of the Yakut Autonomous Soviet Socialist Republic

Nominator(s): Jeromi Mikhael (talk) 06:12, 11 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

This article is about the state flag of the Yakut ASSR. It has a lot of citations about the documents and laws.Jeromi Mikhael (talk) 06:12, 11 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Oppose. This isn't ready for FAC yet, so I suggest you withdraw and go through PR after having worked on it a little more. A quick list of problems for me that you need to work on outside FAC:

The lead is too short and does not cover the main points of the article;
The Background section is also too short - I'd expect to see a little more about where the region is, when it came into being, etc
There are several unsupported paragraphs or sentences;
The text needs working on. Problems include too many paras opening "On January 1, 2019..."; too many stubby one-sentence paras; too many grammatical errors ("The first constitution did not mentioned any design of flag" by way of example.

This needs quite a bit of work before it's ready for consideration. Cheers - SchroCat (talk) 06:42, 11 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Coord note -- I'm going to treat the nominator's removal of this page from the FAC list as a withdrawal, which I'll action shortly. After making improvements to the article, a Peer Review would be the next step before considering another FAC nomination. Pls note that per FAC instructions, you will need to refrain from re-nominating this article or nominating any other article for a minimum of two weeks. Tks/cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 21:51, 11 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Closing note: This candidate has been withdrawn, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please see WP:FAC/ar, and leave the {{featured article candidates}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. Ian Rose (talk) 21:53, 11 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.