Talk:Friedrich Karl Wilhelm, Fürst zu Hohenlohe

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I haven't found info on his family ...yet... but I'll keep looking. Auntieruth55 (talk) 19:10, 22 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

A couple of comments

I have done a quick review of the article and have a few suggestions/possible improvements:

the lead could be expanded a bit more to summarise the entire article;
the family section could also mention the subject's birth as currently it has only been mentioned in the lead;
should the Gates source (Citation # 6) be listed in the Bibliography?
is there anyway to align the promotion box so the text wraps around it? Currently it is causing quite a bit of whitespace;
in the Military office succession box at the bottom of the page there is nothing in the "Succeeded by" section, should there be?
in the last paragraph of the Action in the French Revolutionary Wars section there is a closed bracket ")" but no open bracket. Can you please add in the open bracket where required, or remove the closed bracket?

Anyway, that is it. Good work so far. — AustralianRupert (talk) 10:45, 29 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]