Talk:Gallaudet Eleven

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Make sure your sources are credible. I think an article like yours could certainly be used in some report about human experiments or something. So, do your best to give the best info, I believe in you.

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Coriolis[edit]

The section about the Coriolis Acceleration Platform repeats from the cited source that the room was "designed by French civil engineer Gaspart [sic] Coriolis".

Gaspard-Gustave de Coriolis was the 19th-century French engineer who mathematically formulated the Coriolis effect of rotating reference frames. In light of this, the chance that the Coriolis Acceleration Platform was designed by a French engineer named Gaspart Coriolis is exceedingly slim, so I have removed the claim.

The cited source in turn cites a 1964 Pensacola newspaper article regarding this. RHA Rao (talk) 16:38, 7 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]