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GA Review

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The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.


This review is transcluded from Talk:Greenwood railway station/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: Steelkamp (talk · contribs) 03:47, 25 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: 750h+ (talk · contribs) 04:26, 25 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]


Hi @Steelkamp: I'll take this since I've lived in Perth ever since!  750h+ | Talk  04:26, 25 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Nice! That's the quickest I've ever received a review. Steelkamp (talk) 04:28, 25 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Haha, I'll begin reviewing this shortly.  750h+ | Talk  04:30, 25 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

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  • After several promises by the state government during the 1990s to build the station, a A$6.8 million... It should be "an A$6.8", not "a A$6.8"
    • It should be "a A$6.8 million", because it is read out loud as "a six point eight million Australian dollar...
  • ...million contract was awarded to John... Is "awarded" the right word? Wouldn't "granted" sound better?
    • Awarded is a common term used in contracting, and the sources use that term. See Contract awarding also.
  • May just be personal preference, but wouldn't "five-minute frequency" and "fifteen-minute frequency" look better than "five minute frequency" and "fifteen minute frequency"
  • In the infobox, "Public Transport Authority" shouldn't be linked twice.
    • Removed one.

Those are my lead concerns, @Steelkamp:  750h+ | Talk  04:38, 25 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Description

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  • It consists of a series of bicycles which were... "Which" should be changed to "that".
    • Done.

No other problems.  750h+ | Talk  05:10, 25 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

History

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  • ...was extended north at a cost of $1.8 million... change "at a cost of" to "for" for conciseness.
    • Done.
  • Prior to the shelter extension... Change "Prior to" to "Before" for conciseness.
    • Done.
  • I don't think "shelted" is a real word. Maybe you meant "sheltered"?
    • Done.
  • Change "percent" to "per cent" (Australian English).
    • I believe either spelling is correct.

Nothing else from me.  750h+ | Talk  05:15, 25 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Services

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  • for a five minute frequency in total change five minute to five-minute, as said above.
    • Done.
  • From it's opening change "it's" to "its".
    • Done.

Image check

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Source check

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To start soon.

Verdict

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The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.