Talk:Inventory of Henry VIII of England

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Mil Hist Evaluation Commentary[edit]

I evaluated the article against the B-list criteria of the WP: Military History. Here are my comments:

  • Coverage and Accuracy: The article admits that it is not a comprehensive list, and without being more familiar with the Inventory, I didn't feel comfortable rating yes or no.
  • Grammar and Style: There are several relatively minor errors in spelling, conjugation, etc, probably mostly typos. However, in the Manuscripts section, the manuscripts in collections are referred to in a manner that assumes some a priori knowledge on the part of the reader.
  • Supporting materials: Not sure if an infobox is helpful here, but check other similar articles for precedent. A few photos would help, for example, of one of the castles, or example photos of one of the items listed.

Good luck. Boneyard90 (talk) 18:09, 1 January 2011 (UTC)

The article has come a long way. Re-assessed as B-class for WP:Military History.Boneyard90 (talk) 06:30, 21 May 2012 (UTC)