Talk:Joseph Jimenez

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Editing article for NPOV[edit]

Hi, I'm Katya – a social media manager at Novartis. I'm aware of WP:COI and thus would like to raise to the community some portions of this article that I think could be improved.

It looks like Section 3.1 was simply copied and pasted in its entirety from the article on Novartis.

I'm not sure if this section should be here, for a number of reasons. The duplication seems to be redundant (especially as there's an extensive record of this information on the main Novartis article). Also, most of these controversies happened before Joseph Jimenez became CEO in 2010. Some of them even happened before he joined Novartis in 2007.

The last part of this section (3.1.6) has actually been cut from the main Novartis article. The court case is ongoing, so there’s no solid story yet. In the interests of NPOV, wouldn’t it be better to wait until the case is settled one way or the other before writing about it?

Finally, the Conflicts and Criticisms section is much, much larger than the rest of the article. Doesn't this constitute Undue Weight?

For the reasons listed above I’d recommend to remove the section 3.1. Please let me know what you think. Katya Reck (talk) 14:57, 6 December 2013 (UTC)

Hello. OMG, the section 3.1 is so wrong here. You are absolutely right, I deleted it. Regards --KurtR (talk) 22:30, 26 December 2013 (UTC)